The Nols Warrior, Bro, But in Arknights

It's the big devil's lackey who's here😂 Don't you even remember your own name? I pity you😇 Go back to the tower, Ironclad warrior👿 I am an armored warrior and I want to sign a contract with the devil 😂 The guards of the river valley are all afraid 😍 I accidentally blew up all my teammates 😭

The language is relatively fluent, a little tainted with Riqing's word order, but not much, and it's acceptable. At least I can find the subject, predicate and object accurately, the sentence structure is complete, and different people speak slightly differently, which is commendable. Editor 2: I have read batch after batch of fanfics, and the most troublesome issue is the use of language. The order of the words is confusing, the words do not convey the meaning, the emotions are fragmented, complaining for the sake of complaining, embarrassing for the sake of embarrassing, the main line is unclear, and I write where I dreamed. Those things can get a score of 9 or above. I would say that this book has a score of 9.5. It is not an exaggeration. Use the building to curse those fanfics. I have always believed that fan fiction is articles first, and fan fiction second. The article must have the appearance of an article. If it fails to meet the basic requirements of word choice and sentence making, I won't be able to read it at all. There is no need to talk about whether it conforms to the original work or whether the research is strict or not.

After watching it, I don't have any major problems so far, but I watched it for the tower, and I was a little disappointed. The elements related to cards and relics accounted for less, the plot was not too flawed, and the emotional drama was dull. After reviewing the review, I suddenly felt that the book should be renamed "The Days I Was a Super Devil in Arknights". The spire elements are really so small that I feel that deleting them will not affect it.

This is a very promising Arknights second creation without using AI. It is really well written. Will the protagonist gain the card abilities of the other four in the future? I'm looking forward to it, after all, I remember an event where you can get other people's cards.

I said that the warrior brother starts with two, one bloodletting and one whirlwind, and then he positions himself in the campfire store and directly takes the x potion. Does anyone understand? [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's okay, but it's hard to accept that my identity was revealed too quickly to someone I just met a short time ago [Thinking]

Good job! Let me talk about the conclusion first. The plot of this book is exciting and the logic is self-consistent. It is a super book. Especially my fourth favorite Iron Armor Brother (Bushi) can also participate in the starring role. I hope the author will update it soon.

The card system is well done and not as abrupt as most of the Spire stories.

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Very nice, all good. The only problem is that the warrior brother does not have enough values. For me, it is time to go out and deal three cards to play chess, tighten it, and then the barrier is unstoppable, unwavering, the source of fire, shrugging the shoulders, shrugging the belly, and running over it all the way.