Arknights: Collecting Arknights Starting with the Elafian

In terms of plot, the early plot pace is slow, and the male protagonist lacks awareness of crisis in the early stage. When he arrived in a completely unfamiliar place, he was too immersed in the pastoral life of his small family. Even if he saw the villagers being forcibly taken away, he was basically indifferent. In addition, the previously mentioned slow pace made it a bit anxious for the brothers. It felt that the male protagonist's insensitivity was overstretched. However, this problem was alleviated after resisting the attack and the mine for the first time. However, the latest plot is a bit confusing in terms of narrative. Several scenes are interspersed back and forth. It is a bit easy to lose track of the timeline in King Crimson or if you are distracted by listening to the book. In terms of multiple female protagonists, currently the main storyline is the male protagonist and Xiaolu, but there are also preparations for multiple female protagonists. The disadvantage is that it is relatively slow to recruit girls. Currently, only Xiaolu has facts, and the others are considered ambiguous. The advantage is that the interaction between the female characters and the protagonist is quite good, and the interaction between the female characters is also within the scope of normal besties. There is no violation of the rules. People who don't like knotted wings can watch it. This is also the reason for giving it four stars. The essence is to watch more bg of the female protagonist. Ark fans naturally hope that intimate interactions and more writing will only exist between the female protagonists and the male protagonists, rather than the bad things between the female protagonists and the female protagonists and male operators. In this regard, the author's writing is quite appropriate, so I can give it four points.

The book is good, but I found three problems after reading this. First, the protagonist's combat power is too poor. Even a Terran can flatten and round him. There has been improvement in the latest chapters, but I can't see it yet. Second, there is a problem that has appeared in the first few pictures - the madness of wealth is exposed. The protagonist actively exposes his ability to create super crops to the Countess of Ursus without protecting himself or his family. Later, the pickets are also shown what the protagonist has created. Although the rifle has no ability to control the development of the situation and exposes its own value at will, although it will be taken seriously, the possibility of being controlled as a fantasy beast Palu in this continent is 99%. If there is no change, even if the author deliberately avoids writing it later, the perception will be very bad. Third, the protagonist trusts the businessman a little too much and directly tells him that he wants him to spy on the countess. If he is stabbed in the back, it will be another poisonous point. Finally, if no one sees this book review, then the author is covering his mouth. Comment completed. 🍉

The author has been immersed in the joy of small-scale peasant economy and cannot extricate himself. His survival depends entirely on the coincidence of the plot and the charity of others.

The author knows that in fact, as a newbie, you will have a lot of trouble when you first start writing books. After all, it is impossible to satisfy everyone. But don't be too anxious. Just because someone has negative reviews doesn't mean no one likes it anymore. Just understand where you are lacking and improve it. Even famous poets in ancient times could not write famous poems all at once. In the process of writing a book, you are actually growing up slowly. Even if the book does not work, it will one day become successful. Don't be afraid of bad reviews, and don't change settings too impatiently because of book reviews, because it is easy to change the content of the book. Enough said, keep working hard. Some people say that the first thing is good, but the middle part is also the same problem. Don't be too hasty to change the content you have set. When you are affected by negative emotions, your behavior will only become more and more impatient, and then the writing will become worse and worse.

I go, it's really beautiful, it makes my heart warm 😘😘😘. I've also been playing around the world recently, and it's a good combination. Boss, come on, 3.4 A day is not too little, 5.6 Is not too much, and 10 would be even better 😳😳😳

The feeling is good, but the author's rhythm seems not very stable, and there are some problems with the plot connection. There's not much else. The few Ark novels that don't involve bitterness and hatred are quite relaxing and slow-paced.

It is a very good book. There is no bitterness and hatred, and there is no trace of AI. It is well written. It is strange to say that I have read a few AI books before and found that AI books are very used to suppress emotions. The plots written are obviously hilarious, but they are very depressing and make me feel unhappy. On the contrary, many books written by hand have many sad things or various difficulties in the plot, but after reading it, they are very relaxed and humorous, which is very strange. Oh, by the way, I don't know if the author can read this book review. I would like to ask how the author plans to arrange system plug-ins for the protagonist. I asked the author before in the first chapter and said that he would write mods. I would like to ask what the scope of mods includes? After all, there are too many mods in Rim World. It seems that the only one that appears in the book now is Hand of God, but Hand of God is so unbelievable that I don't think it will come out in the later stages unless the author weakens it. Will writing mods include race mods? For example, let the protagonist summon Mirila, Mengyu, Ant Girl, Mouse Girl... Etc. It feels like it can indeed be written. I also really want to see the angels of Rutland and Mirila's mechanical angels collide, or the Priest Meng Yuan suppresses the old beast... It feels very interesting. In addition to race, there are also some mods that I feel the protagonist can consider getting now, such as the mine mod. I have written before that the protagonist lacks minerals at home, and I feel that he can use the mine mod to make up for it. I still hope that the author can write more mods. After all, the content of the original version of Rim World is actually quite ordinary. Unless it is the power armor in the later stage, the technology in the early stage is very mediocre. I don't know if there will be races like the aliens, machines, and Balrogs in the original version. 🤔

In fact, it is generally good, but there are too many things that have nothing to do with the main characters. Obviously, 500,000 words can be said a lot, but there is only a very small plot here. Frost Star's love line has not developed much from the beginning (bathroom) to the update to now. On the contrary, there are too many irrelevant things interspersed in the middle. In fact, it is acceptable for a single farmer in daily life, but there are too many other irrelevant little things, so that many of the main events in the middle are really confusing to me. It feels like it would take 1.5 Million words to write the emotional line of millet [Petrochemical]

The world system has already been overhauled, so why not let the system's masters work harder? For example, due to the distortion of time and space, a free-roaming chicken that should have descended to the ring world landed near the protagonist. Another example is that the caravans of various races in the ring world will come to the vicinity of the protagonist due to the distortion of time and space. After leaving, they will return to the ring world due to the distortion of time and space [laughter]

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