Dragon Raja: An Ordinary Person, but with a Little Alchemy

Okay, okay, my current impression of this book is okay Okay, I take back my previous sentence. The more I listened to it later, the more AI flavor I felt. A lot of descriptive words sounded too uncomfortable, and once they created that very exaggerated feeling, it made me feel so embarrassed. 😅

It has great potential. I like the feeling that the protagonist starts from scratch behind the scenes and is transformed by others. I hope it won't disappoint me in the future. Come on, author. If you write well, I'll give you a gift. Update once a day? Going to cut?

I dug mine three times at night and found out that I was not a woman, so I flew again. After the flight, it was already 5 a. M., So I went to bed again. When I woke up, I found that it was already 9 p. M. I looked at the phone and saw nothing. There were only pop-ups of some advertisements. I lay on the bed like mud and watched videos for a while. Finally I gave up. After brushing my teeth and washing my face, it was already 10:30. After that, I continued to watch videos on my phone and saw all the videos of big dog poop. I forwarded it to my friends. If I didn't take a shower at 11 o'clock, I would disturb the neighbors after midnight. After washing, I continued to share the big dog poop video. At twelve o'clock, I suddenly remembered that I hadn't eaten today. I fried an egg, cooked a bowl of noodles, finished washing the dishes, and sat in a chair for a while. Suddenly I thought, by the way, it's time to continue sharing the big dog poop video with my friends. I got thirsty and drank water. Why did it dawn? It turned out that I had endured it again, haha, but I didn't seem sleepy. Let's continue watching the big dog poop video. I fell asleep.

It's quite interesting, there are no flaws, but the plot goes by very quickly, and it still feels a bit fragmented. There is no dividing line or foreshadowing from one plot to another. It just keeps jumping around, but it's harmless. The most awkward thing for me is actually that the author doesn't like to write punctuation marks. Just like my book review, he doesn't add commas or periods when dividing paragraphs. Generally speaking, the writing is good. The last Dragon Clan fanfic I read was the one I started with, Lu Mingfei's Daily Super Powers.

Why not engage in electric brush EMC? . .

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. Overall, the big cup MC Equivalent Exchange and Dragon Clan's books are pretty good, a little bit fun. I didn't go to Kassel, took Ming Fei as my apprentice, founded my own organization (although there were not many natural people in the organization), and rescued the Old Tang brothers. Although it was a bit overwhelming, it's understandable. After all, I can't write without pressure, but I still hope it won't be too hard, and it's still fun. Overall, I give it a big shot. (PS: Can the author update more, it's not enough) (Also ps: Does the author have a group?)

This book is very good (≧∇≦*), it makes up for the original regrets But the update is too slow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I update it once a day and I don't know what I'm doing? ⊙_⊙

Maybe it's just that the protagonist's experience was not explained, and I feel that the protagonist grew up too fast. Lu Mingfei is the protagonist of Dragon Clan, but Silence is the protagonist of this book

The content is lighthearted and funny, a little dark and refreshing. My evaluation is that it is extremely interesting. Just keep it like this