Food Wars: From the Start, I Win Over the Haughty French Lady!

Keep it up, it's very well written. I originally thought the theme was very novel, but it turned out to be full of elements from MasterChef, and the most important part, the Autumn Selection Competition, was not written. Instead, they wrote about returning to China to participate in the "Hundred Chefs Competition".

Damn, this reminds me of that Food Fantasy story that cost me a thousand yuan back then. The stories of the Food Souls are quite interesting.

This is one of the better Food Soul fanfictions. The descriptions of the cooking process are very reasonable, and it made my mouth water [eye roll]. It's different from the traditional formulas I've read before; its strength lies in its novelty. The author must also be a cooking enthusiast, as the quality of the cooking scenes is noticeably higher. Overall, it has some flaws, but they don't detract from its overall excellence. It was a very enjoyable read in one go and is worth recommending.

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The writing style perfectly captures the tone of the original manga, truly befitting the original author's status as a "serious adult" writer. No wonder it's known as someone who went into adult entertainment with their very first "serious adult" work. The author still slacked off. Only a few dozen pages, and you're already using AI to cut corners? This has such a strong AI feel to it. Sigh, what a waste of such a good novel.

Overall, it flows smoothly and is watchable, though there's a lot of setup; it follows a straight main storyline. It seems to have an outline, so there's no need to worry about it deviating from the expected path. It's worth a look; I'd estimate a rating of around 7.5.

What am I looking at?

The author's writing is quite good, but there's a bit too little slice-of-life content. You could take your time and add more slice-of-life scenes. After all, no one can write perfectly all at once. You could add some when you have a sudden inspiration. Although some readers might not like it, it's a brave attempt to push your own boundaries.

Yes, it looks good 😆

The cooking is very interesting, but the pace is too fast. Perhaps you could slow it down and write more about daily life, especially when you're not cooking. Right now, it feels like you're just writing for the sake of cooking.