The Zhang Clan Member Who Emerged from the Southern Archives

Not bad! The male lead is handsome, strong, and tragically tragic. I hope he gets his Qilin tattoo done soon. A little angst is good for the soul, but too much is harmful! I quite like Zhang Haijin's character design, but I don't like ensemble casts. This book feels like it has several main characters, which is a bit painful for someone like me who prefers a single protagonist. It makes me lose the motivation to continue reading, and the male lead feels like just a supporting character.

It's really good, and the plot flows smoothly, but it would be even better if there were more scenes featuring the main characters. It feels like the current storyline mainly focuses on the Southern Archives. I want to know more about Hai Jin's story 🥺 The author writes really well, and I also really enjoy the storyline with Hai Yun.

It's really good! I think it would be great if Shrimp and Salt had more friends; the bond between Salt and Shrimp is really strong!

It's really good! I really like Zhang Haijin's personality, and he's also very strong in combat. He used to be all alone, but now he's surrounded by people. When Hai Jin was trapped in the Wang family's house, even though I knew Hai Lou and the others would come to rescue him, I still cried buckets the moment they freed him. That's the bond between comrades, isn't it? The ensemble cast was so wonderful! Actually, Hai Jin and Hai Yun are kind of a good couple 💕

To be honest, this book is very good, but since the main character is Zhang Haijin and the story revolves around him, the other characters have a lot of screen time, making the protagonist feel like a supporting character. The author has already written the epilogue, so it's hard to change things now. I hope the author will focus more on the protagonist and give him more screen time in future books. 💕

Dear author, I suggest you could write a second part, telling the story of the later adventures where the Iron Triangle and other characters meet (this is just a suggestion, please don't criticize).

It's really well-written! Finally, a systematic and normal story! I'm so touched.

The author should finish the Qilin tattoo soon; it just doesn't feel right without it. I also hope the protagonist's skills are improved.

The writing style is decent, but I feel the main character has too little screen time; I hope they'll add more of the main character's role.

It's really good! The author's writing is excellent, and the plot is also very engaging. *^O^*(﹡ˆᴗˆ﹡)♡♡♡