After An Lingrong Became Daiyu's Elder Sister

So far, it's pretty good and very interesting, especially the interaction between the people in the Jia family. It can be seen that a lot of care has been taken, and there is no drama. The overall writing style is very good. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot of entering the palace. I hope I don't have a good relationship with Shen Zhen, and can at most be just an ordinary acquaintance. It would be okay if it was the unreborn An Lingrong. Even if the reborn An Lingrong is happy in this life, he can't blow away the pain of his previous life as a gust of wind. The Zhen family's contempt, Huanbi's meanness, Chun'er's exclusion, Shen Meizhuang's contempt, Zhen Huan's laissez-faire, and so on. The two sisters were cheating on her, and Mother Lin was falsely accused by Shenmeizhuang of ominous charges (either dead or worse off than dead), and was treated like a plaything, An Bihuai, who was definitely corrupt but was probably a Pingjing Immortal, and An Lingrong herself, who was treated as the Pingding Immortal of Shenmeizhuang's full-term birth, there were really too many things that caused her pain. The warmth of this life allows her to face the pain of her previous life, to look at it rationally, and to analyze who is right and who is wrong. For example, in Xia Dongchun, although it was very insulting for her to make An Lingrong kneel down, this is a talent show, and the other party can understand no matter how angry she is. After all, the fate of the whole family hangs on this, and Xia Dongchun was also hit by a millionaire in her previous life, and this life has nothing to do with it. But if I want to write that Lin Anrong can continue to be friends with Zhen Huan's small group, as if they are friends, it may be very strange, so I want a reply from my wife, so I can read it with peace of mind.

There is no problem overall, the writing is very warm and beautiful, but some details make people anxious. I understand that the author wrote two books at the beginning, and the timeline will be biased, but no matter how biased it is, Tanchun is older than Baoyu, and the heroine said it when she was born, Lin Ruhai got his daughter at thirty-five, and then when the heroine was eight years old, it was written that Lin Ruhai was now thirty-five and Daiyu was born (the fact that Lin Ruhai got Daiyu at thirty-five is consistent with the original work. It should be that the author later realized this age, but forgot to change the first part). There is also Jia Zhu. In the first few chapters, it is written that he entered school at the age of 14 (this is the same as the original work). Later, it is written that he entered the school at the age of 16 and was admitted as a scholar at the age of 18. In fact, doesn't entering the school mean being admitted as a scholar? There is also the case where Jia Yucun came to hire a teacher. It was written that he was a civil servant and had been a prefect in the past. Jiayu Village should have been a juren when it was the Hulu Temple. Zhen Shiyin sponsored the Jinshi examination, and then became a prefect and was demoted. Otherwise, a juren would not be able to become a fourth-grade prefect even if he became an official. Overall, it's really good. I like it very much and will continue to follow it. However, these small details are really annoying. I hope the author can optimize these details. I understand that the integration of the two books will lead to deviations in the timeline. For example, Kangxi's southern tour again after deposing the crown prince is inconsistent with history. However, this is normal in literary creation. I personally think that these small details will not affect the integration of the timeline. I hope the author pays attention to it.

The writing is delicate and the plot is super coherent and beautiful. It can be concluded that it was not written by AI. The author's writing is very good. Many plot changes in the original drama "The Legend of Zhen Huan" can appear reasonably. It is really touching to see Rong Rong enter the palace as the daughter of the second-rank household minister, no need to worry about money, no need to worry about being looked down on because of her background, and her parents and younger siblings who love her. The fate of Daiyu in the Red Mansion and her parents and younger brother has been changed. Daiyu has family members who love her, and she has Rong Rong to take care of her even in the Jia Mansion. She will not feel like "three hundred and sixty days a year, wind, sword, frost and sword force each other". It is good to abandon the frontier of wood and stone because of the improvement of horizons. Jia Lian, Wang Xifeng and his family in the Jia Mansion should have a good ending. Come on! !

I highly recommend everyone to read this book. It cleverly combines "A Dream of Red Mansions" and "The Legend of Zhen Huan", and the overall logic is basically self-consistent, with almost no far-fetched separation, except for some minor flaws in the timeline. Especially the handling of the Jia family in the book, I think is very well grasped. I have read a lot of fan works about traveling into the Lin Mansion and trying to save Daiyu, and most of the stories lead to plots of revenge against the Jia family. But in the context of ancient times, revenge on one's maternal ancestors is something that is despised and does not conform to the logic of ancient people. In ancient times, in-law relationships were deeply intertwined, and society placed special emphasis on family ties and the dignity of in-laws. If a person stood by and ignored his maternal grandfather's family, or even added insult to injury, in the world at that time, he would definitely be criticized and despised by the world. Machiavellian strategies without human feelings are destined to be difficult to last for a long time. This sentence has been applicable throughout the ages. The Jia family is indeed riddled with ills, and we should put things right and rectify the long-standing shortcomings rather than abandoning the entire family directly. In addition, the plot creation after the heroine enters the palace is also brilliant. She sits firmly on the outside and sits alone on the Diaoyutai, allowing all the forces to fight with each other, and the character structure is instantly established.

It's super beautiful and fits the character very well. Baby Lingrong is so smart and Daiyu is also very cute. The writing is very thoughtful, combined with Dream of Red Mansions, and the characters in it all fit the personality. I hope it will be combined with official history and not the TV series The Legend of Zhen Huan. I simply don't want the halo of the heroine Zhen Huan to be too great.

Very good, very good. The two girls I like are in a family, and nothing happened to Jia Min. All the daughters of the Lin family will be happy!

Very good idea! When I saw this title, I really wanted to read it. It's so clever! Looking forward to the follow-up

I like this theme very much. It is really a salvation for An Lingrong's soul to have such a good sister like Daiyu in this life. Daiyu is not alone in this life. It is really great to have such a strong sister like Lingrong to rely on each other.

The pace is very slow, and there are some small details. Some chapters and plots are really unnecessary to be written in too much detail. I feel that the author has tried very hard to tell the story completely, but some things are really recommended to be mentioned in one sentence, which is a bit cumbersome. Overall, the story is quite novel. This is the first time I have seen this kind of fusion world. Come on.

The writing is smooth, and he doesn't deliberately criticize others. An Lingrong was able to become a concubine without a son without a family background. Now that he has a family background, he is even more looking forward to it! How to combine The Red Mansion and The Legend of Zhen Huan? Curious