Reborn in Dream of the Red Chamber as Jia Huan, the Concubine’s Son

Because I have the original work as a foundation and red studies as a supplement, I just need to follow along in the early stage. However, the writing style is indeed mature, and it can be seen that the author is using his strengths and avoiding weaknesses. Although there are a few details missing, the poisonous points are also avoided. It can be regarded as a masterpiece. It's a pity to post it on Tomato. Even if you go to a big platform and subscribe by chapter, you can still do it, but it will benefit a free prostitute like me.

It's good to watch, and the plot is very good. I've followed it for four to five hundred chapters, but I don't plan to finish it, because the male protagonist has a tendency to have a harem in the later period. So far, Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai, the three eldest girls in the room, the mandarin ducks around Jia Mu, and the brothel's brothel are all having an affair (actually I don't mind having a harem, but I should accept Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai at the same time...)

The writing is so good, there are no weird points. I really like the family and friendship in it. The people in the protagonist camp are very cute. Many scenes are really enjoyable. I just like to watch some plots where relatives are angry and enemies are painful. It is very refreshing. The writing is very good, but there are always some comments in the comment area about trying to collect as many twelve hairpins as possible to start a harem. The author must not be affected. If you don't consider the character background and blindly pursue the harem and never come back, that will be the beginning of the collapse of the text. Moreover, Daiyu, Baochai, Xiangyun, etc. All have their own fans.

The writing style and plot are both top-notch, taking into account the requirements of refreshing writing.

The author is already one of the top Red Mansion writers on Tomato, but he writes too much about politics and not much about the most important courtyard of the Red Mansion, but the flaws are not concealed. Last but not least, there are so few updates and it's not enough to watch!

A masterpiece among fanfictions, the characters are carefully drawn. Especially when portraying the big-faced treasure (Baoyu), it was very enjoyable. When I read the original version of Dream of Red Mansions, I was annoyed by the big-faced treasure, and when I slapped the big-faced treasure, I felt really good. It retains the charm and details of the original work, but is novel and in line with the modern sense of the text. It enhances the character to reflect the plot and at the same time underlines the character. It is complementary and responsive. It is already very good among fans, but the background introduction of the original work is a bit chaotic, and the introduction of ancient events is a bit mediocre and complicated. The dosage should be appropriate in size and distance. In articles like Tomato, don't be too subtle, but have a hint of innuendo. There should be some slap-in-the-face sections, but not too many. They should be used to add passion to arouse the reader's emotions. It's better to do it in moderation. Leave blank space for the featured characters and add some imagination (the characters should be as faithful to the original work as possible, be novel but not lose the fundamentals, so this is a major highlight), the artistic expression can enrich the characters, show the intimacy with the original work, and better empathize with the readers' impression of the original Dream of Red Mansions, thus deepening the impression of the book. Also, the comments are just personal suggestions and are for reference only.

Not hasty or slow, neither arrogant nor impetuous, able to keep calm, able to endure hardships, capable of doing things, able to be determined, able to gain and give up, has a pattern, three correct views, and successful character creation. It seems to be a very good book so far

After reading Chapter 5, let's evaluate it. It's really cool, unlike other fictional Red Mansions novels that are so submissive. Revenge is super fast, and the Baoyu described is not a silly character.

This novel is quite well written, and the good thing about it is that the author will tell a certain comparison between the story he tells and the original text from time to time, allowing you to read the story he wrote and understand part of the story of Red Mansions. Many people like Red Mansions, but only know part of it or not much. After all, reading Red Mansions is quite tiring. If you know more, you can discuss it with some of the original texts spoken by the author. If you haven't read it and want to read it, you can also understand each person's personality characteristics based on the author's description. Of course, the main thing is the character of the protagonist of this book. He is relatively calm, knows etiquette, is well-organized in his work, looks very comfortable, and does not look too out of place.

The writing was pretty good, and to be honest, there were no obstacles. If you like Dream of Red Mansions, you can take a look. I feel that there are not too many points, there is no magically modified plot, and there is no blind criticism of a certain character.