Textbook Survival: From the Start, I’m a Tadpole Looking for My Mom

The idea is good, but except for the protagonist, the negative characters are all male, and the positive characters are all female. It's a bit like the fantasy adventure life of a dead otaku in another world. The characters except the protagonist are quite brainless. If you want to make it better, you can create more characters other than the protagonist, which will be more vivid. One point, don't write a cool novel where the protagonist is invincible. Other characters must also have roles, no matter what the subject matter, otherwise it will be very boring. Generally speaking, it is quite creative and can be given 3.5 Points. There are many other things that need to be improved. If you are tired of reading, you can come here to try something new.

In the classic team, all the protagonists are female, and there is female competition, and the relationship between the male protagonist and these women is not handled well. Well, the male protagonist seems to be very impatient, especially Lin Zhixia Qingmei's identity and this kind of harem style, the protagonist is also a bit scumbag, which makes me uncomfortable. But the faults do not hide the faults. The setting and copy are quite good, and the rhythm is okay. Except for what was mentioned in the previous paragraph, everything else is at least above the passing line, and even excellent in some aspects. In summary, it is an okay food article, which requires a certain degree of poison resistance.

First of all, the subject matter is very novel. This is the first time I have read a novel with this theme. To be honest, I have read too many copy-type novels, all of which are weird stories. This is the first time I have seen this kind of textbook turned into a copy. The second point is that the author's description of the dungeon is quite acceptable, and I still like it. The changes in the textbook content and the manifestations of the dungeon monsters are quite acceptable, but they also have shortcomings. From the reader's perspective, there may be some places where the dungeon is less immersive. The third point is that there is a bit of green in some places, but generally speaking, it is just a touch of green, such as in a fantasy (one description is that a female protagonist loves the male protagonist deeply but sees the male protagonist in the fantasy world having a group of wives and concubines. She has a mental breakdown and quits the fantasy world before giving up on herself. However, because it is a two-person fantasy, the protagonist does not know In the eyes of the protagonist, the heroine has given up on her body), there is also a certain degree of damage to the clothes due to fighting in the dungeon (this is only the dungeon NPC without descriptions of other people), and the protagonist comes to the rescue in danger. The author does not describe much about the relationship between the protagonist and his women, so let's look at the individual in general. The fourth point is that the description of the overall strength of the dungeon is not deep and does not bring pressure to reading. I think this is good. It is novel and easy to read without pressure. Moreover, the protagonist is relatively strong, which is a bit refreshing. Fifth point, I forgot what to say, it's just too much torture for the time being. Sixth point, I just read the latest chapter. In order to retaliate against the male protagonist for not giving her food, the female protagonist rubbed the male protagonist's beautiful female slave. I think this is a plus point. There is even a lesbian [shy], (ps. This female protagonist has to eat the least among all the female protagonists. Although she is a real girlfriend, I think this kind of slave part is quite interesting) (Oh, by the way, the beautiful female slave has to eat as soon as she takes it)

Let's talk about this book. The novel theme is in line with the current mainstream themes and is very attractive. The plot is compact and orderly and the writing is exquisite. The protagonist's IQ is online and the description of the power is also on point. I sincerely hope that the platform can pay more attention and attract more traffic to this book. I also hope that the author will update it more. Secondly, the protagonist's S-level power feels that it will need to be upgraded later, and the description of the power is also a bit lacking.

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Anyway, I personally like this kind of novel with imagination and its own setting. Moreover, I have read several of the author's previous novels, and I feel that his writing style is really good, and the more I practice, the better. But unfortunately, none of them are that long. If this novel maintains this level and can be written into a full-length novel, I feel like it will at least be considered a minor masterpiece in Tomato.

. There has been a bit of a book shortage lately, and this book is super nice. The writing is very smooth and the score is low. I think it should be at least around 8:00. There is nothing wrong with being kind. In this subject matter, the protagonist is actually a kind person. Teammates are also super virgins. The system actually gave the Holy Mother Heart a reward, Tang Wan was finished.

The subject matter is very innovative, and there is no need to forcefully write the emotional line. I read your book several times and was dismissed by book reviews. Today I read it again to decide whether it is good or bad. I personally think it is okay (maybe it is because I have high poison resistance and I feel that I have low poison resistance. Don't read it). Even if it is a fantasy, it is best not to touch the plot description of the borderline. Don't you see what Luan has been scolded for recently? Come on.

Four, thousand, plus, other than that, I have nothing to say, brothers, the writing is particularly good, four, thousand, plus, oh

The protagonist of "Japanese Movie", clever use of photography, the content of the story textbook is very good, the description is also bold, the author is very brave to write, it is beautiful