Slay the Gods: The Frail Beauty Is a Martial God

The idea of this book is quite novel, but the writing style needs to be improved. Detailed descriptions can be purposeful and do not require too many flowery words. A pithy sentence can amaze readers even more. For example: when describing a person's beauty, you can write that the appearance is almost divine, gorgeous and spotless. It can also be written that he was not born as gorgeous as a human being, but that he was born pure and pure as a god, which is light and frightening. The male protagonist in the author's works has both divinity and extreme beauty, but the large number of gorgeous words seems cumbersome and lacks a sense of white space. There is no need to elaborate on beauty. Use one or two concise sentences to outline the atmosphere. The blank space can better bring out his own divine coldness, and the beauty that readers can imagine will be more shocking. In describing the mood of the protagonist, external factors such as actions or scenes can be used to express it. I found that the author did not handle some aspects well when writing the article, such as writing the character's temperament: The author wrote: It gives people a mysterious and cold feeling. Descriptions that are too boring will leave readers with no sense of involvement or empathy. You can change it to a description of the character's appearance, or you can add some description of the environment to set it off, and so on. Improve your writing style and master the progress of the plot. I believe the author will give you better feedback [laughing] Of course, this kind of group pet script just looks good. If you don't like it, you can delete it [shy]

The sick beauty is shockingly delicious!

I really like the setting of this book. The author's writing style can be better. Come on [Sending my heart] Some places are more colloquial and cumbersome, but they can be described in more concise sentences. The author may want to write about the beauty and magnificence of the protagonist, the love and admiration of other gods and people for him... And the description of the environment when the protagonist first appeared is a bit too much. These can be written from individual perspectives, and there is no need to write so much, leaving appropriate blank space, so that readers have better room for imagination, and it will be more emotional. If you write too much, it will be easy to lose sight of it and skip it subconsciously. Another disadvantage of writing too much is that it will be very dull and easy to appear broken. Also, I think there are some things that are unreasonable. For example, the protagonist is a god and he is actually afraid of the night breeze [face covering]. I know that I want to reflect the sick and weak character of the protagonist, but I just can't help but feel that this is unreasonable. There is also the protagonist's ability to withstand the power of Shiva's resentment, and Cangnan City has not been erased. I know here that the author wants to smooth over some difficult feelings and reflect the protagonist's strength and so on. In fact, if this contradiction is missing, a big point of interest will be missing. Why is it difficult to reconcile? It is because there are points of interest and contradictions that can be explored deeply. Moreover, this contradiction is actually the beginning of God-killing. Without this contradiction, I don't know what method will be used later to let 071 fight against those gods, and how to unfold the subsequent plots. Without this contradiction, the plot would not be so ups and downs, and would be relatively flat. When the protagonist fights Gaia again, it does not reflect the protagonist's strength very well. Instead, it highlights Loki's love for the protagonist. I really like this setting [Sending Hearts], but the plot is not that ups and downs. I look forward to the author's progress. Keep it up. [Sending Hearts]

The setting of a sickly beauty traveling through thousands of years is very catchy. The protagonist Xie Wuhuang travels to the world of God-killing. His life is incomplete and he is always weak and sick. He lives with soup and medicine all day long. He needs to rely on the luck of others to warm himself, otherwise he can only fall into a deep sleep to recover. Due to an error in traveling through the timeline, the system compensated him with top-notch strength and side-by-side weapons. On the outside, he looked weak in white clothes holding a pipa, but his actual strength level was full. Over the course of thousands of years, people who have been constantly exposed to destiny have been tossed between sleeping and waking up again and again, and their memories have gradually blurred. After a long wait until the plot begins, they can have a longer waking time. The story is full of love. What irritates me the most is that the protagonist is emotionally slow. Others are attracted to him, but he only regards it as a relationship between raising children or friends. The relationship line is progressing smoothly at the moment, which is relatively fast, right (?) On one side is the vicissitudes of life and alienation of thousands of passers-by, on the other side is the incomprehensible love and unconscious ignorance. There is a strong core hidden under the shell of a sickly beauty. It not only has a sense of destiny in the grand world view of the ups and downs of thousands of years, but also intersperses light and funny interactions. The only fly in the ointment is that the past that has been dormant for thousands of years can be described a little more, and the changes in the protagonist's mood over the thousands of years can be explored (personal point of view). Those who like strong fighting beauties, group pets, and time-traveling fan settings can apply. The author is also active and listens to suggestions. The story presented so far is more of a foreshadowing and prologue in a long storyline. The characters in the book are still growing, the bonds are still building up, the conflicts have not yet fully exploded, and the emotions have not yet reached the strongest and most touching point. I believe that all the seemingly ordinary fragments are silently preparing for the grand plot in the future; all the temporary shortcomings and blank spaces are to prepare for an even more amazing reunion and transformation. Just because this book is not finished yet, everything is still changing, and everything is worth waiting for. All the famous scenes, character transformation, plot reversal and perfection that everyone is looking forward to are hidden in chapters that have not been updated yet. I am looking forward to the next development of the story. I believe that as the plot continues to advance, the long-awaited foreshadowing will slowly be realized, the characters will have their own highlight moments, and all the exciting scenes that I have been looking forward to will definitely appear in the future chapters. Overall, I think it is a potentially good book worth recommending.

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative pictures😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute Until the tears stop flowing, the world will no longer be short of water, the nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that the tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life, makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, it makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and the world will no longer be short of water.

Men see menstruation🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is God and I The roses illuminated my dark life and gave meaning to my world😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water, the nemesis of depression 😋 It is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so good that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

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It smells so good 🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women get crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘It is God, it is my rose that lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist in me I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨 I was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and became the tide of the Qiantang River😈It's so beautiful🥰God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😙I run away, I jump hard, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😎It makes me realize that God does exist. I can't stop crying when I see you being so good😜

The protagonist looks sickly and beautiful, but is actually very strong. All line (forgive me, I really can't write, the rest is just to make up the word count [star]) Family wealth, give me a chance😣 Let me be your daughter😊You can't waste your youth🤓 Family wealth, don't you think so 😉? I want to enter my family 🤗 Be my daughter 😎 I want to be with my family every day 😌 I want to be us with you 😜 I want to go to the sea with my family 😘 I want to be with my family for decades ☺ I want to buy and buy for my family 🤑 I want to watch my family and give birth to a handsome boy 😝 I also want to watch my family zuo 😋 I just love sweetness 😚