To Care for My Sickly Husband, a Mystic Master Takes Over the World

As soon as I clicked into this novel, I discovered three problems: 1. The plot is too fast, and I always feel like I can't keep up (I don't know if it's a problem, but some people must like it, but I can't accept it. Anyway, it's the "stomach" of thousands of people) 2. It feels like spoiled wife literature and ancient tyrant literature. I don't know if it's because I don't read it enough or what, but it's just very awkward. 3. Seeing now, I don't know about the later stage, but there are too many modifiers in the early stage, and there are repetitions, which is not good in the senses. However, the setting is novel. If you polish it with concentration, it will definitely look good. The author must continue to work hard.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my child with depression is no longer OD, and I don't have to cut pig's trotters anymore. I want to read 200 chapters every day. This thing is awesome. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author. Doubao tells the boss tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The boss is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. It's also very fast to see, okay. It must be highly praised and supported, it's not annoying at all! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

It's so good that I cried, Xiao Ci is so cute, Lu Jingze's character design as a Tianlong is very pleasant, and Lu Jingze is very good to Xiao Ci, buying what Xiao Ci needs, and beating those who are not good to Xiao Ci. With the 50 million he just received, he turns around and buys items for Xiao Ci's body. This attack is completely controlled, which makes me feel very comfortable. Xiao Ci is also slowly growing up. If possible, I hope the author can also shape Xiao Ci's character more. Although there is a plot in the article where the cannon fodder wants to seduce Gong (but he fails to touch Gong's clothes), this idea makes me uncomfortable. Personally, I don't like this kind of plot. I would rather go with the idea of ​​defeating Gong. There are also some sentences that feel quite ancient. But overall it's quite good-looking, and the things about metaphysics and feng shui described in the article also made me feel quite powerful. Looking forward to updates from the author.

It's almost the same as the previous Little Wife of Guzao Ba, except that the main character here is unrivaled. I can only say that people who like brainless cool novels will especially like it. If you don't like it, you won't like it. He belongs to the kind of brainless cool novels. I especially like to read it and the pace is fast. Those who like details, delicate writing and long flowing water should avoid it. After all, there are thousands of people and thousands of tastes. I really love brainless novels. When life is so bitter, it must be refreshing!

This book is so enjoyable, I just want to read something like this. He's a ruthless person who doesn't talk much. He just gets into trouble when he doesn't agree with you! What kind of talk can you say if you have the strength? ! Like! ! Hope it stays the same, this is the first time I can't wait to comment! ! I will comment later depending on the situation! !

I read some of them, and they are quite well written. They are refreshing articles, and they are indeed very refreshing and very relieving! ! But the author really needs to read the plot. There are some parts that don't connect to each other, and the same goes for the characters.

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Dian within Dian, it's quite cool, but I feel like the details need to be polished and a bit rough.

The plot is really exciting. It pays attention to the lightning protection of writing and logic. It is shocking and delicious when read.

The plot went by so fast, and I felt like I couldn't connect with it. Many places were not described clearly, which made me a little uncomfortable. Author, would you like to fix it?