The Devoted Top Is Done Pretending, and the Scumbag Bottom Is Regretting It

I've finished reading the first world, Shuang Jie, Sweet Pet. Em Although he is the main article, the author focuses more on the description of Shou's appearance and the description of Shou's continuous growth and power. In fact, I feel a little bit more nervous about Shou. Shou also has a feeling of being a heartthrob. It's not that the writing is not good, and the meaning is also very good. But from the title and introduction, I think it should focus more on Gong. In this article, I see mostly the changes and help that Shou brings to Shou. I can feel it. Shou's personality charm is weakened, especially at the end of the small world. In fact, I didn't read it at the beginning. I feel it now after following the update. From the readers' comments in the comment area, I can see that Shou has great charm. In fact, the novel is well written, but under the premise of the introduction and the title of the novel, have the narrative perspective and plot development of the novel deviated from the theme?

I hope that everyone who comes in to read the book can respect each other, understand each other, and tolerate each other. If you don't like it, just click the cross to exit without any malice. This book is a story written by the author that he wants to read. It is derived from various story ideas in the past. There is no need to deliberately cater to or please others🍀🍀🍀. The two protagonists in the book are not perfect characters and have two-way perspectives. There will be many stories with different settings in the full text, and each one has his or her own highlight. The author updates 4,000 words every day, and the updates are stable. Welcome to read it. There are many more story ideas behind: The innocent and powerful sea clan and the rich young master who were let down, the country man in the 1970s and 1980s, the first-ranked peasant boy in ancient times, the elegant earl of the castle, the love lover, the gentle and disfigured housekeeper, the ancient emperor... All stories have happy endings, please read the contents of this book for yourself. It is full of creative inspiration, and I hope that readers who read this book can reap their own happiness just like the protagonist. Thank you again for your love and companionship.

It looks good. I really hope that I can give Jiang Wan and Song Wei a good ending. I really hate people like Wen. This kind of person is also very scary. In fact, he is like a love brain. I have always had a bad impression of this word because it is too irrational. He can trick everyone to death for the so-called love, and he still feels that he is innocent [facepalm]. But Wen is completely stupid and poisonous, and he hurts others at will. It is really scary for a stupid person to have the power, and he can do things like being a spy. I think his ending is too good and unworthy. Only one world has been updated so far, I want to see it.

Looks good! ! ! Shen Zong and Lin Qingyu are a perfect match! ! ! Shen Zong stopped his losses in time after waking up, and he is also very capable and super handsome. The name Lin Qingyu shows that the author has put a lot of effort into it. The name and setting are so gentle. Even if he is bullied by others, he is as tough and upright as a grass. Both are clean! ! ! Congratulations to the two of you for finding the perfect match for each other [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] I am really looking forward to the next plot, and I hope the author will surprise us by writing a hundred chapters, hahahaha Regarding education, perhaps the novel is set and drawn from reality. The teacher only teaches o to protect themselves, but dear babies, in real life, not only do you need to learn to protect yourself, but also importantly, you must also educate those a (boys in real life) how to respect others. As a girl, I was taught to be quiet and protect myself, but now that I am growing up, I realize that this is not good. But it doesn't matter. Starting from now, we can educate the next generation and believe that the future will be better. In addition, if you feel uncomfortable with their bullying behavior, you must tell your teachers and parents in time [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Super pretty! ! Why is the rating so low? The introduction attracted me very much, so this was the first time I clicked to read the quick travel article before a small world was updated! The writing style is very gentle. Qingyu's character is simply the person I dream to be! Smart, calm, polite, tolerant and resilient. Just like his name, he is as tall and tough as a big tree. Shen Zong is also super invincible. Tall and handsome, gentle and considerate, well-controlled, smart and decisive, and respectful of others. When he found that Wen didn't care about him at all, he cut it off immediately. After discovering that he fell in love with Qingyu, he directly bought flowers to express his love and openly announced their relationship to everyone! And never look at others with prejudice based on other people's evaluations. Such a perfect and ideal character! Let the young lovers stay together for a long time! 🥰🥰🥰 Qingyu~Qingyu~just stay happy like this! I really like this kind of long-lasting love. I hope that the author will not abuse the little world behind him! Looking at it now, I feel that there are two problems. First, there is a problem with the arrangement of the extra episode. The extra chapters of the first world have always focused on supporting characters (of course, some readers do want to read them), but the author himself only updates one chapter every day. As a result, for almost a week, readers could neither see the side story of Qingyu and Shen Zong getting along, nor the protagonist of the second world. Instead, the readers are always presented with supporting characters. Either reduce the supporting characters' roles, or update two chapters a day to speed up the development of the supporting characters' story lines. Otherwise, if I update the supporting characters for a week every time it ends, sooner or later there will be more bad reviews. Second, there are some problems with plot development. First of all, this book is a fast-travel novel, and the main focus of fast-travel novels is rhythm. Although the author has said that it will be slow to develop, I think I can accept the love between the protagonists flowing slowly, but you have to let it go at least one way! ! Personally, I feel that the pace of the second world is too slow. After struggling until now, it has not divorced, nor has it taught Zhou a big lesson. Instead, it has been carefully describing the details of Zhou and his mistress's relationship. If converted to the first world based on the number of words, Qingyu and Shen Zong are already together now. The protagonist of the second world may have been a little ambiguous at this moment. Secondly, the second world is a bit indifferent. It describes too much the story of Zhou and his mistress. There is very little interaction between the attacker and the receiver, and the relationship progress is also very slow. As I watched, I couldn't tell who the protagonist was for a moment. That's it for now, I'm a little disappointed until now. I feel that the first world is still too perfect. It gave me a white moonlight filter that prevented me from completely abandoning the book, so I will wait and see what happens next.

There are logical problems in the development of the first part of the story. The description of being stared at a lot by passers-by is disgusting, but the character of the protagonist is well developed, the foreshadowing is also well laid, and the past life in the extra chapter is the finishing touch! ! ! Looking forward to other times [Like]

It looks good (♥∀♥), but I prefer Jiang Wan and Song Wei [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I don't mean to say anything bad about the main CP, the main CP has a bland love feeling, not very satisfying [laughing] Also, I prefer the side effects The setting of the CP is really, really hard. We are crazy about it [crying] [crying] [crying] Who knows? The main CP only cares about sweetness, and abuse of scum is what Wangliang is working hard to push forward. Song Wei, your puppy has suffered a lot of grievances in this world [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's super beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] Shen Zong is stable, strong and safe, and Qingyu's baby can be salty or sweet, soft, cute and tenacious [full] The plot is also good, it's fascinating and I look forward to the follow-up [Eating Melon] So far, I have seen Shen Zong and Qingyu together. After Shen Zong figured it out, he confessed that he has super strong action [cool] This sentence is also very good [like] Shen Zong whispered in a low and ambiguous tone: "Lin Qingyu, I now formally invite you to have a relationship with me for the purpose of marriage." Come on [upvote] [upvote] [ask for more updates] [please for more updates] [please for more updates]

Super Invincible is so good-looking, it's even tied, okay, it's really good-looking, the young couple is so cute, can you create a world for Jiang Wan and Song Weidan, the first world is too painful, give them a good ending, young lovers should be 99, don't be! ! ! [Cry][cry]

There is no sloppiness at all, no hydrological links, and the content is compact. He's so handsome🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that my tears did not stop, and the world no longer lacked water.