Lost in the Land of Hehuan, I Keep a Low Profile as the Lily Sect's Grand Elder

I haven't found any flaws yet, and the writing is alright, so I'll give it five stars for now. The protagonist has too many cheat codes; not only does he have a system, but he also has a special bead-like cheat. Even at the Golden Core stage, he's still an old man.

It's okay for now, but I'll lower the score if there are any instances of scavenging for old shoes or collecting junk later. The author enjoys writing plots that involve contradicting oneself.

It's like putting old wine in new bottles. This book has all the traditional fantasy elements you'd expect, but the author's writing is good, and there's not much violence in it, which I really like. The female characters in the harem are also portrayed reasonably well, though sometimes they're a little too cunning. And when the villains are getting too close, you have to occasionally feel a bit forced to watch them get their way.

The characters' inner thoughts are described in a delicate way, and the emotions are sincere. It brought tears to my eyes!

With its skillful writing and superb pacing, following this book is the right choice!

This book is excellent in every aspect, from its setting and characters to its plot. It's a rare gem and deserves my support!

The plot is so ingenious; every twist is both unexpected and logical!

The path to immortality is never smooth sailing; the plot is full of ups and downs, making it a masterpiece.

Great, great! I can't stop watching, please update soon! 🥰

Very interesting! The old man's writing is vivid and engaging. I'm following along!