A High School Senior in the Imperial Court

I feel that the setting is very unpleasant (you mean the protagonist group has 51 people, right?) It is also a remake of another book. It is very unpleasant. After reading three or five chapters, I feel that the creation is very shallow and straightforward, and there are a lot of decorative or lyrical words. "Expressing the author's confusion" means that after reading it for a long time, it was lyrical, but I did not feel the panic and fear of the students after time travel, nor did I feel any homesickness. I don't feel strong or confident after facing a new environment. I just feel light. Oh, I have traveled through time. Oh, I really want to go home. Try your best. If anything, it's much more reasonable than before the reset. This kind of subject matter needs to be interesting. Make it interesting. Among the 51 people, there isn't even one person who is responsible for complaining, isn't there even one person who is responsible for being furious, isn't there even one person who is responsible for collapsing after the time travel? Are there just 8 main characters with their appendages? The description of other students is "everyone looked over", "everyone has arrived", and "everyone has something to do". So if you can't control 51 people, don't write such a big scene! The descriptions in the previous three or five chapters are a bit dispensable. The character creation is very facial. Everyone is good at what and how. The promotion of the main plot is just a little bit. We have traveled through time. We have found someone to take us in, but we have to work. Let's work, classmates. Yeah, it's an improvement compared to before the remake. Maintain an encouraging and supportive attitude towards the author and hope to write good works in the future. Come on