Reviving the Esoteric Cult as a Literary Giant

A good article on esoteric Buddhism. Lightning protection points: A lot of descriptions of staring at female characters, with a harem tendency, and all female characters will eventually become the harem of the male protagonist.

Although it is a Wenzhaogong, it does not have those cliché routines. It also improves the status of literature. The background of the Renaissance is much more natural than the "Dragon Kingdom Daxing Literature". It also incorporates elements of esoteric mysticism, making it very interesting to read. The heroine should be the sister and the sponsor. I personally prefer a single heroine, but two heroines are fine if they are well written. Two is enough. Don't make more. They are all copied from the secret sect and the text. Don't get into so many emotional disputes.

Extraordinary powers + time travel and the Renaissance + literary giant, this setting is very creative, but after reading it, I found that the advantages and disadvantages are also obvious. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The setting of his time travel is vague and not very rigorous. There are a lot of holes dug later. If you want to know, I won't read the spoilers. Some extraordinary settings are so long-winded that it's really not interesting to write a chapter or two. The fighting part inside is even more boring. But the flaws don't hide the fact that Yu is a great writer and it's very good looking. It has an exotic and novel feel. I have more or less familiar with the works, and the feedback from the characters is particularly interesting, so I feel very comfortable immersing myself in it. I would like to give you some advice: write less weird stuff and write more about literary heroes.

The latest 46 chapters appear to be written texts, but are actually fantasy, with multiple female protagonists, perfect marks for the basics, and a large spread. If it can be written well, the overall quality will not be at the same level as other common short stories. Although the subject matter is a bit inappropriate, I still give it five stars. [Learned]

Very interesting 🤔The poetry interspersed is a bit stiff, but the plot description is very good, and the first script is also well chosen. It is in line with the reality of the protagonist and the theater. It is a pity that there is no deeper description. Regarding the people in the theater, the protagonist may not have a strong sense of substitution. The author should have a framework for this part of the article.

Very nice! The author has a literary foundation at first glance. His words and sentences are neither overly polished nor simple and crude. Compared with the casual Tomato Little White article, which is like a reservoir opening a gate to release floods, this article obviously has more background and higher information density. Although I don't understand what Tantric Buddhism is, the setting, background, and commentary, sometimes I can't understand the plot, but overall there is no obstacle. Ningnu is not within the normal range and is not written to be taken over by Xiaotou. I hope it won't hurt me later. Take back the sentence that Ningnu is within the normal range

It looks good, and the writing style is particularly suitable. For those who know only a little about the relevant literary field, it is not good for someone who knows too much. In this state of half-knowledge, it is indeed interesting to read the eloquent talk in the article. And the author wants to write it as a harem novel. Those who become fanatical believers don't have to accept it. After all, the female characters created in this way have already had a suitable position in the book. But the nun sister, the eldest lady, and the author lady who is disguised as a man can all be taken. Identity is not a problem. Whether it is to build an empire, become a god, or be a romantic scholar, it is a very suitable identity to open a harem. They all write about the Renaissance and are not romantic, so how can they be worthy of this period? [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I have read it halfway through, and my impression has not been bad, and the narrative flow is smooth. However, the growth of the protagonist's strength is not the main narrative goal. Therefore, it may not be suitable for people who are eager to have fun fighting and can develop for a while. There is nothing wrong with the article as a whole. Ok, I have seen the latest chapter, I personally think it is good, maybe the narrative is too slow? Some people don't like it, but I think it's okay.

Very good😌, there are no poisonous points for the time being, it has medieval texts, mysterious elements, and a cult leader. I hope that the protagonist can use the plot to reflect the secret cult in the future [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Occultism + Renaissance background is a subject that interests me, so after reading a little more, I can feel that the author is a bit knowledgeable and has introduced a bit about the Renaissance. The script written in the book also echoes the subsequent plot, and it can be seen that there is some consideration. The above are the advantages, but there are also disadvantages. The plot description of this book is not good enough, and several interesting plot texts are a bit bland. The author is a little too eager for readers to quickly understand the plot of the book, and adds narration interpretation and character psychology in many character interactions, which makes the plot seem dull. In fact, it is not necessary for readers to understand it immediately. If it is an important plot, it can be expanded later. If it is not that important, it is more important for the dialogue to be witty and interesting. I feel that there is room for description in many settings. For example, the decisive battle with the cultists can be completed in two or three chapters. Believe it or not, if you use the Lord of Mysteries as an analogy, you must have the ability to explore, collect props, merge clues, improve combat effectiveness, and a series of processes.