Girl Band: No Youthful Days or Smiles Allowed

I enjoyed reading it. Although there are flaws, such as the arranger of the C group is Xiangzi, the book is written about Lixi during the Go group, and the lamp can actually talk normally without being nervous, and there are some minor problems, but this is still a good book worth savoring. Anyway, I am full.

The first five-star review of this book was my own 55. The book is updated with 6 to 9k words every day. I try my best to write every emotional line well! In the beginning, the tempo was indeed a bit too fast and the writing structure was a bit scattered, but it gradually got better (right?). I tried my best to write each song including the instrumental score and word analysis! Posted on September 15th: I am already revising the first 30 chapters. I have revised the text structure of the first 4 chapters and added about 10,000 words of content. It is estimated that there are still tens of thousands of words to be added. I hope you can give me a chance [cry] [cry] [cry] The serialization of a million words for 100 days has been really hard!

You are just scared, cowardly, panicked, confused, trembling, desperate, in pain, panicked, confused, cold-hearted, distracted, sunken, suffocated, collapsed, tired, tortured, struggling, powerless, chilled, lonely, confused, silent, exhausted, lonely Broken, broken, frustrated, hesitant, hesitant, frustrated, lost, depressed, uncomfortable, cowed, dissociated, defeated, obsessed, tormented, hopeless, hysterical, panicked, timid, flustered, at a loss, trembling, in despair I looked away, tortured, frightened, disturbed, chilled, distracted, trapped, suffocated, belief collapsed, exhausted physically and mentally, tormented day and night, struggling, helpless, feeling cold, lonely, confused about the way forward, silent I am exhausted, exhausted, alone and helpless, my soul is broken, I feel lost, I am hesitant, I am wandering around, my hope is lost, my expression is lost, I have been depressed for a long time, I have endured the long night, I have retreated step by step, my mind is wandering, my defenses have collapsed, I am obsessed with obsessions, I have been tortured, I am in a dilemma

Overall, it can be regarded as a good fanfic, but I personally feel that the description of the arrangement in the article is a bit formulaic. Many times it is said that the greatness of the arrangement lies in what chords are used here and what rhythm patterns are used there. But in fact, the success of the arrangement is not only in the Regarding details such as the arrangement of chords, the overall arrangement and fluency are the most important. Of course, it is just a personal opinion. If the author sees it, I hope it can be helpful to you (by the way, where did the author get the description of the arrangement in the article, such as the specific chords)?

Let's talk about the conclusion first: undoubtedly A+. Let's talk about the reasons ① The author himself is a nuclear-powered donkey, and he writes seven to eight thousand words every day, and occasionally he can write big chapters like fifteen thousand or fourteen thousand. ②The author himself listened to the advice and has been reading the opinions in the comment area. I added him to the bookshelf very early. To be honest, the initial experience was a bit OOC, but by the time I read it for the second time, the author had refined it and the reading was as smooth as Dove. ③The author's writing style is relatively beautiful, but it doesn't make people feel very literary and young when reading it. Everyone is saying that it is a bit like youth pain literature, but I personally think it is just right. ④The author's narrative is relatively smooth, things are orderly, and a certain amount of daily life can be interspersed in the middle to enrich the characters. It can lay a lot of foreshadowing, and the emotional climax is also very enjoyable (as expected, the band needs to use music to solve the problem). The remaining comments are for the author: after reading the latest one, the secondary transformation of the character's personality is inevitable and necessary for the story. It will not be particularly awkward to read. However, I still hope that the character's personality can be sublimated more quickly. I hope that more foreshadowing can be laid when dealing with the problem of group C, which will also facilitate subsequent creation. Overall it's very good to read, but the author has been quite conservative with his recruitment, currently only four, and Momoka may not even be fully counted, which may be a good thing for some people, having more experience to develop characters, but I am a bloodthirsty reader [Adore], and I can't wait to see our Lao Che get entangled. The author has a degree to the core of many characters. He also has something to say in the comment area or the author. Like Hongxia and Kita, they all have cores. When will they be brought out (sad~). Finally, I wish Lao Dashu can have more readers and be healthy. ♡ ᒪ∅ᐯᕮ ♡

In Girl Band, the description of the emotional line is top-notch, and it jumps out of the original work. Nowadays, when writing about Girl Band, they follow the plot step by step. It feels like a suspension bridge effect, but this book is definitely well written. It jumps out of the plot but does not deviate from their awkward characters. It is very good.

Delicious and delicious😋The portion is large and filling, but the first 30 chapters are a bit too literary. Although they have been changed, they still have a bit of a literary flavor, but it is still acceptable. Deng Deng's character is a bit OOC? At the front, I don't know if it's my imagination, but it's harmless. The writing is still very good, and the slowed down pace later is even better. It's a band article worth reading😋 It's been a long time since I've had a band article. Come on, I feel like it can still be seen by more people [Blow kiss]

First of all, let's take a look at my personal feelings. The author seems to want to create a melancholy atmosphere (I don't know how to describe it specifically), which personally feels weird to me. The word "literary youth" comes to mind (I have only a limited understanding of this word, so it may be wrong)

I haven't caught up on the latest yet, but for now I think the characters are close to each other and are very good. The male protagonist's background story and personality are quite good. Each chapter is quite long and enjoyable. The game also likes to be interactive, so I'd like to be a generous investor.

The previous writing is indeed not very attractive, and the author is also very active, and he will refer to it if he has any opinions. However, as the author's writing skills improve, it gradually improves and gets better. Generally speaking, it is okay.