Girls' Band: Ice Melted by Gravity

I'll give it five stars. Although I want to continue reading, it may be that I've read too many Girl Band fanfics. After reading two chapters, I feel like I've seen a lot of the same ones. That means I know what the plot is going to be just by reading the title. I hope the author will be innovative and write what I want to write, so I'll run away first.

While everyone was busy discussing, the author also appeared behind everyone. Today's author looks much more serious than in the past, and the tense atmosphere is also conveyed to everyone present. Reader: "Author, your keyboard is in the way" The author was stunned at first, then immediately understood what the reader meant, and laughed and threw down the keyboard. "Haha! Come on!" The readers also laughed and patted the strongest on the shoulder, and then other book friends were no longer restrained, and all wore relaxed smiles and sent their best wishes to the strongest. "Go ahead, stupid author, and prove that you are not a slow updater." "If it's too hard, just take my place." "Please update soon, author" Watching this interesting and heartwarming scene, the inner tension of the book friends was relieved a lot, and the author's response to all the cheers was a confident "Okay!!!"

A very peculiar style. The extremely cold protagonist longs for love and happiness in his heart. With everyone's efforts, he truly looks into his heart and solves his emotional deficit. Where have I seen this episode? But this style is very unique and eye-catching. As the introduction says, there is nothing poisonous about it. However, I personally feel that it is easy to get bored because the protagonist's personality is really like ice. After the novelty is gone, I feel very tired and can't stop eating. If I want to say a little more, it's not heavy enough, not twisted enough, not strong enough. Maybe it's because I've hit the threshold of eating too much recently?

In a normal genre, this book would probably have an 8.4. After all, the routines of band stories are pretty much the same. Here, I can give an 8.9. It's rare to see such a clear band line and emotional line. The writing style needs to be improved. There are a lot of descriptions when describing the male protagonist, and the atmosphere can be optimized when writing the male protagonist's dialogue. When I read it, it felt unrealistic. The relationship can be faster. This is my selfishness [sending my heart]. I love reading this kind of depressing writing [smile]

Even if some of them are stacked, I still have to express my opinions. The protagonist's background is very strong, but I don't see the qualities and abilities that the protagonist should have (not study and music, but the way he lives in the world). As the sole heir, this situation is worrying. When Aiyin meets her classmates, I didn't quite understand why the protagonist said hello at first, but then I thought about it, maybe it was because he was sensitive inside? Or is it easy for your emotions to leak out? This is how I feel when I think about the time I had with Wen Xiang's father. There is also a strong sense of human-machine dialogue in the dialogue. I think it is because the actions and dialogue are described separately. It would be better if the descriptions are interspersed. In addition, the dialogue is too simple, with a lack of modal particles, few adjectives, and the content is straightforward. As for Zhenna, well, the security guard can be fired😓, but there are really no preventive measures. It would be really serious if the young master is really hurt👍🏻. Okay, that's it, I hope the author writes better and better👌🏻Gana 😘

The writing is good, and the description of the gravity of each heroine is just right and does not exceed the standard. The hero's character is cold and succubus, but also very responsible. Some emotional conflicts and explosive points are also well planned 💕

I can give it five stars. There are no bad points so far. The male protagonist is a succubus + super mobility. He has successfully solved the problem of group c and satisfied my imagination. The writing is generally above average. Come on, author, you must write a book for a lifetime [please update]

It can be seen that the wiring and description are carefully laid out, and it is smooth and smooth. It is good as a dessert after watching Bang Bang Bang. It has AI and can be seen in the dialogue. In the end, the absolute strength and the resulting loneliness will teach you what is depressing...

Personally, I am quite satisfied with this book. It is a rare masterpiece of a girl band fanfic from Tomato. I don't want to say anything else. There is only one thing, the author is so slow in updating!!!!!!!?!!?!

Get out quickly 😢😢😢😢😢😢 This is my favorite book 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 You are not allowed to read 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢