Re:Zero: The White Moonlight Really Wants Another Chance

A very delicious novel, but who is the other male protagonist? Reinhardt? After all, Bai Ze is also friends with him (my grandson fell in love with my best friend) and because 486 did not enter the alley, Reinhardt is now in a state of finding no such person, and then I feel that 486 is suffering from jealousy. This wave of 486's perspective is very uncomfortable, so I chose to bring Bai Ze's perspective👅👅👅 So is there a legal person link? 👁️👅👁️

It's okay so far, as long as the emotional line is not messed up Don't show up where the heroine likes 486 one moment and likes the protagonist the next, otherwise the impression will be very bad [Learned]

The theme idea is pretty good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Come on.

"I, Bai Ze, promise to make Beatrice happy forever. To do this, I must eradicate your loneliness, and I will find a way to accompany you forever. Even after death, my soul will always be by your side."

It feels great at the beginning and feels great until the end, so feel free to use it. Author certified!

It looks good, but isn't 486 Subaru Natsuki? [Staring] The word in the article is Ang

Okay, there are a lot of typos. Encourage it

Just for this update speed, I'll give it a five and then I'll take a look at the ingredients.

It's okay, just take a look

Except for the amnesia twist, which is a bit stiff, everything else is okay.