Dragon Ball: What Do You Mean the F Legion Sent Out the Z Fighters?

It's very good. It's well-founded and the improvement is gradual. Compared with those novels where the gravity chamber lasts for a few days and then angrily transforms into a super, then kicks the king, then supers two and three, it's so comfortable to use S cells to explain it.

After reading Chapter 62, the writing is actually very good, especially Aji. Unlike other protagonists, the protagonist masters the acting method perfectly, and then shouts that he wants to surpass Kakarot and go to Earth to grab fairy beans and women. This is an advantage to me. As for looking like he's a bit licking Freon, no, Frieza. It's not a big problem, after all, it's just for these vinegar-wrapped dumplings.

The protagonist's position is good and novel. After reading it, I have some thoughts on the subsequent plot. Under the protagonist's method of operation, Frieza's Legion is gradually transformed into Frieza's Group. The acquired territory is very suitable for control by Star Iron's Interstellar Peace Corporation or the Tau Higher Good in 40k. Frieza himself has tasted the profits and prestige of this operation. The slightly imperial structure is no longer as evil as before, and the protagonist's status is getting higher and higher, becoming Frieza's right-hand man. When expanding to the earth, the protagonist thinks that the earth is in trouble and the Cell android dolls appear from time to time. He also says that the various races in the legion will help the earth's construction and development and become the earth's backing. There will also be many masters who can discuss and persuade the Z warriors and Sun Wukong. He also persuades Vegeta with his identity as a Saiyan and the clues about the shadow of the God of Destruction behind the destruction of Planet Vegeta, and finally establishes a galactic alliance free from the influence of the god (Kaiogami, the god of destruction, all kings). Hahaha, these are all made up in my head. I wonder if I can provide the author with some follow-up plot ideas [Sending my heart]

A very good Dragon Ball novel, highly recommended, but if there is a female protagonist, I hope Bulma will not be taken advantage of by others [laughing and crying]

This is the only Dragon Ball fanfic with brains, and it's also the best. The only drawback is that there are no units for money in the universe, and the division of forces in the universe is a bit blurry. In addition to those in the original book, there are also consortiums and the like, as well as forces such as the Galaxy Patrol and the Galaxy King. I hope the author can write down the combat power in more detail.

For Dragon Ball fans, this is a novel idea and looks good.

After watching it for a few hours, I summarized it. As a Dragon Ball fan novel, the quality is quite good. There are a lot of minor problems, but the flaws do not hide the flaws. Because some of the content is about space management, it may be a bit boring for people who are not interested in these contents. After all, it is Dragon Ball, an anime that focuses on fighting. Writing this will indeed make people a little bit unbearable, but as a Dragon Ball fan fiction, it will really feel like it without adding other things. It's very empty, which is a matter of opinion; there are also some plots that I feel are a bit inconsistent with the original Dragon Ball characters. It can be seen that those plots are actually laid out for the purpose of universe management. There is nothing wrong with the plot logic, but it feels a bit weird when watching it. Other than that, I think there are actually no problems. The plot is reasonable, it makes sense, and Dales' growth path can be clearly seen. In terms of space management, there is still no problem. It's not a masterpiece, but it can be considered a good one. I would give it an 8.1 To 8.3 Personally.

Feeling pretty good I'm not bragging. People who read this line are all magnificent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stone, miraculous workmanship, vibrating. Deaf and enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, rains and dews on the common people, and is surrounded by thousands of miles, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, the majestic figure, the high-rise building, benevolent and moral, charming and suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs the sea Tang, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have a high sentiment, you have a lot of virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a pure heart, you have a lot of virtues. Orchid, a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the clouds, in his prime, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, a leader among others, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

At present, I feel that the rhythm is very good, and it is still very good to read. Although there are some typos, it is not harmful. I just hope that the author will not break down the writing later, and don't stop. Also, the update is not enough for reading [Learned]

I remember that the spirit book fruit increased a lot. At first, Sun Wukong's combat power was about the same as that of Sun Wukong, who had a fighting power of 30,000. Sun Wukong had ten times Kaioken's 300,000 fighting power. He took one bite of the fruit and even surpassed Sun Wukong.