Quick Transmigration: She Tore Up the Cannon Fodder Script

The plot is quite good, but the AI ​​feel is a bit strong. The author tries to use AI as little as possible to polish it.

The story is very good. The main character did not follow the original plot to seek revenge. The heroine's behavior in the cyberbullying episode was also very good. She withstood the pressure of the school and closed the chain of evidence, and finally used legal weapons to punish the rumor mongers. Publicizing the evidence and clarifying the rumors through the school is a very good way to refute the rumors. If you blindly reverse cyberbullying for the sake of pleasure, in addition to letting the cyberbullying continue, there will be dangers at any time. It can cause public opinion to counterattack, and more importantly, it will affect normal life; in the second chapter, the original plot of male and female drugging also backfired on itself, and the protagonist also obtained company equity and gained his own strength; in the general chapter, after seeing clearly that his friend was voluntarily taken in, he immediately cut off and started his own career as a military general to protect his family and country (ps: the protagonist helped many women who were cannon fodder so that they can continue to shine)

It's not a mindless quickie, it's rhythmic, organized, and logical. Some comments said that the punishment for the perpetrators in the first story was too light, but in reality the bullies would not receive even this punishment. The heroine relied on her own efforts to turn the tables step by step. Her parents had unconditional trust and support for her. Her classmates and teachers were not brainless NPCs, and the supporting characters were also very lively. The second world would be better if there was no single arrow

Super recommended Tomato is really a hidden dragon and a crouching tiger, and the newcomers are really amazing. The first two worlds are particularly stunning, the latter are a little flat, but both are pretty good. It can be seen that the author has rich experience and broad knowledge. He probably writes novels when he is bored. The writing style is mature, concise and not verbose, with few system scenes and some conspiracy secrets. The heroine has almost no golden fingers. She relies on continuous learning and her own ability to change the fate of the original heroine. She does not suppress the original heroine or engage in female competition. There are almost no surprises. It has been a long time since I have seen such a high-quality quick wear. I highly recommend it.

Very stable and calm Shuangwen. I don't treat readers as fools, nor am I partial to revenge, I'm just doing the right and most valuable thing. Whether it is turning the enemy from the person who initiates cyber violence to the matter itself, or turning the cliche story of chasing his wife in the crematorium, revenge on the green tea little white flower, and compensating the loyal dog male partner into a story of profit flow and quietly sitting behind the scenes to close the net and live a serious life. All are good. A cool article can attract a large number of readers, but a calm and high-quality story result and logical chain are the essence of a good article.

The first story is very well written, and it is in line with the current situation of the Internet. The world is not black and white. In the era before the Internet, not everyone's wrongdoings will be put on the Internet for everyone to judge and everyone to condemn. You can accept that people make mistakes, but you must also accept that people have the opportunity to correct themselves. This is what the law calls a sentencing system that prevents perpetrators from losing hope and sinking their boats. Those who voluntarily surrender will have a chance to get a sentence. When I first read the first story, I thought it was normal, but I felt a little unhappy. Maybe I had read too many mindless novels and raised my inner threshold. I felt that all judgments should be placed in front of the public, and those who did wrong should die and feel all the pain. But life is not like a novel, where everything is written down to the smallest details from God's perspective, with points of sympathy and points of criticism. We only see what others want us to see. We cannot fully judge the parts we cannot see.

The writing is very good. In the first world, the original owner was bullied by the Internet, and the heroine sought justice for the original owner with reasonable grounds. Even if the school was in trouble and the Internet put pressure, the heroine solved the problem steadily. Guiding clues, using external forces, retaining evidence, not proving herself, and not using power to pressure others, the heroine took all aspects into consideration, which made me see a mature adult helping the child, the original owner, solve the problem. The heroine does not package the original owner as a perfect victim. She may be very straightforward, but she is a brave child who seeks justice for herself and her family. The perpetrator is not a heinous person, but he is just an evil thought, and a few people can make countless people kill a whole family. Internet violence cannot solve the problem or bring justice to the victims. It is just that some bad people use a target with the participation of the whole people to vent their malice, commit evil, and make the whole people take the blame. The heroine does not have a God's perspective, but she knows how to deal with the problems encountered by the original owner and comfort the original owner. The subsequent ending promotes the protection of minors law. The heroine participates in the improvement of the press, making the world less out of context. At the same time, it also made me realize that "fighting violence with violence" may comfort the victim's spirit in heaven, but the injustice and pain suffered by the victim cannot be equaled. The heroine used legal means to find justice for the victim, and also allowed her parents to live in peace for the rest of their lives.

It is also tied with this book. I saw some people saying that the heroine's actions against those who harmed the original owner were not strong enough. (If you want to quickly understand the heroine's actions and the author's thoughts, you can directly read Chapter 100. You can learn some of their thoughts in this chapter.) In fact, I feel good, because she traveled to the original owner, and those people all had their wishes. The heroine did it perfectly, and the heroine in every world lived very well, and every world. She is making progress, learning what she wants to learn, watching what she wants to see, and going where she wants to go. She has a better life instead of the original one. Those bad guys lost the original owner to take the blame, lost the original owner to charge, and lost the original owner as a stepping stone. None of them had a good ending, but the heroine did not go crazy to attack them. I think another reason is that many of the original owners will dissipate in the end. The heroine wants those people to see better pictures and a better life.

Shen Jianwei is very calm. In the first world, the edited bully followed the original owner's heart and chose a method that I have never seen before. The treatment was very good. In the second world, there was no direct conflict with the original male and female protagonists, and there were fewer annoying words. It started from the fundamentals, and there was no regret in the end. It's also very novel. I'm watching it in the third world. I think it's a little inconsistent. Since I am such a good friend with the second lady, I only wrote about her willfulness and controlling Shen's thoughts from the beginning. Of course, I haven't finished it yet. I may write something different later. The military plan is very exciting.

Good looking! 🤩I like it so much, it's not an ordinary mindless cool article. You, the author, are studying Fa. It requires so much brain power. It's so awesome. I also want to know so much [crying] Really strong! Use wisdom to fight back. The first story I just finished is great. Unlike other fast-travel novels, after the protagonist's aura becomes stronger, the protagonist will appear to be more and more brainless and condescending. There is also a particularly vulgar sense of money being the most important thing. He complains about the squeeze system at every turn, like an idiot, especially when there is space to just stock up on things. The finale does not show anything (how much does a person need to stock up to be satisfied)? This novel is unique! It relies on calm and rational analysis to make you feel comfortable and safe. If there are stories that everyone is familiar with, such as Journey to the West and Dream of Red Mansions or stories about a famous figure from the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties who were redeemed by being penetrated, I would also like to read it.