Quick Transmigration: Absolute Control

After reading the first world, I found it to be quite good overall. The story is complete, the chapters are rich in content, and there is no running account. Advantages: The heroine in the first world saves the original heroine, and there is no female competition; the male protagonists with names all like the heroine; the heroine has a system and a mission, she is not a white rabbit, she is very good at acting, and her acting skills are also very mature. Regrets: The plot in the early stage where the heroine was threatened by the uncle's family was not very comfortable. In the later stage, after the heroine and the hero got together, there was no plot to deal with the uncle's family. The uncle's family disappeared directly and acted purely as tools, which lacked the excitement; the hero thought that the heroine knew that the heroine knew that the hero was using his mind when they first met and fell in love. There were not many scenes of abusing the hero, and there was no chasing his wife in the crematorium; the heroine When her brother disappeared and she was left alone, the male protagonist proposed that the female protagonist marry him to protect her. Personally, I didn't like this arrangement. I would prefer the male protagonist to support the female protagonist in taking care of the Lin family's property. Even if the female protagonist is not proficient in learning, she is willing to take the initiative to learn to take care of it, and cooperate with the male protagonist's company to help manage it. This writing will respect the female protagonist more and allow the female protagonist to grow, rather than relying on love to maintain it. (This may be different from the direction the author wants to write, but I personally prefer this kind of plot)

I feel that the author of the second story is like a god of books. The close-ups are particularly natural and comfortable. The world in the book is very simple. I also like the author's starting point for writing and the sense of "equality" between the lines. I feel that I can write more similar ones. I am really good at writing. The rice tastes so good, and I have already followed it on Weibo a lot [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] However, I actually found the first story a bit boring, and the second ancient poem was really interesting. The crime solving, the psychological portrayal of the characters, and the details of the minor characters were all very good. The protagonists of the two worlds are also set up and are jumping on my xp 🥰 🥰 🥰 I am really good at it. I hope the author will practice more and he will get better and better in the future.

The author's writing style is so awesome 😄😄, I can see my mother and father spinning 360 degrees in the sky and raining down rain on our author's baby. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is also very thin and flowing. The water of the Yangtze River is rolling. The language system is so sweet that my brain is dizzy. I just want to give birth to a daughter for our author's baby. 😄😄😄 A hanging southeast branch will also turn into icing. Another unsolved mystery of the world was born here.

World 2 is really written very well [Sending my heart], I am still recalling it now, the pulling feeling is absolutely amazing! [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] If you love this one, you can definitely give it a try To summarize below, the plot of World One mainly feels like the contrasting settings. Although some of the plot settings are relatively immature, I can't refuse the New Year. Even if I saw the author saying vulgar words, I still had no hesitation and watched World One without hesitation! Overall, it's pretty good, especially the wedding scene of the male and female protagonists! Some comments said it was purely a sadistic story, and I almost didn't read it. Fortunately, I finally read it. I don't think it's sadistic. I've read both he and be, and I think each one is delicious in its own way😋 World 2 is simply amazing. In fact, I rarely read such a long world story, but this sense of gradual pulling, and the emotional development process of the male and female protagonists are very well written, and they will not suddenly get together like a short story. In the end, the female protagonist's love turns to hate, and the feeling of love and hate for the male protagonist is so well written. I originally thought it was a cookie-cutter novel. I have one thing to say, the author is wondering whether he will consider writing a long novel [a heartfelt message]

Shijian Er really stabbed my XP hard, it was shocking and delicious 😘😘🥰. The author's writing style is also very good. The rhythm of the whole story is not draggy, but it is not rushed. The male protagonist is not the only one around the heroine's baby, and every world is like a whole life. What I like the most is that each world has a relatively long chapter, so you can savor it carefully. I like this kind of fast-travel novel that has a relatively long chapter in each small world [Love] [Love] [Love]

Very nice. The author's writing is very good!!! Recommended to watch!! It's just that the heroine didn't see the scheming that she should have. It's not that the protagonist can control it, so I can go in with confidence. There is a slight flaw in the ointment. I thought that when the hero took advantage of the heroine at the beginning, the heroine knew it (after all, the heroine is the attacker. I saw that the heroine also had scheming intentions). I thought the heroine would torture the hero. Who knew that the hero didn't suffer anything and was easily forgiven. I beg the author to refine the relationship between the two so that he can handle it a little more lightly. But I still highly recommend it. Just write it down. I'm really looking forward to the second chapter. The character of the male protagonist is well portrayed and stands up. I want to go in and beat him up hahaha.

So pretty! I started watching it directly from the second world, and then I found that the more I watched, the more fascinating it became! The rhythm is neither too fast nor too slow, just right and very immersive. Maybe it's because I'm a picky person. When reading other books, they either develop quickly and leave a huge sense of emptiness and unreality after tasting them, or they develop slowly and contain a lot of nonsense. I don't know what they are writing about? But this book is completely different! Let go of what needs to be said, pick up what needs to be included, and tell the story in an unhurried and unhurried manner. It will neither make a long speech nor think outside the box to greatly affect the perception. And the characters are well drawn, especially the female protagonist and the male protagonist, each with their own characteristics. The heroine is blind in the second world, but it connects the whole story together, and the emotional line is also delicate, which will not make people feel bored. The male protagonist in the second world was interested from the beginning, then discovered that he and the female protagonist had a common talent, and then talked like confidants... Step by step, he deepened, and finally realized that he was attracted. I haven't started watching the second one yet, I've almost finished watching the second world, but it's so good that I can't help but rate it first, and then go to taste the ending 🥰 [Flowing Kiss] [Sparrow Eater] The current serialization of The Little Mermaid is also my favorite setting. I hope it can be completed as soon as possible. Finally, I wish this book will continue to prosper and there will be more readers who like it 😘 [Please update]

It's really super good-looking, and I fell in love with it. I just finished watching the first world, and I really like it. This rice is also very fragrant, and the writing is really good! I can't bear to watch it. I can't do it anymore. So the author teacher, Xiaosheng is being polite. I have been waiting for the teacher's update recently. I can't wait to see it. Last night, the stars were twinkling. I couldn't sleep. My mind was full of the plot in the article. It's so fast. I just hope that it will be updated quickly to relieve the pain of lovesickness. I hope the teacher will take pity on Xiaosheng sincerely and submit the follow-up chapter quickly. Thank you, Xiaosheng.

So well written!!!!!!! For me who likes to read New Year's Eve, the writing is really good!! When I read it, I felt like I was immersed in the atmosphere of the scene. I really like it. Chef Mi, please update soon!

The character really hit me hard! The heroine is a heartthrob and weak, she looks soft and easy to bully, but she has deep thoughts and scheming, she is not stupid and sweet, and she is not blindly in love; the male protagonist is a possessive and crazy villain with a strong desire for control. The characters in each world are not repeated at all. The world is full of evil. A big man in power uses every step of the marriage contract to steal the heroine from his opponent. The contract The marriage is full of tension; the world's second highest IQ serial killer x a blind female writer, the atmosphere is directly full, dark and ambiguous, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a long-lasting atmosphere, sweet but not greasy, and the ambiguous tension is full. The paranoia, tolerance, and desire for exclusivity of the crazy male protagonist are particularly well portrayed without being greasy and exaggerated. The contrast between carefulness and strong confinement is really getting better with each passing grade. The heroine looks weak, but in fact she has her own little thoughts. She is not passive and allows others to manipulate her. She has a strong sense of gaming. Those who don't like the brainless virgin heroine can feel free to rush. I saved a lot of chapters and read it all at once. It's a good story. Baby Wuyu is a warm person in every world. The evil god in World 3 is so good. In order to get close to Baby Wuyu, he turned into a girl. It's really cool. It's just not enough. It's tied for the first time [please update] [please update] [please update]