Slay the Gods: Bai'e's World-Saving Deed Is Revealed, and the Gods Fall to Their Knees

Good news: Xiaobai is so restored! Bad news: Xiaobai is too reductive... What a quack! The bad hands will return to winter! After looking at it, I seem to have a lot of leaves growing on my body. Why is there a man in a wheelchair with a bow and arrow pointing at me? Am I chosen by God? Great, the tumor on my chest is finally gone!

Let's talk about the shortcomings. The first is that the combat power cannot be balanced. It is impossible for the Ghost Faced King to break through the white defense. It is impossible in ten lifetimes. The God-Slaying combat power is too low-end. Even the human ceiling cannot easily and easily blow up a city. It is better to use the Spear of Divine Punishment to insert a shot at will. The second one feels like it is written purely for misery. It is always bleeding, injured and on fire. When did Bai E's body become so weak? Is this what it means to carry 400 million fire seeds? Not only did it not convey the meaning of Bai E relaxing in the God-Slaying World, it also seemed even more miserable. It felt like it was written purely to highlight the misery. If the body really caught fire, with the fire in Bai E's body, the entire earth would directly burn and explode. Why did Bai E lose his memory? The initial reason why he was seriously injured was not clearly stated. The third question is that Bai E is not so fragile. On the contrary, he is extremely resistant to pressure. The author writes about being too weak. He writes about someone taking care of and caring about Bai. I feel that this aspect is very good, but Bai should not be written like this. Bai E's sunny and cheerful style is not written out, and Bai E is even written as a bit reckless. In fact, it is not. Bai's rationality is terrible, just like Aglaia falling into the golden pool, enduring The pain in my heart, I went to comfort the Blazers, and when they left with the Blazers, I hope the author can write down the daily life of Bai E well. When it comes to suppressing the combat power, the pressure is a bit too harsh. The combat power is the easiest to be criticized. If you want to comply with the setting and logic of the character, the combat power must be grasped well. I hope the author can make good use of the reasonable pressure to suppress the battle. In my opinion, the pressure to break the defense by the Ghost Face King is too harsh. I wish the author will get better and better in writing [Chigua]

Good news: Baie is not ooc Bad news: Baie is not ooc Teacher, my heart ached when I read what you wrote. I wanted to watch the God-killing crowd watch Bai E's experience and it also made me heartbroken [smile][laugh], so I watched a few chapters of the movie @Little Turtle Under the Lotus Leaf

I can still read it now, but there are a lot of things I haven't seen anyone say. 1. As a golden descendant, Bai E has golden blood. I clearly stated that he has red blood. Please explain why. 2. Xiao Bai is not pushed by others to accept his wishes. He is voluntary. Although he lacks self because of this, he is not irrational. He will burn himself when someone asks for help. This is Bai E after burning out. His instinct to fight against the black tide is probably still there. 3. Even if Bai'er is burned out, your battle strength is too strong. Even if he doesn't have the fire, he can fight back and forth with the Titans. You still have the fire. Even if the fire is burned out, your reference should be Kaoslanna. 4. Can Zhenxu suppress the fire? I don't know this, but I'm asking.

Rice... Rice? (Testing) Rice? (Hesitates) Rice? (Trembling) Immortal product? ! (Surprised) (walking and shouting) Rice! (Crying) (holding it up with both hands) (wolfing down) Woo... Woo...(Choking) Good... Good... So delicious rice! (Excited) (Take a big bite) (Smell the aroma of rice) (Breaking out of the ground) (Running around on all fours looking for food) (Seeing the state banquet) (Crawling back into the soil) (Changing into a suit) (Elegantly breaking out of the ground) (Elegantly crawling) (Elegantly picking up a knife and fork) (Elegantly dining) Ahhhh! ! ! I eat, eat, eat! ! ! Look at me eating so much! ! ! I ate a lot! ! ! (Excited mutation) (Snatch the rose from the hands of the zombies next to you) (Crawl over) (Offer the flowers in a strange gesture) (Dine finished) (Elegantly wipe your mouth) (Elegantly get down on all fours) (Elegantly crawl back into the earth) Chef, I will always follow you. . . I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble I run towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble I ran towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumbled and ran towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumbled and ran towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumbled and ran towards you To you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you You ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿♿♿♿ I stumble towards you ♿ ♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿ ♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿I stumble towards you♿♿♿♿

So far, it seems to be okay. The characters' emotions are described in a relatively delicate way. The Bai E written by the author is like the ashes of burning, which makes people feel distressed when looking at it. But there are also shortcomings. Except for Bai E, the other characters in the previous chapters are very similar in language and behavior, but the writing is better in the later chapters. Also, in terms of plot, is it the author's personal design? It's a little different from the original work. It should be to fit the setting of Bai E's illness and weakness. This is quite good. It's different from other works and makes people's eyes fresh. In short, I hope the author can continue to work hard! Recommended for everyone to read. To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. It's all written by AI. You said you made the settings yourself, and then asked AI to expand and modify it for you. I can tolerate it, but at the moment, it seems that it has not been changed at all. So what on earth am I looking at? Very speechless. . .

It's okay, overall it's quite interesting, but having said that, the author didn't use AI to polish it. From the beginning, it gave me a clear sense of AI polishing. After all, AI can't do everything in detail, so some loopholes in the text are obvious. Because I also use my own OC to polish the plot with AI, so I can feel it immediately. I suggest you read it twice after polishing it.

The smell of AI is relatively strong (personally, I can't tell if AI is used, but it sounds very similar to it. There are many inexplicable metaphors, such as comparing the ghost-faced man to a math paper. Maybe my imagination is not rich enough and I don't know what the connection is. Of course, it may also be because my expectations are too high. Xiaobai's combat power has been severely suppressed. If you want to read a cool article, you can retreat first (you can also test it, but the ghost-faced man makes me more anxious) Xiaobai's positioning here should mainly be beautiful, strong and miserable (it seems to only be miserable at the moment, I'm not sure and I'll take another look) All in all, if you want to watch Xiaobai have fun, you can quit now, but if you like beauty, strength and misery, you can pay attention to this book (except for the strong AI flavor, the idea is actually good)

It's very, very beautiful, very restored, and Bai E blends into them without being awkward at all. It's very very beautiful, very real. It's very cute, everyone is very nice, very warm daily life, and very beautiful. Although the progress is a bit slow, each one is written in great detail and very natural, well, then. Now I am very much looking forward to Bai E regaining his memory and starting watching movies. Why do I feel like the content is all about fighting monsters, being unable to control yourself, being reminded by your teammates, and sublimating. In fact, it can be seen that Xiaobai is controlling himself a little bit, but it feels like he keeps writing this. It's a bit boring, and the dialogue is so boring. It feels like there are only a few sentences.

It's already over 20 chapters, when can I watch the movie?