Slay the Gods: Qiye's Starry Night

Um. . The description of this book is a bit straightforward, and the author has changed the life and death of some minor characters, but generally it follows the plot of the original work Zhanshen. This is a good thing, but it also means there is nothing new. I also personally feel that the emotional aspect of 071 seems to be developing a bit fast and the writing is a bit anxious. The author could consider more descriptions of psychological activities and emotional changes, otherwise it will feel a bit abrupt. . . Most of the people who come to read this book come here for the dual male protagonists of Ben Tie + Zhan Shen, or for those like me who don't care about Death. Therefore, I personally hope that the author can write more about Death's personal plot, instead of blindly promoting the plot and the emotional development between him and 071. Please don't let Immortal Tu and Lin Qiye sell for the sake of CP. Maybe the author can add more plots of their own to make them full of souls in the writing. . . . . . These are just my personal thoughts. I like this book very much. My wording may be a bit off when I write this, but that is not my intention. The author writes very well, and I have no intention of evaluating the author. Thank you, I hope the author can see it. .

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