I'm a Punk, but the Girl I Kidnapped Is Trouble

Author, author, this cover and title of the book are so hard for me to finish [face covering] Who would have thought to come in and see the text like this? Unexpectedly beautiful [stunned]. I tied it in one breath without skipping a chapter. There is no stereotyped villain, and the characters who appear are all intelligent. The setting of the male protagonist is quite interesting. I don't think there is anything unreasonable about it. I like the male protagonist's character very much [laughs] [laughs]. The emotional drama between mother and son was pretty good. The heroine [adoration] [adoration] is like a fairy. I also like this character very much. I like fried chicken! ! ! Also, for such a beautiful novel, it must have a single female protagonist, right? [Laughs][laughs] I don't want that courtesan! ! !

Evaluation: The title and cover of the book are given to NPC, the plot is given to top quality, the writing style and character creation are given to ramming Three updates a day is already considered the best on Tomato, and it would be great if I could keep doing it. So far, it seems to be non-toxic and pure love. I hope it won't involve such cliche stuff as the heroine having a fiancé. If you can maintain the previous writing style, you can look forward to the future.

Book Title: Finished Cover: ❤️Attract readers' interest in reading Content: High-grade grain and grass The protagonist is a gangster, and his behavior is in line with the character. Except for the heroine, whose meaning is unclear (although it is a bit dramatic, but it is acceptable), the character's facial makeup is not flat (the group portrait is OK), come on author

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Dong Zhuo. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave M4 will kill you if you shoot six times. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the character description is very good!

How should I put it? In terms of writing style alone, it has reached a level that most of Tomato's AI literary novels cannot reach. After reading it in one sitting, the text feels very comfortable. In my humble opinion, the connection between the plot and the emotional drama of the male and female protagonists needs to be polished. It may be that after reading too many fast-food novels, I am not used to the slow-paced flow, but I feel that the pull between the male and female protagonists is not enough. I mean, I feel that apart from taking a small advantage at the beginning, the male character has been suffering in the future. In terms of the promotion and power of the protagonist, there is still a gap like a gulf with the female protagonist. However, as long as you keep writing and use enough space to describe it slowly, it will not hurt. But so far, it is still not enough to watch. In every sense, I'd better give it a five-star support first. I can understand that the heroine, who is in a high position and is committed to helping the hero, is aggrieved and angry because of suspicion, and I can also understand that the hero has a low self-esteem and is sensitive about gains and losses because of his mud-legged background. But this is not the reason for the two of them to keep fighting. Appropriateness is the lubricant of the relationship. If it is too much, it will cause stomachache. Nowadays, it's time for more ambiguous and flirtatious emotional scenes. Otherwise, the male protagonist in the main plot will still be struggling at the bottom. It can even be said that the female protagonist packaged it for him. He is still a big ant, not interesting at all, and the emotional scenes continue to drag on without progress, which is very frustrating.

It's good to watch, very good to watch. I came here after watching the short drama. I really like the quirky heroine. Fortunately, it's pure love. But when will Miss Li and Wan Ning'er know about the existence of the female protagonist? The male protagonist is very charming, but his charm does not need to be demonstrated by many women falling in love with him, and after all, most people come here for pure love. There will always be a bit of an awkward feeling when seeing these places. Anyway, I felt a little annoyed when I saw them appear, although the girl It's innocent, but the way they describe their interest in the male protagonist in their words makes me annoyed. Maybe it's because I'm a little ptsd from watching some male videos. After all, I fall in love with someone inexplicably when I'm in a relationship. Even if I don't fall in love, I can have an affair. It's like some stories marked with a single female protagonist. Although there is only one female protagonist, it does not prevent the male protagonist from having an ambiguous relationship with others, tsk tsk. But it's just that I feel a little uncomfortable with this description. Overall, the male protagonist has not taken any extraordinary actions so far. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is still very sweet, but the male protagonist still has a long way to go if he wants to marry the female protagonist. This article feels like it has just started. Come on, author, as long as you continue to write about pure love, I will support you!

It's so right, so right. Fortunately, I wasn't dissuaded from reading it because of the title and cover. I was so happy to read it in one go. I love the plot and characters! It exploded! Looking for gold in tomatoes really makes me cry.

This book is very well written, mainly because every word is new. I have read a lot of books, and most of them are copied based on a popular plot, but this book is different. It has copied new tricks, and it is also a grassroots counterattack. This book does not have as many female protagonists, systems, etc. As other books. The biggest feature of the book is that everyone has a clear distinction between good and evil. The descriptions of each person are three-dimensional and each person has distinct characteristics. I particularly like this. It has the protagonist's resourcefulness, which is not a cool novel. I feel that the protagonist's ability to recover very quickly is not necessary. If it is added, it will be useless.

Writing fluency: 8.5/10 Plot appeal: 9.0/10 Structural integrity: 8.5/10 Character three-dimensionality: 8/10 Topic depth: 9/10 (there should be more in-depth ones later, so look forward to it) Level of innovation: 9/10 (fresh or routine) Type satisfaction: 9.5/10 (Does it meet expectations) The protagonist's three views: the category of normal people One sentence review: It's still worth seeing in Tomato

I won't say too many good things. This book is really good in terms of plot twists, character creation, etc. It is of top quality. However, I noticed a big or small problem. Perhaps because of the three updates a day, some of the author's writing habits are very obvious. For example: Regardless of the length of appearance, identity and personality, quite a few characters use this sentence pattern in their dialogues: "It's not... But..." What's the problem? The character's personality is sometimes weak because of this. The problem of homogeneity is very obvious when a role requires a lot of talking once it is entered. Because that's what most of the characters in this book who have any sense say. Of course, what I pointed out is a very specific issue, and different perspectives may lead to different opinions. Anyway, other than that, I don't find any intolerable shortcomings. I will continue reading.