What Cool and Aloof Big Sister? She's Clearly a Flirtatious Beauty

It's very nice. Congratulations to xql99. The horse is turned off in a timely manner, the rhythm is well controlled, and the early shaping has a strong sense of pulling (very good to knock on). The language is quite interesting and has a light sense of humor. Jiang's character creation is very layered. In the early stage, she had a slight sense of escaping from the outside world without caring about the outside world, but she was able to stand up for Lin because of the boys' disrespect for Lin Yu. Jiang herself is a very good person, she deserves to be loved, and she deserves to be loved. Lin's words are mainly because the high intelligence of the cool fishing type (the contrast between people in front and behind) pokes my xp more. The two people can be regarded as guiding each other and saving each other, just like all the light in each other's life, shining and warming each other. Finally, I wish xql99~[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Found a treasure novel! The plot, characterization, and emotions are all very rich! Not only the two protagonists, but also the supporting characters' psychological journeys are well described! Lin Qingqian and Jiang Wang's story from secret love to confession, the pain and happiness they experienced together were very vividly described, without any nonsense, and the plot did not drag out, which is really great! Super super recommended! The author updates every day [crying] so touching [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing is very solid. I originally read it with the intention of giving it a try, but it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking and long-lasting. The writing style is outstanding, smooth and delicate; and the character creation is quite rich, there is no character breakdown in the early and late stages, and the emotions are just right; the plot develops like a mountain spring melting in winter, slowly flowing away; anyway, it breaks away from the visual sense of ordinary online articles, and I plan to read it seriously later.

Beautiful! The emotional drama between the two people is very engaging for the readers, allowing them to deeply understand their psychological and physical states (it's a bit official, right?) Oh, the writing is better, and the horse-falling is timely and unobtrusive, and the assists from other people are also in place.

Super invincible and beautiful. I can continue reading this book during the bottleneck period. The author's writing is very good, the plot is novel and attractive, and the characters are also very good [Adoration][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Love][Love][Love]

It must be five stars, the plot is tight, the connection is strong, the author's writing is super good, the characters are vividly drawn, and you can feel the sweetness in the sourness.

I really like the way the author gives the information a little bit of background and finally spells out the truth. When I first downloaded the software, I randomly searched for the name and came across this book. At that time, it only had 100,000 words and not a single comment. Unlike many popular books, the author did not pile up any content about critical attacks, but just told a story. The early stage is not very attractive, but the later stage is really hard to get out of. It tells a story of mutual redemption. I think the most powerful thing is that the three concepts in the article are very upright. When the love rival came out, I subconsciously wondered if it was another classic female competition scene. As a result, the author's text was off-kilter and showed me the attitude of a group of girls who have a bottom line and help each other and recognize each other when facing their love rivals. There is no bloody misunderstanding, the two protagonists just love each other seriously. In a text where the general environment stirs up conflicts through various quarrels and conflicts, provoking readers' emotional ups and downs, the author seems so different and insists on writing a story that is always tender. The most important thing is! The author has not saved the manuscript, and has been updating it for 2 months regardless of rain or shine. Starting from 2 updates a day, he has never stopped updating or asked for leave, and he has added updates at every turn. This self-discipline is admirable. Especially when I looked at it all the way, the author was a newcomer. It was his first book to be written. At first it was 170,000 words and no one seemed to read it. But he stuck to his heart and never gave up. Seeing that this book is now being liked by people, I am really happy for the author from the bottom of my heart! It feels like she is like Jiang Wang in the article, like a little sun, or in other words, Jiang Wang is her soul.

You can really write!

It's so sweet to me. [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Jiang Wang, do you dare to be more direct! Lin Qingqian, don't be too in love [blows a kiss] and raises the banner for Jiang Lin! (I tried my best...[Sending my heart])

Teacher, you must have 300,000 words of the ending + extra chapter in your draft box. Send it out quickly and let me take a look.