Reborn in Hong Kong Showbiz: My Brother’s Little Lucky Star

My dear, you have written so well. The plot is very good. The interaction between the heroine and her brother is warm and touching. However, I don't want my brother to have a romantic relationship. I hope that the heroine will not be too far away from her brother when she grows up. Also, it is best for the heroine to always be with her brother and not let her be alone with her grandparents. Being alone together, it seems that the relationship between the brother and his family, especially his parents, is not very good. I have read a lot of books about the brother. In some books, the relationship between the brother and his parents is not good. The heroine wants to improve their relationship. She feels that they are quite wronged and it looks a little awkward (personal opinion)

The writing is very good. I really hope that my brother in another parallel world is like this. I am very touched.

[With demining] The idea is good, but I feel that the author used AI to write it. There were at least three self-contradictions within ten chapters. After updating within two days, I forgot what I wrote the day before the next day [shocked] (Example: Today I described getting a pill when I went out. Zitou, the second day's update said that the heroine went to sing twice and then turned into a double ponytail. And today's description of the manager bringing people to dress up the house for a party, the next day's update has no memory of the manager bringing people there himself.)

I don't write much about my brother's entertainment industry, but the subject matter is great! The story is heartwarming, but too childish and the AI ​​is too obvious! I couldn't stand it several times! I persisted because I liked my brother very much! ! ! ! [Holds face] Seeing as how little my brother has written! I hope the author can improve it! No low marks this time!

Ping has endless regrets, brother needs to be well. At the same time, I hope to have a sweet love.

A heartwarming story about peace, regret and redemption. In reality, he and they are pitiable. The author makes them happy and complete in a parallel world, which is quite good.

Maybe it's because I also like Leslie Cheung. I burst into tears after reading the first few chapters. I thought it would be great if there was such a treasure in reality to redeem him. But then I thought about how miserable the child's mother was. The writing is very good! Recommend! Recommend!

It's really super warm! It's great to see my brother getting rid of those shadows little by little. The author's writing is really great! ! ! It's not enough to update quickly! ! ! !

Keep writing, don't give up

It's quite beautiful, and the writing is good. I would like to suggest updating twice a day. One update a day is too slow and makes people lose interest in books. But the book dies as soon as it is raised