Harry Potter: A Potions Professor from Italy

It's so beautiful, don't you know, ah, it makes me smile in a jittery way all the time. The plot is smooth, the emotional line is a bit smooth, and the plot is also very reasonable. As for the characters, I don't think there's anything serious about OOC. Ace's character creation is also very good. Are there really such perfect people in the world? Cedric is also very good, gentle, responsible, and capable. It's no secret that I reread this book three times before it was finished. I would like to ask, can I write a fanfic for this book? If I can't, I won't write it. If I can, I'll see if I can post it on the book circle later.

I like Ace Vesario very much. He cares for his students and provides gentle after-school tutoring. He has unlimited wealth and strength. I like the author for writing such a beautiful novel. I wish you lots of luck! No matter what they encounter, they can get through it safely, and everyone can survive. I hope they will not encounter danger, and when they encounter danger, they can turn it into safety and be safe (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

The character of Ace is very well written. He is rich and helps others. When he holds cram schools for students, he prepares equipment at his own expense and receives charity support. The characters and storyline are well written, but! ! I feel that the emotional line is a bit abrupt. I suddenly knew Cedric's feelings in the early part. Then I saw that Snape had a lot of scenes in the early stage, much more than Cedric. Although Cedric was written in the later part, it was with Draco. I felt that Cedric's scenes were led by Draco. . . Author: Are Cedric and Ace really the main CPs? Why doesn't something look right to me?

It's very beautiful, you know, the little girl is embarrassed, the writing is also very delicate, the plot is also very nb, the protagonist is also very gentle, this year nb can't explain [making a face] [making a face] [making a face]

It's pretty cool. What's the point of this Tomato scoring system? [Angry] I still need 9 points. The protagonist is a gentle type, taking care of every student, and a person who can benefit the world with his righteousness. The content of Hogwarts Legacy connects quite naturally. The emotional scenes are clearly explained, and although the confession is a bit quick, the cause and effect can be deduced. It is a kind of light refreshing. The description in this article is relatively delicate. If you like refreshing writing, I can't figure out why some people can't tell the difference between the original content and the content with Hogwarts Legacy added. Tomato has the original Harry Potter book, go read it [face covering] Even if you read too many naked fan stories, you should be able to guess the general plot. The general world line has not changed. Hogwarts Legacy mainly focuses on the protagonist's improvement of combat power. It is worth watching.

Halfway through, I couldn't help it anymore and jumped out to recommend this book to everyone. Super pretty! ! ! ! My favorite part of it is the transformation of Xiao Long, who has grown from a lonely and struggling young man in the distance to a real pure-blood aristocrat, and the trio of Aces are so cute and adorable [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss] At first, I felt that the original world line was a bit cumbersome, but after the two world lines were concluded, it felt like something from God. Goddess, I will always follow you [shy] There is no intention of beating the cook here, nor is there any idea of attacking the teacher. I just raise my own little question: Why was Ace so protective of the students in the first place? This kind of thing seems to require some emotional accumulation? Maybe it's because I don't have enough sense of responsibility that I can't understand haha (no offense, please don't scold me😭) Attachment: I will review the book later when I see a good plot. I heard that the longer the reading time, the higher the score. Why is the score of this book so low? I am so sad. I have seriously recommended it to all my relatives and friends. In addition, I am sorting out my Zai Zai information. I don't know if my wife can accept a Zai Zai Wuwu with a partial story line and a lot of personal settings. I really want to see the interaction between my Zai Zai and Ace! Make a wish to the teacher to see me woo woo

The plot of the book is overall very smooth and comfortable, and Ace's character is well portrayed, without any major poisonous points. The only thing is that the emotional line is a bit stiff. Seder's feelings for Ace came out very... Inexplicably, even though it was very sudden. The subsequent development of the emotional line is still very sweet. This is a very good book among Tomato's HP fanfics, but its current rating is low according to Tomato's rating standards.

Ace Vesario is a very gentle person who loves students, knows right from wrong, and is friendly to others. With the elegance of a true nobleman, he treats others with neither contempt nor arrogance. But he also has the edge of a family heir. Ace Vesario, a person who is very suitable for writing heartthrobs

Unexpectedly, this is a passable fanfic. Although the writing style is stiff and sluggish at the beginning, from the perspective of the protagonist, the author uses clumsy descriptions to reveal step by step the ambition and wisdom of a family heir. From the introduction, I thought the protagonist was a bold and simple rich kid, but he is unexpectedly gentle. However, I still feel that the protagonist is a bit generous, or warm-hearted? Although everything he did can be attributed to reputation and family, the description is still too deliberate. As a rationale, it is impossible for the family to have a helper as the main thing, and family interests are secondary. However, I haven't read much, and the narrative may be too one-sided. Mainly because I haven't read such a comfortable article in a long time. Give it a 5-star rating and recommend it.

Since this is my first time watching the relationship between the protagonist and Cedric, I don't know if it's good or not. The emotional line is well written, the fried chicken in the main line is delicious, the whole image of the protagonist is very three-dimensional [like it], and the writing is also very consistent with the character [heartfelt]. Push hard push