A Comfortable Hotel Life in the Apocalypse

The beginning is not bad, I hope it won't stretch my hips later on. It's too watery, with a lot of repetitive plot descriptions.

It's so well written. I watched it until the end. It's true that people only choose to be alone after being hurt. After all, it's safer this way. Why does it become more and more childish the more I write it? After this cat came out, I felt that the protagonist really had no brains.

It's not bad. Although the AI ​​flavor is quite strong, the creativity is good. The rules of the hotel can block zombies, which is very comfortable. The scene of zombies rushing into the hotel is quite boring. The group portrait is just a group portrait. The business apocalypse is also a good relaxing novel.

I have read Chapter 14 so far, and my initial impression is okay. There is nothing particularly serious about it. I just hope that the author can change the point that food is free. Even if you need to spend 1 point to buy food, you can continue it as you like. Something is wrong when I see it later. The paragraphs are very strange. One paragraph is divided into several paragraphs; and then I always write repetitive plots. For example, the description of the aunt watching people serve food and rolling around can be repeated two or three times in one chapter; the supporting characters talk a lot... The male protagonist is also like a personal computer.

The apocalyptic theme is still good, but after I saw the last two articles, I don't know how your hotel makes money. The Thunder Fire Team occupied that one and worked alone. The money comes from this. It's okay to upgrade slowly, but your hotel is about half empty. It won't work without the means of sending messages after the upgrade. There is also the need to have alcohol and tobacco in supermarkets. It is not free. Can it be the same as in the store? There are zombies. In the future, the grocery stores can put evolver potions on the shelves. The author can refer to the doomsday article. Author, you have already reached 200 chapters. In the future, the zombies will become stronger and the guns will become useless. The grocery store can put a weapon on the shelf, and the medical station can put a potion on the shelf. After upgrading, it can receive information, listen to the guests, and encourage people to go out to hunt zombies to adapt to the doomsday environment. Also, if the protagonist is too weak, it can be improved. After upgrading, the hotel can become a human stronghold and ignite a little human spark. The above are some of my suggestions, you can refer to them.

It is a very interesting article, although it is systematic, but most of it is relatively realistic, not exaggerated, and the protagonist is not the Holy Father. The whole article focuses more on the survival of mankind in the end of the world. I like this kind of group portrait writing, which neither weakens nor overemphasizes the protagonist. I hope the author can update it more quickly

To be honest, compared to free meals, hot pot and the like are not very competitive. They can both fill the stomach. It is really hard to understand why Hua Jingshi buys rice. Why not add some limited-time buffs to the crystal rice, such as cold resistance, immunity to viruses, and increased strength for a certain period of time after meals?

It looks good, I like it, the protagonist is so decisive, I like this tone, the author is great, can you update it faster? I like it very much, I just like it!

One article is really good. It is a group portrait article. There are corruptions in the military, but also love and justice, various aspects of life, and slaps in the face. I read some comments and said that some troublemakers were not executed but just deported. However, there is one article that said that people in New China were not so murderous. The main culprit was killed. Some provocateurs were wavering. It is actually not a big deal to block people in hotels. One article is really good.

It's a good book. Why don't you upgrade the protagonist's weapon shop? I hope that after the hotel is upgraded, the protagonist will upgrade to the weapon shop. Otherwise, this upgrade will cost 50,000 crystals, and the next level will cost hundreds of thousands? Do you have to wait until the year of the monkey and the month of the horse? Upgrade the weapon shop so they can kill zombies and get the crystal cores back.