Harry Potter: Miss Longbottom’s Daily School Life

The heroine has a good personality, has great ideas about her own development, and is mature and determined. It is obvious that this is a qualified fanfic that clearly states that the female protagonist is the protagonist of this article. This has already eliminated 90% of the fanfics written by female fans. I hope to continue to focus on developing the strength of the heroine and the growth of the protagonist, supplemented by love, and interspersed with details. Now this ratio is very good. I can feel that the heroine is particularly outstanding, and she continues to learn and hone herself. The Malfoy interactions are also cute. At page 633, I forgot how many chapters there were, like 70 chapters? The latest is the chapter about Colin's accident near "I'm not interested in your leather drum".

I feel that this book is very thoughtfully written. The heroine's journey through "Harry Potter" did not take away the halo of the protagonist. She knew her position very well. She told Dumbledore the information she knew, and then focused on her own growth: potions, healing magic, and original potions. From beginning to end, she put her life first, learned her skills well, and let her parents say a few more words. In her heart, her family was far more important than anything else. Then Neville in the book is also heartwarming. I think he is the kind of character that makes people want to hug him. I feel that the brother-sister relationship between him and Nina is one of the warmest parts of the book. According to the current situation, the plot is not sluggish and has a lot of ideas. There are also some private settings, but not much, which is acceptable.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very mature, and it's not OOC. He also has a very charming personality. The heroine is particularly attractive to me. She has a clear sense of love and hate. She is very talented but not dogmatic. She is a very energetic little wizard! And he didn't forcefully participate in the main plot, but slowly got involved in it. The author's writing style was so good that I wanted to kiss Nina! There isn't a really annoying character in the book so far, wow wow, it's really good to watch! ! ! ! The emotional lines are also very natural, and if you draw them slowly, you will feel like a fairy.

Highly recommended! This pair of happy enemies are really at odds with each other, from hating each other at the beginning to competing with each other, but as the plot progresses, this Malfoy begins to become different. He will stop Nina in front of the troll (although he is also scared to death), he will get weird because Nina and Holmes said a few more words (and then refuse to admit it), and he will secretly observe how many times Nina looks at Harry in the library... The heroine is also very strong. She did not think about being a savior as soon as she traveled through time. On the contrary, she was very real, afraid of Voldemort and afraid of pain. But this "cowardice" is exactly her protective color. When things really happen, she is more decisive than anyone else. In order to help Neville get the memory ball back, she knocks Malfoy off the broom. When she finds out that Flint and his gang want to retaliate against her, she immediately thinks of a way to fight back. Nina says "lie down" but works harder than anyone else. She complains, but she doesn't miss a single thing she should do.

The most rare thing about this HP fanfic is that it takes into account the background of the original work and the original gentle perspective, without deviating from the worldview of the original work and forcing a cool story. The heroine Nina is reborn into a wizarding family with memories of her past life. She is well aware of the tragic fate of the Longbottom family. She does not try to change the outcome of the war in one step, but works in small ways: seriously polishing the transfiguration technique in class, always protecting her brother who has low self-esteem, quietly paying attention to Dumbledore's plans, and treating everyone around him tenderly. The opening scene in St. Mungo's Ward is particularly heart-wrenching. Looking at her parents who have been drained of their sanity by a spell, she hides all her uneasiness and silently makes a wish to become stronger. The portrayal of family affection is restrained and easy to cry. The campus part is full of lively fireworks: the train is looking for toads, the Sorting Hat pulls its heart, the Transfiguration class is the first to complete the spell, and the twins jump in chocolate pranks. Every famous scene fits the original character of the characters and is not OOC. The foreshadowing is restrained, and plots such as Professor Quirrell's garlic smell and the exchange of memories in the pensieve are carried out step by step. There are both light-hearted laughter of the fight between classes and the tension of the dark forces. The gentle and healing undertone runs through the whole text, making it relaxing and immersive to read [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] The author simply writes so well [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing], rich in content and full of emotion, and the key is the concise writing style [like][like][like][like] It is so beautiful, it is so beautiful that one brush is not enough, I just read it twice or three times [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][like][like][like]

Very very very beautiful! I feel that the image of the heroine is very clear and three-dimensional, and it does not just revolve around the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It covers many aspects. The most important thing is that there is no ooc, no ooc, no ooc.

It looks good. As a HP fanfic, it is very faithful to the original work. The characters are well created and the feeling of rejoicing as enemies is really good. Also, Neville's creation portrays his bravery very well. I like it very much🥰. Keep up the good work, author!

Malfoy's arrogance is the sharp thorns all over his body, and Longbottom's softness is the glimmer in his heart. They used to be at each other's throats and disliked each other, but each time they stood side by side, they could clearly see each other's true appearance under their disguise. When the prejudices collapsed and the sharp edges converged, the two hostile ends finally rushed to a belated love.

After reading the check-in, it turns out that duplicitous preferences are always the most touching! This is a novel with a full sense of atmosphere. It breaks away from the established plot of the original work and writes the two-way pull between Draco and Nina in a delicate and moving way. What I like best is the early stage. The two people are tit-for-tat enemies at the beginning. They obviously care deeply, but they are used to disguise themselves with arrogant shells. Their tough-talking and awkward looks are vivid and real, which breaks the impression of villains and makes the characters more full and three-dimensional. And! The big story not only contains the daily life of young and ambiguous love, but also fits the grand background of the original work. The most touching thing is the love that runs in both directions. There is no abrupt and bloody plot. From the first grade to the sixth grade at Hogwarts, the love slowly ferments during the long wait for campus. DaDa really grasped the unique atmosphere of Hogwarts very well, not only retaining the world view of the original work, but also writing a romance that is unique to their story. Highly recommended for everyone to watch! [Learned][Learned]

This HP fanfic is really healing! The heroine Nina is Neville's biological sister. She traveled through time and knows all the plot of the original novel, but she doesn't want to forcefully rewrite the main plot. She just wants to accompany her brother to live a peaceful life at Hogwarts. The character creation is particularly in line with the temperament of the original work, and there is no character breakdown. Getting along with Hermione, Harry, and Ron is natural and lively. Even the scenes with Draco are very interesting. They dislike each other in the early stage, and there is a sense of tension. There are plenty of daily scenes, including classes, cooking in the auditorium, and the Weasley twins' pranks. The scenes are full of fireworks. The foreshadowing of the main plot is gentle and does not force a big battle to hurt your heart. Those who like a relaxed campus fooling song can be more explosive and HP-oriented. [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Asking for explosive update][Asking for explosive update][Asking for explosive update]