I'm Spider-Man! I Stop a Train with My Bare Hands and Scare Homelander to Tears

The writing is not bad, but there are a few points that are hard to read. For example, the combat power of Homelander. I looked up Homelander's combat power, and it must be at least 500 tons. The original Spider-Man couldn't beat him.

It's good, the plot is tight, and it's exactly the same as the original.

Personally, I feel it would be better to simply give all abilities without any restrictions. The requirement to do good deeds feels too limiting.

Author, I'm giving you a one-day deadline to update 10,000 words, or I'll have my underlings injure your scales. I'm not kidding, I have more underlings than you can count: 100,000 Belials, 10,000 pregnant Godzillas, 1,000 Sun Wukongs, 5,000 T7 thermal imaging, 3,000 Chengdu Supermen, 500,000 Mothers of Ultra, and a gang of 10 billion Alien beings.

It's pretty good. He has Spider-Man's abilities, but he doesn't let the villains get away with it time and time again, causing himself further trouble. The only problem is that Homelander's personality feels a bit too kind; something's not right. One more thing, I was busy earlier, but if I included this, it should be three stars. You killed the voyeur/invisible man, so why did you let the train engine go the first time? I don't understand.

The main character is the evil Spider-Man, not Peter Parker's Spider-Man. It features many famous scenes from the movies, albeit in different settings. Pulling a train becomes pulling an airplane, and rescuing Gwen isn't done with spider webs anymore... The updates are alright. Although there's one chapter a day, each one is only about 4,000 words, which is about the same as other authors who write two chapters a day, each with about 2,000 words.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the protagonist is given power too frequently. He gets it even for doing good deeds. He doesn't feel like Spider-Man; he feels more like a robot doing missions. Secondly, I feel that giving the second suit to Venom wasn't a good choice. Although the Venom suit is cool, it has significant side effects.

It's a great read, but the portrayal of Homelander differs somewhat from his appearance in Black Robe. In the early Black Robe version, Homelander was powerful, intelligent, and very wary. However, considering this is a wish-fulfillment story, the change in Homelander is understandable.

"People say the clover symbolizes happiness, and the four-leaf clover symbolizes luck. I think, if I were a clover, then you would be my fourth leaf. What I mean is, I'm lucky to have met you." "I love you, I love you, I love you." 𝓭𝓮𝓷𝓲𝓰𝓻𝓪𝓽𝓮𝓭 𝓻𝓸𝓼𝓮, 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓪𝓻𝓮 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝓮𝓽𝓮𝓻𝓷𝓪𝓵 𝓼𝓪𝓵𝓿𝓪𝓽𝓲𝓸

This is exactly what I wanted to see! The original beating everything!