Can Even the Most Beautiful Passerby Become Everyone’s Beloved?

It's pretty good. It can be seen that the heroine is trying to create a detached feeling. Some small details of the supporting characters are also written in. However, it feels a bit too much. The constant emphasis on the heroine's indifference results in a lot of repetition in the plot and dialogue. The look and feel is not very good. Some other aspects can be used to supplement it.

It wasn't just them who fell in love with the girl, but me as well. Although the introduction is beautiful, it doesn't spend much time describing what it's like to be attracted by appearance. Of course, I also like that kind of thing, but inevitably the image of the protagonist is very superficial. But Lin Su, it's been a long time since I've seen such a gentle little person who is light and a little dazed, and I'm so excited. I finally fell in love with the charm of the cold-faced cuteness. A_A I didn't say anything, but I was attracted by Lin Su's cuteness. The girl's image really jumped out of the page. I haven't seen such a charming and three-dimensional protagonist in a long time. The girl is like a gust of wind, gently blowing across the faces of pedestrians, only running towards the destination. After you are attracted by the gentle wind, you try to meet the wind again by chance on its journey. Well, that's what happens to men and women who are attracted to girls. The very charming little sister is like a cute little human machine in the first world. The outside world is harassing her (trying to compete for her attention). The younger sister has been quiet for many years (counting money). No matter how the plot develops in the outside world, she just works hard in her own direction. It is natural for them to be curious about the strength of their sister! Moreover, the supporting characters are also very interesting, and everyone feels like they are alive. It's quite rare nowadays. Many characters are black and white, but the world often doesn't tolerate so many extremes. In the second world, although Wen Yining is the villain of the original novel, he is really a very charming person. He is the kind of teacher in the school who although the requirements are stricter, but he teaches sincerely and speaks out when there are problems. If you choose a tutor, he should be quite popular, because I want to choose hhhh. Moreover, the content of the description magnified his personality charm infinitely. There is a saying that people who work hard in their own profession are really charming. The charm overflowed during the review and explanation! But in fact, his charm comes from the author's writing, and his literary knowledge is very solid. I can already imagine my gentle and wise elder sister whispering in my ear (puppy drooling jpg.) Overall, it is a very delicious article. Ordinary daily life can easily become like a running account, but the author grasps it very well and makes people read. It is especially delicious! It also made me eat the holy feast on tomatoes! It feels so good! The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to eat, and I still want to eat! (Pull up) (Shake vigorously) (Trying to shake out the saved manuscript)

The content is quite interesting so far, but the writing style is lacking and could be improved. By the way, the author went a bit too far in writing the point where the heroine is mediocre. It's really not obvious in the heartthrob aspect, it really feels like a passerby. If you watch too much, it will become a bit boring.

I feel that the villains in each world are more attractive than the protagonists. Ling Yuan in the first world was more impressive than Escape and Who. The article repeatedly writes about his confusion when he logged into the game later and stood in the game square. It was really touching [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Wen Yining in the second world is even more like a fairy. Compared with him, the original male and female protagonists are just passers-by. God among gods [shy][shy]

This book is amazing and deserves to be seen. The writing is really very good. "When a writer picks up a pen, has he ever thought about whether the person he wrote about would ask him a question if he stood in front of him. "Why do you suffer for me?" " "I wanted to call you, but there was no sound when I opened my mouth, probably because the sycamore leaves fell too loudly. " Forgot to say. Still relatively good. Basically, there are no poems that disobey women. Although it is not female-oriented enough, it is still acceptable. At least a lot of gender-neutral words have been given back to women. The heroine has a strong sense of subjectivity and will not be forced. There are quite a few female roles. Maybe it touches on the theme of heartthrobs, with male and female roles split equally? The author's writing skills are very good, very good. Then the characters, characters and plots are all pretty well written. It's really a relatively high-quality quick travel article. Especially nowadays, there are many fast-paced games, which have a very strong fast-paced feeling, where you hit the counterattack in the face, and then fight with the protagonist or the original characters. This one is just a casual one, very warm, plain and beautiful. After I fell in love with it, I felt that the heroine was great and so cute. In each world, I interacted with some women, and those girls were so cute, I remember them all.

As I get better, I didn't like the world of e-sports when I first started watching it. I felt that the supporting characters in it all had evil intentions, especially the male characters, which was inexplicable. The second world is just so so. But the one about the Third World and the Republic of China was very good, and people who watched it felt soft. The writing of the next few worlds is not very good, there are always rats and mice mixed in, which is disgusting, and some supporting characters are particularly annoying, and they are not suitable for the protagonist to control, because generally the original heroine is more prominent than the heroine, and the relationship line is always determined to bring the two heroines together. Later, the supporting male and female protagonists also began to respond, and the soft-hearted god came.

After watching the first world, I came here to review it. It was really well written, using a white description method but not boring at all. Being poisoned by short videos and impatient, I actually finished reading it word for word, and the text automatically entered my brain. The character of the heroine is very attractive to me. She is calm, does her own thing, and will not participate in unnecessary bad things. Each character is well drawn and has a unique personality and style of doing things. Maybe it's because the pace of real life is too fast, so I yearn for the slow-paced life in the article, especially the travel articles are so well written. Although they are all about small things in life, I can feel the smell of human fireworks from them. The first world is one that I will watch over and over again. In the end, I just want to say that the author is really awesome.

To be honest, I felt very unexpected when I first read it, because I have always been a person who likes fast-paced things. What I wanted to read was vigorous love, vigorous slaps in the face, and vigorous stories. But after I really read it, I found that this book is very different from what I thought. The heroine is really a stranger. She has her own thoughts and her own life. It's not the kind of story where you just want to escape the protagonist and the original plot, but live out your own personality and look. This is really good. It's a kind of tranquil feeling of long flowing water, which makes people feel very peaceful and comfortable. It's not the common routine of heartthrob novels that torture themselves first and then feel great. It's really a unique style. I recommend everyone to check it out.

I have been having a hard time reading the text during this period, and I can see that the writing is good in many books, but my heart is a little restless, and I always feel that it is almost meaningless. I flipped over and accidentally opened this book and read the latest chapter in one breath. I am not bored anymore, and my mood is also lifted. I am also very surprised - maybe it is a little bit like the right time and the right place? ? When my mind was wandering, I came across a light and comfortable novel. The setting really hit my liking. The design of the character and the writing ideas won my heart. I felt that it met all my expectations. I even realized that this was what I wanted the moment it was satisfied. It is beautiful, upright, and occasionally has funny cute spots. It felt like I was born to DaDa. Moreover, the writing style is really superb, the words and sentences are as beautiful as prose, and they are like those refined words and sentences that are full of profound meaning and shocking power. Every world has its own brilliance, and it doesn't feel the same or going downhill at all. It's an amazing article! The reading experience is excellent. There are calm expectations, shocking touches, sudden laughter, and evil smiles from being cute. I am very grateful [love] [love] [love]

It's beautiful. The heroine is a girl who looks like a snowflake. She looks cold and cold. In fact, she is as warm as a snowflake. She is a very gentle person on the inside. The appearance is one of the sources of the heroine's charm, but it is not the whole heroine. It's like being stuck in the house for a long time in winter and seeing a light snow falling outside. She goes out and reaches out to catch a snowflake and breathes a breath of fresh air. There is a faint gentleness.