Western Fantasy: Watch Me Create Lady Herta with a Sky Screen

Ignoring the enemy design, there's basically nothing wrong with it. However, from a game-centric perspective, it's a significant nerf, even by the standards of the base game. If you consider the collaboration as a bonus and treat it as a regular movie, it's quite good.

Overall, it's quite good, and the author has a good understanding of the Honkai Impact 3rd universe. However, some parts don't quite match my understanding of Honkai Impact 3rd. There is a misconception about Guiji. Before becoming the Great Lord of Extinction, Guiji was merely a top-tier Destiny Walker, not a Joyful Envoy.

It's alright, but the updates are too slow, and there's even a risk of it stopping altogether. It's safe to say the author is mostly a casual observer, with some settings correct and others incorrect (especially the virtual soldiers of the antimatter legion, most of which are wrong), and the writing is based entirely on personal impressions.

Well, handwriting is something that should be encouraged. The plot needs further refinement, and you need to consider the reader's emotional experience. When you're writing a passage, you should think about how the reader will feel upon reading it. It could be anger, sadness, happiness, a sense of peace and healing, or even a feeling of unease, but it absolutely cannot be annoyance or boredom. Keep it up, and I hope you write better and better.

I don't understand why the author lacks confidence. The writing is skillful, detailed, and the transitions between different situations are excellent.

It's well-written, but I don't know the theme. I haven't written enough about the eccentric characters in life. Actually, every life has its eccentric characters, each more abstract than the last. 😏

I only learned so many details I hadn't noticed before after reading this novel, such as the advanced technology of the Ironclad and the Madmen of Fate.

I thought the main streamer was into something like Iron Man, what a pity about this genre. I feel like changing it would make it popular. Are you sure you're a newbie? Your writing is amazing!

It's alright, it's my type, but I don't know what will happen in the future.

Very good-looking, support!