Codename Night Heron: Playing a Lunatic from Honkai: Star Rail Across the Multiverse

It looks good, and it feels like it should be a comprehensive game, with some simulator elements, the main world collapsed, and now it is the first world to steal the pen, as well as the foreshadowing of the main god and the previous life, and the content nouns are also very sophisticated. However, there are too many nouns in the first three or four chapters, and the content feels a bit confusing, so some people may not be able to read it. To be honest, I think there is no problem in removing the previous chapters and directly changing it to the protagonist traveling from the apocalypse to the collapse of iron and binding the system. According to the author's current writing style, it should be a relatively large narrative line, and I hope it doesn't collapse.

The teacher's last book has been in the library for more than 500 days and has been read four times. It has been with me from high school to university. There is no need to say more about the teacher's strength 😎 😎 😎 The new book is also very delicious😋I will continue to support Teacher Muyu (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

A two-hundred-year-old reader comes here 😏 Muyu Boss is still meticulous and meticulous, and the plot connection is very good. Every time I watch it, it reminds me of a new look, and I can easily fill the pits dug by the old thieves. Good luck, good luck, follow the boss to the death!! Wuhu has been updated three times. I hope there will be forty new chapters during the holidays [laughing]

The writing is smooth, the narration is just right, and the protagonist is interesting and mature. At least looking at it now, it's pretty good. The most important thing is that there is no vulgar and obscene stuff (it's hard for me to describe to you the one I read before... Wow, it was a frog in a well, or the kind of methane well that connects to the toilet in rural areas) and I look forward to the follow-up development.

①The plot content is very interesting and I like the setting very much. System 47 as the protagonist of the previous book This book becomes the protagonist 37's system This processing is really surprising And it's handled well. ② You can rest assured in terms of writing and foreshadowing The author is very rigorous The holes can basically be filled in No need to worry about bad jobs or eunuchs The author will definitely update it. ③But tell the truth The first few chapters were indeed difficult to read. It's not that I can't understand Rather, "You can understand them when you read them separately, but you can't follow them when they are taken together." Information density is too high As soon as it comes up, spread it out It's easy for readers to lose direction. In addition, scene switching is faster missing transition The subject often changes Readers need to piece together the information themselves. ④It's actually much better once you get through the beginning It's pretty smooth from behind. But there is a bit too much narration in the middle and later stages. When I was enjoying watching Suddenly a commentary was inserted Will interrupt the reading rhythm. And I want readers who don't understand to understand It doesn't have to be a forced commentary You can also borrow characters for dialogue mental activity Action details are brought out naturally. Compared with long explanations I actually prefer watching "the plot itself is moving" Characters doing things Interacting and advancing the story Rather than stopping to lecture. ⑤This article mainly focuses on these two issues: Too much information at the beginning There are too many narrations in the middle and later stages Except for these two points I can accept everything else Overall it looks good. The above is purely subjective.

What a delicious meal. I finally read the book Xianzhou + Stealing Pen. The books I read before were basically either role-playing or mindless CP nannies... 😢 😢 😢

Nice! And rare research shows that I have been in love with me for a long time, and there is no blood pressure operation!

Like it very much! The pace is just right without dragging, and I really like the narration (47 is so cute✧₍^˶- ˕ -˵^₎✧). There is nothing embarrassing or disliked about reading it.

Although I have never played Bengtie - I had not read Ming Ke Ya when I read this book. If I don't fall into this trap, it will not affect my reading at all. The author is very attentive in research and analysis, the creative ideas are wonderful and bold, the plot logic is interlocking, and the stories of different world views are closely integrated. Both the language and concepts make people feel very comfortable. It is suitable for both boys and girls to read. And the author's cheating is very good! The last book, Shun Shun Dang Dang, has been updated to the end with two chapters a day and has almost never been interrupted. (It is a virtue to have an outline in a work!) Now there are extra chapters from time to time, so you don't have to worry about interruptions. The previous book also revealed that I will write at least four books, which is a rare long-term meal ticket (my mother no longer has to worry about me being short of books). Every day I open my eyes and start waiting for tonight's update. Teacher Muyu, I will always follow you!

When I read Chapter 9, it's still very good if I don't read the first volume (first 4 chapters). I felt weird in the first four chapters, but I still felt very good in the next five chapters. Please update as soon as possible [plus one on the bookshelf]