
I Can See the On-Screen Comments, and Now I'm Forced to Join the Protagonist's Group
能看见弹幕的我,被迫成了主角团
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 162k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Updated
- 5mo ago
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The pairing of Gu Shen and Shen Ye is quite endearing; you can even see the comments on the screen. They see each other as oddballs, but suddenly discover that the other person can see these things just like them. So you become interested and start to learn more about him. The more you learn, the more interested you become.
This is one of the few similar comic strips I've read recently that's heartwarming yet doesn't feel like it's aimed at a young audience. It has a secondary couple who are the original main characters, but they don't overshadow the main couple. The reader understands why they're dating, but the story doesn't focus on them having a romantic relationship while they're around the main characters.
The main characters and Gu Shen's CP is so sweet, I admit that's what kept me here, it's just so incredibly sweet! Author, with 71 chapters, what's the difference between this and a poorly written ending?!?! Didn't they say Shen Ye would be the villain over there? Go ahead and write it! You didn't get any sweet moments, and now you've ruined your job? (╯-_-)╯╧╧
Bai Yu x Shen Ye, I absolutely love this couple! 💕 Bai Yu's character is so adorable! Especially the scene where he goes to Gu Shen to ask for his wife, it's incredibly cute! Shen Ye is a bit sarcastic and has a kappa-like personality, which is also totally endearing.
I love the interactions between Gu Shen and Shen Ye. It really feels like Shen Ye has let go of his burdens with Gu Shen, and that sense of kinship between them is so sweet! 💕 I support Shen Ye (a popular online personality). Actually, the second character of their names sounds quite similar to Shen Ye's name 🍉. If you didn't know better, you'd think it was a coincidence. But after reading the synopsis, I realized they didn't initially intend for a dual male lead.
I like the premise, but I feel like the plot currently has many unanswered questions, and there might be a lot of heart-wrenching moments in the future. Bai Yu x the main character is good, Gu Shen is also good, but I prefer this high-IQ, straightforward, bespectacled guy. Also, although I can understand the shipping, I personally don't get the official BG pairing.
The author writes very well; the interactions between the protagonist and the strategist Gu Shen have great chemistry. I can't decide which couple to ship, so I'm going to go all in! 😋😋😋 Also, I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens when the protagonist forgets something and then what? As it stands, the ending felt rushed, with only a brief summary being retracted. The plot, in my opinion, had few memorable moments, but there weren't any major plot holes either; it was just so-so.
The couple absolutely has to be Gu Shen! I'm so swooning, author! They're so perfect together! 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Actually, I originally thought this was an article about adding the main characters and the main villain, but it turns out there isn't a real villain. It's a very novel and perfect article. The main character is lazy and cute (* /∇\*).
It's so good, really so good! Author, you're such a great writer! (Spoilers ahead, proceed with caution) I finished it in one night, and there were basically no boring parts I wanted to skip 👍 The plot might be a bit cliché at the beginning, just a typical superpowered school, a main character group, etc., But it gets better and better as you read on.