The Cold Lawyer's Overbearing Love

I was quite surprised at first. The author's words and descriptions were very precise. I thought it was a masterpiece. How could the score be so low? After a closer look at the content, I realized there was a slight problem. I am neither a critic nor a reviewer. I am simply speaking about my inner feelings: 1. The writing is very good and the character descriptions are very detailed. However, this kind of stacked descriptions should have a priority, otherwise, every scene will be so heavy-handed. The words will give people no sense of hierarchy, but a heavy sense of repetition; 2. The characters and plot are slightly weak, and the conflicts, contradictions, psychology, etc. Of the characters are not interesting enough, a bit routine and a bit flat. In fact, the secret love story is particularly touching, but it cannot always be self-consistent. When I watched it, when I was worried about the male protagonist, I was buffered by the self-consistency of the next moment. This feeling made people uncomfortable. I originally felt sorry for this character, but when I watched it, it seemed that any more distress would be unnecessary; 3. People The design is too flimsy. The character Wen feels very flimsy. He is always ashamed of himself and obsessed with his father's faults. He always needs the male protagonist to destroy something in order to stand on his own. He is not too likable. I would say it is pitiful but not too pitiful. If I call him cute, there is really nothing cute about him. The character design is too thin! All in all, the novel looks good and the writing is great, but the plot and character setting are not strong enough to support it. This good writing is in vain.

The story is over. What a cure! Each other is each other's light, love you and protect you, let him become each other's armor, it's a good match! The "calculations" that don't show any trace are all expressions of loving you. You can take a look at it. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on!

You can see, it's just a little bit of Wen's personality...

The article is so detailed that I cried while reading it. The two of them really love each other so much.

It's a rare book that I can continue to read after the book shortage

Good-looking, my favorite type, reunion after a long separation, secret love

I feel a little good-looking 😳

Lawyer Jin and his little moon will be happy forever!!

It's very beautiful, the kind with long flowing water!

The story is very good and long-lasting, and Jin Chen's love saves Wen Yu. Gave Wen Yu a home.