Dual Transmigration: Laying Low in the City, Raising Hell in the Cultivation World

The writing is okay, the plot is okay, but the plot is too detailed. The author pays more attention to dialogue and uses dialogue to portray the protagonist's character and intellectual logic. When writing about scenery and food, you need to spend less time thinking and typing less. There is no need to write about scenery and food in detail. If you write too much, it will be like watering down. Four stars presented. To encourage.

The author obviously has some experience. Although it is a refreshing novel, it is very restrained in the pretense and slap-in-the-face plot. There is no young indulgence, which is very suitable for old bookworms. As a middle-aged laid-off worker, the protagonist has experienced both high-rise buildings and the bottom of the sea, and his state of mind has become much calmer than that of ordinary people. He travels between the two worlds and behaves more securely without being irritable. In a different world, after the ceiling of the strength of the surrounding enemies has been set, the author does not endlessly improve the strength of new enemies and sticks to the bottom line, which is good. The protagonist's strength improves very quickly. There is not much description of the training process, and the focus is on the plot. All in all, I highly recommend it. I hope the author will keep writing and not stop!

This double-crossing novel is one of the most beautiful I have ever seen, and the details are well handled! I hope that I will write carefully in the future and not leave it unfinished. I will continue to pay attention in the future!

It's okay, the plot is well written, and it's interesting for me, an old bookworm. The writing was okay at first, but then it became more and more outrageous, and the protagonist became more and more eccentric.

It only took 4 seconds for the golden elixir to explode 400 meters with full strength. He knocked a bear away and covered himself in dirt. He punched the bear and killed it. The golden elixir was so good during the period [covering face] that Goldfinger was undefended. Anyone who has known him for a few days knows that he can cross boundaries [eat melon]

It's basically a parallel line from the fantasy book about enduring hardship and enjoying happiness in the city. The settings are basically the same, the plot is basically the same, the women's professional backgrounds and family conditions are almost the same, but the writing is not bad, so give it four stars for encouragement!

The writing is smooth and the details are in place. Please read it patiently. It will definitely be enjoyable. I hope the author will keep up the standard in the future and don't be lazy!

I have read Jin Liu's Double Penetration and Two Worlds, and the setting you wrote at the beginning is very similar to his setting, even almost the same. At first, I thought it would be boring. After all, it would be boring to read a similar novel. Just like I hesitated several times before I started reading "Two Worlds", and I couldn't stand it, but the author has written something new. I don't know what's new. I just feel like I can keep reading, and I have this expectation. I don't know much about writing, after all, I am semi-literate, but I feel that novels with too few words are good novels.

A very interesting novel. Although many novels about the two worlds have been written, not many can make people feel comfortable while reading them. This one is okay. Although there are many female protagonists, hey, it's understandable for men. Moreover, the protagonist is very particular about what he does, and it can be seen that the author has a lot of experience.

I have read a lot of time travel novels, and this one is better! The logic is clear, the narrative is unhurried and unhurried, the protagonist is calm in situations, neither humble nor arrogant, does things in an orderly manner, and has a resolute and decisive character. Very pretty.