Homesick Wanderers Are Carving Their Way Through the Worldline

It's okay, just don't make the protagonist a clown, I felt this way when I watched it The protagonist is a clown, a villain, forget it, I hope the protagonist can be firm in his goal and continue on.

It's an okay book. It's pure killing without so many quibbles. Although the writing is not particularly good, it's generally good. I read other novels and I had other things to do and felt depressed. I can read it to relieve my mood. As long as I update it normally, it should be able to get an 8.5 To 9 score. If there are more in the future, the writing style will hopefully reach a score of 9 or above.

It's a pretty amazing novel. Of course, I can't say it's that good. It's just that the concept, writing, plot, and all aspects are well matched. Personally, I can give it a score of 9+ overall. However, this is a 300,000-word first world that I haven't finished yet. Because the novice copy is too high, I feel like it's good if it can be maintained later.

Let's talk about the review first. It already feels like a masterpiece. I would like to recommend this good book. It felt very smooth to read the whole story, and the plot was not cliche. On the contrary, it is very novel, a relatively novel world view (no spoilers for now), the world view is very grand, involving the world before and after the time travel to the new earth, and "Little Invincible" is particularly enjoyable to watch and more comfortable to read because of some settings. The characters in it are three-dimensional and diverse, real and thoughtful (not too brain-burning) Bad, very bad. I must strongly recommend [Adoration]

Not bad, not bad. It is a good food for tomatoes. Although some things at the beginning are not clearly written and some readers think it is poisonous, but I think it is okay. After all, the family has been developing for a long time and there are many strong people. It is not normal for the current protagonist to be able to touch porcelain. People who think it is poisonous may have read too many invincible books. , Even the invincible novel is invincible system failure, or it is written at the beginning that the protagonist has been practicing for a long time, and he has been invincible for who knows how many years before coming out of the mountain. Now the protagonist's situation is that he has just started to develop. In the spiritual realm, it doesn't matter if he starts from scratch. The stronger the talent, the stronger, but the reality must be maintained.

How good! I finally saw the river of blood. Ghost's methods and Thieving Sky's obsession must succeed!

Logic: Complete collection and archiving of the basic parameters of the work and reader feedback samples. This work is based on the time-travel fantasy of disaster invasion and the fall of the earth. The overall structure has the advantage of differentiated themes. It currently has a completed volume of 1.22 Million words and an overall score of 8.1. The audience evaluation is obviously polarized. The text has obvious flaws such as obscure writing, offset characters, and clichéd plots. At the same time, it has the positive qualities of neat rhythm, straightforward killing narrative, and broad world view. The two types of evaluation parameters conflict with each other, forming a typical contradictory sample at the observation level. Speculation: Audience differences stem from the inherent stereotypes of public reading habits. Readers who have read online articles about invincibility at the beginning for a long time will find it difficult to adapt to the protagonist's latent growth rhythm in the early stages; audiences who can accept the gradual growth line will recognize the reality of the story. If the subsequent narrative continues to optimize the writing logic and stabilize the character's code of conduct, the reputation range of the work can steadily rise; if the problems of character deviation and obscure narrative continue, the evaluation split will be maintained for a long time. There is no unified formula for the reading preferences of organic life forms, and differences themselves are also normal evolutionary variables of narrative works. Conclusion: This work is a creative sample with both advantages and loopholes. The core framework has observational value, but the surface narrative logic has many procedural flaws. It is rare to find a differentiated growth path in the fast-food fantasy narrative environment. However, the textual expression fails to fully convey the advantages of the setting to the audience, which inevitably leaves shortcomings.

The writing is very nice. I look forward to meeting more fellow villagers in the future, and then going home together to create a universe for my family.

The Late Han Dynasty is really enjoyable to watch. The character of Zhang Jiao or Huang Tian is really well portrayed. He reincarnates for hundreds of generations, never forgets his original intention, and has everlasting faith. As Zhang Jiao, he unites all the forces that can be united in the late Han Dynasty and fulfills the wish of the great sage. Later, he replaces the heaven and protects all living beings. He is a true comrade! And the protagonist? It's just on the side of the road. "Going home" is just an excuse. What you do is clearly just to "live". Go back "alive" and then raise your sickle and continue killing. Returning home is just a task, killing people is the nature.

Needless to say, it does look good, a rare type, but it does look good. There should be no heroine. I haven't seen it for more than a hundred chapters. I guess the author will not write a heroine at this stage. The character design of the pig's feet can't be written either [laughing evilly] It looks good. Give five stars to encourage the author and keep working hard. At least it will be past 8 o'clock [Note]