A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: My Physical Condition Refreshes Daily

The advantage is that the writing is quite good, the plot is not particularly outrageous and brainless, the plot is reasonable, there are few logical loopholes, and there is a little emotional line. Generally, when I see this kind of plot with the tendency of the female supporting character to become the female protagonist, I immediately quit, but the author did a good job in foreshadowing, so I don't seem to be disgusted. The reason why many readers dislike the emotional scenes is actually because many authors have little life experience, their writing is not delicate, and their development is very abrupt. The author's writing scale is just right. She was a female supporting character at the beginning, and later she had several experiences of life and death, but she did not become a heroine, but she had more scenes. Later, the protagonist encountered a disaster of life and death, drifted along the random flow of space, and separated the two places. I don't know if they will meet again later, and I don't know if she will develop into a heroine. Anyway, I am looking forward to the following. The author's writing is really good. The recent weather forecast said there will be a snowstorm. I advise the author not to go out and write at home [awkward laugh] and try to update 15 times a day.

The overall level of this book can be rated as 9 points. There are no obvious logical loopholes. I feel that the protagonist and villain's IQs are also online. I don't know why it is only rated as 6 points. I hope the author can work hard [already planted]

The author doesn't need to worry about those who only want to improve his strength. What he writes is true feelings, not cool writing. There are too many cool writing now! The details are carefully portrayed, the protagonist is logical and emotional. Book reviews will get higher and higher,

The logic is reasonable, the plot is compact, and the golden finger and the qi-gazing technique constantly provide exciting points. The golden finger allows the protagonist to practice without a lot of worries. The qi-gazing technique can predict the future, seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and it is really fun to play it.

Hurry up and update it. I haven't seen such a beautiful novel about cultivating immortals in a long time. It's not mindless and cool. Each character has rich emotions and all the foreshadowing laid out in the early stage can be used. It's really detailed.

The writing is quite good. Personally, I feel that so far, there are almost 5 female protagonists. I think normally, a single female protagonist or 2-3 will be okay. If there are more, it will be a bit like a stallion novel. Then, the protagonist's early and late settings are too contrasting. Since they are all soul-pierced, I might as well write down some of the help my past life experience has on my understanding of immortality. Otherwise, I feel that there is absolutely no need to wear a soul piercing, and since they are all soul piercing, how can I place my hopes on another person in the early stage? I have no experience in being a human being in two lifetimes, and I am too much like an ordinary passerby. When the plug-ins arrive later, they are all far-sighted and have various layouts. They are so awesome that they take off. It feels like a different person. I feel like there are a few flaws in the cohesion between the front and back, but overall the writing is pretty good and the overall logic is okay. I think it could get a score of 9 or higher.

Overall, it's good (the only minor irritant is Old Man Tianji. The protagonist has just started to practice qi, and he starts to interact with big guys who can predict fortune. It's a bit hard to resist)

Very good, I like this kind of cultivation rhythm very much, a little slower and stop at a certain state. I have to say that some books are written in a small realm for a few days and a big realm for a few days. From here to there, only a few sentences are needed to get there. This shows that some people are not good at writing details and are only good at writing cool things. This is not good. [Thinking][thinking]

It's pretty good. It was a wretched development in the early stage, but after learning to watch the air, it gradually started to feel better. The villain is not too stupid, and the fighting scenes are not exaggerated and draggy. It is worth watching [laughs][laughs]

It's quite interesting, I've finished reading it. The author has also been asking for book reviews, so just give me a few words. By the way, the author will update soon. Who can watch one update a day? Anyway, I will just say a few words about this matter. All in all, this matter is such a situation now. As for the specifics, everyone can see it and want to know what is going on. Because of my status, I have to say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it very well, but it doesn't matter, that's what it means. In fact, I have seen this kind of thing a lot myself. I just want to say that those who understand understand it. For those who don't understand, it's not convenient for me to explain. After all, it's better for you to know. You can take a closer look and don't ask me what's wrong. The interests are too involved. It's not good for you or me to tell you. Just pretend you don't know. For the rest, I can only say that the water here is very deep. It involves many important people, many things that are not allowed to be understood, and many things that are not allowed to be known. It's hard for you to find the detailed information yourself. Most of it has been deleted from the Internet, so I can only say that everyone who knows it understands it.