Horror Cinema: My Teammate Is Yukino Yukinoshita

Your wonderful pen outlines all things in life, and your story is so stunning that it attracts people to read it. I hoped that the story would continue and the ending would be happy, but I never thought of stopping in the middle of the story. I haven't seen a new chapter for a long time. [Crying] The male protagonist's performance worsens as he progresses. Why is he giving up on himself instead of growing up? Whenever something happens, it's Yukino. Whenever something happens, it's Yukino.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but I just finished reading the copy of the building and I still have a lot of problems. 1. Let's talk about the protagonist first. At present, it seems that the protagonist's presence is too weak. The protagonist of this kind of dungeon novel is either an intelligence type or a force type. However, the protagonist of this book feels like he is neither good nor bad, stuck between these two types. In fact, the first copy is handled well. The intelligent type is Yukino, and the force or special ability is the protagonist. This way of viewing is okay, because by default the protagonist and the heroine are one. The character of the protagonist is also quite chaotic, and it shows when he is targeted and fights back. However, there are a lot of good intentions that are written too cheaply. In a dungeon like this that can die at any time, it is better for the protagonist to be alone. It is too hot-blooded now. 2. The dungeon, to be honest, the sense of oppression in the dungeon is too low. What is the state of the ghosts set? Can players cause harm to ghosts? Under what conditions can ghosts harm players? When I write it down now, I feel that there is no reason for ghosts to hurt people. It is very random. This leads to no feeling of fear at all. Anyway, the protagonist will not be the unluckiest one. It should be related to the number of people in the dungeon. There are 12 people at a time. It is too difficult to write. Just follow the traditional "violate the rules and you will die", otherwise it would be too crazy to have a dungeon full of props. Such props should be rare, right? 3. Female protagonist, to be honest, there is really no need for too many female protagonists. Wouldn't it be nice to have only one female protagonist appear in one dungeon? Instead of constantly adding new characters, why not keep improving the role of the old characters and just fix a few female protagonists and follow them in turn in the dungeon? And currently, apart from Yukino, the other female protagonists don't have much to shine. Kasumigaoka, who has a high IQ and is a writer, can definitely design a dungeon that makes full use of her strengths. What is the role of this third dungeon? The main reason is that the subject matter is quite new. Please support the author and give him five stars for encouragement.

Hell Cinema Comprehensive Comic Version

There are so few novels of this type. I prefer to rely on my brain to solve the problem step by step instead of flying big bricks. Supernaturals should have the sense of oppression of the unknown.

It looks good, I love watching it, more updates, more heroines, Yukinoshita Yukino's emotional feelings have been cultivated very well [laughing evilly], and the relationship can be deepened [cool]

Infinite Horror and Variety Comics are so niche. I'd like to give you a good review first.

Okay, okay, finally there is a novel similar to Hell Cinema. I hope the author will not be a eunuch [face covering]

It's very interesting, don't stop updating it [angry] I haven't updated it for more than 2 days. I hope the author can win the resurrection competition!

Personal thoughts 1. I think the protagonist is a bit ordinary and has nothing outstanding. Even if he is strengthened, he cannot do without the help (coercion) of others. I still hope that the protagonist can seize power through his own brain layout of the dungeon, talk less and do more, be able to be at ease in the dungeon, and be able to calmly save the situation in time even if something unexpected happens. 2. Some people say that if you are too powerful, you will not be able to create terror. Indeed, the male protagonist is a superman. Isn't it scary? Therefore, the hook should be strong in terms of mechanism and growth. Even if a single hook is not strong, the combination should be strong. When giving the hook, you only express a general idea (the protagonist is thoughtful). After the protagonist uses it, the reader will feel that it is like this and that it can still be used in this way. If there are hooks, you should use them sparingly, but don't fail to use them when they should be used. It's okay to describe the protagonist in a desperate situation and make the readers nervous. However, every time the dungeon escapes from death, it seems that the protagonist is suffering. It feels like the dungeon is just a numerical monster, not a mechanical monster. 3. There are too many minor supporting characters and they cannot be scary (more people are more powerful, so they go in groups). At present, the role of minor supporting characters is (to provide help to the protagonist) (to downplay the low and support the high) (to promote the plot)... I think the protagonist can rely on himself and can step on the copy. In the plot, he has become a weird scum. The author can use the heroine to promote the plot and create a scary atmosphere. 4. The female protagonist can become the male protagonist's pet peeve. If the protagonist is strong, then the female protagonist will be frightened, and readers from the female protagonist's perspective will be frightened. If the female protagonist becomes stronger, then the new female protagonist will be frightened. 5. I think the real terror is people's fear of the unknown. Sometimes what cannot be seen is scarier than what can be seen.

I listened to the novels I read at night, and the progress was relatively slow. I just saw Crimson Mansion. Overall, it was okay, and there was nothing too bad about it. In addition, don't worry about those who haven't even finished reading the setting. At least it makes sense that the dungeon kept saving Glass. On the one hand, the death of the other party may cause the difficulty to increase. On the other hand, the protagonist is a time traveler and has watched some anime. No matter what, Glass is more reliable than other strangers. At least there is no risk of backstabbing.