Nightmare Invitation!

A book in the same top echelon as (I Have a Pair of Ghost Eyes) [Learned] In a way, it looks better than Ghost Eye!!! I hope the author doesn't kill teammates! Although there can be no female protagonist, can you keep some girls? [Laughing]

I think some details of the author can be optimized. I have only read a dozen chapters for the time being. I will review them after reading them later. The specific optimization is for example, the first copy, the background should be the Republic of China period, and then for example, I can explain a little bit about the clothes of the protagonist and the group of people, and change them to the clothes of the Republic of China period, and then the maid goes to work. It's too modern and could be slightly modified. Also, Xiao Wang feels that the title could be changed or not given a name. In the part where the protagonist and the man are in the study room, how the man separated from the protagonist and what happened can be explained a little. In fact, I think this paragraph is written as if the man is possessed. There is also the word campus, and at the beginning of the game, the background of the protagonist is to apply for jobs as servants. So after entering the house, even if the servants are not arranged to do the job, they should explain one or two sentences about why they do not need to be arranged to do the job. You can let the protagonist mention one more thing. When will the work start and so on? Then the other NPC in charge can tell us what the arrangements will be at that time. Is it reasonable to just enter the house and run around? Moreover, their starting point is actually a restaurant. How many people can enter the restaurant's guest room? I think it's more reasonable to arrange it at the entrance of the big house.

A fatal problem was discovered in the first copy. Since the Taoist priest has the ability to transform ghosts into evil ghosts, is it possible that he has cultivation methods and inheritance? ,, The protagonist and the others are in the first copy, and there is no Xiaoqian to kill them, so they can still ask this master to ask the Taoist priest in the Taoist temple. Learn the inheritance, Taoism and cultivation techniques, and get yang-attributed magic weapons in batches, not yin-attributed ghost weapons.

I also read two dungeons, and I almost didn't finish the second dungeon. Let me give you my opinion. I gave the first dungeon a score of 75 to 80, because this subject is really covered in many supernatural dungeon books. It is very common for ancient houses to hire people as stand-ins, or to live in the room of the dead, or to wear the clothes of the dead, so the freshness has dropped a bit, because it is common and it is not particularly scary. The horror, and the description of fright and horror may need to be polished. It does not have the feeling of chilling people behind. Then there is one thing that I think is not very good, that is, except for the protagonist, everyone else will either wait to die or use props when encountering ghosts. In the following chapters, try to arrange a few smart people as passers-by, otherwise the whole book will become the protagonist's personal show, and everyone else will be a pig. I personally still like to read this kind of supernatural novels. I like encountering ghosts in various places and various horror twists. The protagonist and supporting characters are frightened. Through the text, it gives me the feeling of chills on the back and cardiac arrest. I hope the author can strengthen this aspect [shy]

Recommendation: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A rare masterpiece, it looks good in the horror infinite stream. The author focuses on writing the plot, without making vulgar jokes about female players, and there is no emotional line, which is very comfortable to watch. In terms of characterization, there are no characters with bad intentions. The people the protagonist meets are all nice and smart, and not everything is discovered by the protagonist. Helping each other is extremely valuable. I feel that although the world is hopeless, the people are pretty good and there is still hope. The protagonist is also quite kind, but he is not the Virgin. If you don't harm me, I will not harm you. On the contrary, if you show kindness to me, I will try my best to help you. I like this kind of character. It is worth mentioning that the ghosts in it are not purely evil. On the contrary, they will help the protagonists in the end, and the color of despair is not so strong. (Not in the process, only the last step) In terms of plot description, it is relatively coherent, there are no major flaws, and the world is not cookie-cutter, but there are bright spots. However, there are not many descriptions of the rules of ghosts, and the protagonists and a group of people were able to figure out the rules of ghosts relatively quickly without many detours. In terms of horror, it is not as scary as midnight nightmares and ghost eyes, and no taboo of instant death has been discovered yet. I hope the author will not stop updating, and I will always support you if you maintain the current level or above. There will be some typos in it, but they are not major problems and do not affect reading. Oh yes, one more thing, I took a look and it may be a bit exaggerated to be in the same category as Ghost Eyes and Nightmare, because it is the author's first attempt at this type, and the technique still lacks a little feel. I feel that the world in the article is borrowed from it, but it is understandable because the setting is similar. The three-no-word rule in the tunnel inside feels a bit like that of a river, but the difference is quite big.

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of Infinite Streaming where the main character doesn't pretend to be pretentious, the supporting characters aren't annoying, and it has a scary atmosphere... Tears (┳◇┳) Yes, this is what I want to watch when watching Infinite Streaming!

It's quite interesting, but it's not very exciting to kill someone and turn them into ghosts to take revenge, but I can understand it. Speaking of when the protagonist will have the ability to attack ghosts or even kill them, ghost-type novels will be more enjoyable than weird-type novels. Can the author update more?

When I saw 94, I couldn't help it. I was already timid, and I seemed to have read about this mine in other novels and a movie. In addition, because I hadn't slept for more than 30 hours, I didn't dare to watch [Wrongful] and ran away. Don't wait until I fall asleep to have nightmares.

The writing is good, and it fits the genre of unlimited novels I like. The rules of murder by ghosts are related to the encounters in life, and there are also ghost weapons for fault tolerance. The reasoning and suspense atmosphere is also in place.

Very nice, please update more [Thoughts]

Let's add a little more terror

Is it possible to adjust the author's audio book? Why doesn't your smart audio book have an upgraded version of the mature uncle voice?

The rhythm is relatively comfortable, I hope it can be maintained in the future

When I was writing a book, I read the first story, and it felt pretty good. It had a bit of a ghost society feel. I prefer this kind of story-by-story kind. Very good, come on

I really like it, the character design of the main character is very good.

It's so beautiful. I watched it at night. I was so nervous when I went to bed that I didn't even dare to sleep.

Very good. I love reading it. Come on, author.

It's a very good unlimited stream. It's a pity that so few people read it. I feel like the author won't be able to keep going.

Very beautiful, I watch it every day

Like this series very much

It's actually pretty good-looking. It'll be interesting to see the later stages.

It's okay. I don't see anything bad so far, and there's no such thing as a newcomer yelling as soon as he comes in.

Very nice, comparable to Nightmare Bus

A very good horror novel with unlimited flow rules. The writing is sophisticated, the dungeon killing rules are well set, and the story is quite rigorous.

Danqing can write this, and it will be passed down for thousands of years.

It's okay to write. The protagonist is a normal person who can use his brain

I'm currently reading the first copy, it's pretty good, cheers for the author! ! I saw the third dungeon. It's quite compact, and the group portraits are pretty good. Many of the female characters have pretty good designs. I recommend it.

Well, the rating is so low. The writing is so beautiful. I hope the author will keep writing.

It's great. I've finished reading two copies. The story is very exciting.

It's a bit of an alternative horror dungeon, similar to the rules of the strange story. At the end of the dungeon, players who clear the level should be rewarded. I haven't seen what type it is yet.