Two Emanators From the Start: The Marshal Puts a Child to Work

It's pretty good to watch, the main plot is to go home, An Ge has memory problems [Thinking] Open the gold finger very much, don't worry about being bullied [Shy] An Ge has done a good job, he is still an underage child [Thinking] Disciple Jingliu, looking forward to the Luofu copy and the beginning of the plot [Learned]

The writing is very good, the sentences and words are not repeated, and it is clear and clear to read, without the disgusting feeling of repeating it. The structure of the story is also very large, with just a few chapters, especially the sentence "I want to see it, want to change something". I am looking forward to the direction of the story in the future, and I am also looking forward to what kind of slow and romantic story the author can rewrite this story into. And there are still two systems, the character popularity system. It seems that if I didn't do this in the early stage, it would be a cool article (I can do anything), and it shouldn't be like that peachy fairy lady who writes swords for the players throughout the process. I have said that I am looking forward to the story, and I want to know how the author of Faros will write it. Miss Corrosion next door already has a child with Miss Ellie. (Tsk tsk tsk, the daughter of the king of the virus world and the miracle girl - the memory master of Faros - Her Royal Highness Princess Ilysia, who hugs the big and small Xilian on both sides) It is a pity that the author does not describe this side very much, and now he has to write about the Holy Grail War

I'm looking forward to the plot of Cloud Five. I don't know how long it will be. I want to see [Send Heart]. The overall writing is good, but the description of (that's not... But a kind of... Look) can be appropriately reduced. From the first chapter to the end, the description of the character's eyes and emotions is a bit too much. Also, the paragraph about the appearance of the main character was a bit too much at the beginning, but the writing became much better when I wrote it later. I really like the interaction between the little pigeon and other characters. It's so cute and cute (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~ Come on, author, please update [shy]

Well, give yourself a five-star review. This book is sweet first and then cruel, with a mixture of sweet and sad, but it is not brainless. The author will try his best to ensure that the logic is correct. If there is anyone who really can't match Beng Tie, just treat it as a private one! Baby Ange is the most adorable in the world! Spoilers don't actually count as spoilers, after all the author has many ideas and only knows the plot a few hours before the reader. Everyone knows the protagonist, General Cangcheng and Master of Jingliu, the dual envoys of hunting and protection, the Summoner of Kings Canyon, and the [Tonghe] Star God Xipei. This is considered a cool article about female fans. Female fans don't love women, so why should I write about female fans? Isn't that right, my dears? Are you hiding your identity? Hehehe Well, the bearer of [miracles], the patron saint of the ancient country, and the dragon god. Title: Taichu Xuanyuan Qiming Suppresses Demons Anjiang Fuhai Great Emperor It always feels a little weird [thinking] The rough order is, from Cangcheng to Yunshangwuxiao (all members survived) - Collapse of Iron Pioneers perspective: Black Tower Space Station to the end of Pinoconi, Fairy Boat Starry Sky Martial Arts Ceremony - [Tonghe] and [Order] - player perspective, plus the special event [Remembering the Past] (Ange's), the Star Qiong is tentatively set at 300,000 (for our little pigeons) - Pioneer/player perspective: High Dimension + King's Continent + Ancient Country + How to become Xipei. This is what I have in mind for now, and may change when I write it down.

I'm reading... Well, the descriptions are beautiful, but I always feel like I'm reading prose. I didn't pay attention. I found that I couldn't finish this chapter. The description of appearance takes up a lot of chapters. But when I looked at the table of contents, I was shocked. There were so many words and I forgave them instantly. The story is worth looking forward to!

Super, super, super pretty! The author may be writing a book for the first time so he has no experience. The first few chapters are about 10,000 words. The content is also super cool! Tongxue Orthodoxy is in Xianzhou [laughing] [blowing kiss]

The writing is okay, but doesn't Saving Cangcheng have an experience card for Nuwa? Could it be that Nuwa still can't save Cangcheng? Do you want to use dangerous methods? Then I can become an envoy

It's very beautiful and very delicate. The main text must be free of any censorship! By the way, I'd like to ask someone who gets on the train to be a star! It still feels good so far, and the feeling of anticlimax that usually appears in Star Iron fanfics is also very weak. The immature feeling of writing in the novel at the beginning is gradually disappearing. Now it has reached the plot of Cloud Five. I may feel relieved to see that everyone survives (?) But in fact, I still want a knife in my heart, haha. Ha, I felt a strange sense of satisfaction when I saw what the author said in other book reviews that this article is both sweet and sad (?). I can feel that the article has an outline, and there is no feeling of hammering here and there. Let me say it weakly, I feel that the article is a bit long. I have just reached the beginning of cloud five after four or five million. Of course, if you want to write a long novel, please ignore this sentence! I don't feel that the text is lengthy, just a little question (˙-˙) Another little suggestion, could you please explain some of the plots in King of Kings properly (actually, I don't play King of Kings at all, so I don't understand some parts) Then again, the one who gets on the train is our Xingbao⸝⸝ ᷇࿀ ᷆⸝⸝ The article is great and the author is great. It seems like there is only one chapter but it is actually a big chapter. The language is clear and the wording is not monotonous. I look forward to the plot in the future! Let the knife come more violently!

It's good to watch. I'm looking forward to entering the main story. When will the protagonist take Cangcheng to the real expedition? I want to see the protagonist kill everyone.

Love it! ! The rating for such a good article is too low! I'm starting to look forward to An Ge's identity being exposed later! Please teacher, please update more! !