After I Turned Myself In, the Nation Discovered I'd Been Alive for Two Thousand Years

Overall, the writing is actually very good, the logic, and the overall story line are very good. The only bad thing is that occasionally there will be a sentence like "slap her butt". I personally think this greatly affects the viewing experience, and it is very illogical and out of line. If this is the author's personal hobby, just pretend that I didn't say it. Anyway, I am still looking forward to the subsequent storyline, which is about 8.5 Minutes.

Let me comment after seeing Chapter 55, it was great, the battle was great, just attack hard. Although sometimes he talks a little bit obscenely, it's not serious. People have the ability not to eat beef just to take advantage of their words. They seem to be immoral, but in fact they are Sigma men. They treat their enemies equally, regardless of gender, and they all have to be beaten. It's just too little, not enough to see. [Adoration]

The plot is undoubtedly novel, the characters are undoubtedly awesome, and it is undoubtedly very enjoyable to watch. As a veteran bookworm, this book is still about a nine-point level. It will be much better after the update speed catches up! As for the pornographic accent, the author has also revised it, and later readers may not be able to see it, but I don't think it matters. The general plot is not deviated, so it's okay. Haha, I am a girl, and I feel that I am the same as when I joke with my friends, so I have no reaction to this. It looks good and looks good. This kind of plot is usually in ancient literature. This is the first time I see a modern text, and it looks good.

I have watched it for almost half an hour now. The writing is very good. Although the plot is not to my liking, it is still a very good plot. When I saw 107, I felt aggrieved. I don't know if it was intentional by the author or something else. A group of ants used the protagonist as a pawn. The protagonist did not resist or kill the culprit.

Personally, I think the character of Shirakawa has great potential, and it is not impossible to grow into a popular male protagonist like in the book "The Great God". Everything was fine in the beginning, until the senior sister came out, the author, you have some ideas, please don't put it on the character, please control it a little, which made Shirakawa, the tall and noble temperament of the immortal, inexplicably more flinching [smile] Do you know, the goddess gnaws cucumbers and picks her feet... That's how it feels... Don't leave Brother Qiuqiu... [Crying]

It's really great. I really don't understand why good novels always have such low ratings. After reading those highly rated novels, I feel like I can't finish them. The protagonist of this novel has always been confused about one person, which is very similar to Fang Xiu's suspicion that Zhou Qingfeng is himself, and a bit confused like Li Huowang, but he seems to be neither of them. Well, all in all, it looks good and I highly recommend it.

Looking at the author's homepage, it's very good that the second book was written like this, and the author was able to read the comments and listen to the advice to change the poisonous point (now written to Chapter 132). I really didn't see the pornographic comments in the previous comments. The subject matter is also relatively new, the plot arrangement is also good, the main line and the dark line are also very eye-catching, and a lot of foreshadowing has been laid. The follow-up should be quite difficult. If you can keep it up, your rating should still go up. Come on.

After Ruli has finished writing the Earth chapter, it can be introduced into the universe. For example, Shirakawa is also invincible alone in the universe, but because he lived too long and was conspired by others to come to Earth, the memory time travel in Shirakawa's mind is actually a scam by the mastermind behind the scenes to make him sink and fall into sleep. , For example, in 2000, Bai Chuan gradually began to be in a daze or fell into a deep sleep. Until the "travel" Bai Chuan returned and gradually regained his memory and strength, his strength could always be at the top of the new map, but the protagonist himself did not know that he would be afraid of not being able to beat the opponent and then kill him instantly after the confrontation. Another example is writing the Mythical Chapter of the Classic of Mountains and Seas based on the accidental entry into the Republic of China 2000 years ago. Otherwise, with the current progress, I feel that it would be finished in less than 300 chapters. The author's plot design is very good and makes me want to read it more and more. I don't want it to end before I am satisfied [face covering]

The writing is very good, but don't use the pornographic accent to make it look very dramatic.

Found it again, not bad, very suspenseful and fascinating My personal rating is 8.5, Which is really rare. I just feel that the surrounding area is a bit too monotonous. The characters and pictures are all kept in a small area.