Hello, I Am the Swordbearer of the Mortal Realm

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The writing is a bit immature. The author must be young. In fact, I am only in the first year of junior high school. Age is not a problem. The writing skills have been accumulated slowly, so there is nothing to say. Let's talk about the sister's sword. I think it is too early or not early enough. Let me first explain why I think it is too early. I understand that you want to write about the impermanence of the world and give the protagonist a motivation. But in fact, there are some chapters about the sister. The reader has already had a pretty good impression of this character, so such a sudden attack will directly destroy the reader's mood. It's not sad enough, it is too abrupt and deliberate. What I suggest is to characterize this character for a while, and make it effective, so that the reader cannot blame the author, but is moved and empathized, so that he will have the motivation and enthusiasm to continue reading. Why do I think it's not early enough? It's the reason just now that will cause readers to abandon the book. It doesn't portray the sister too much. She is stabbed at the beginning of the story, and then depicts a decadent young man who gradually strengthens his faith and then continues to grow. Such a plot can also be used as motivation for the protagonist's efforts. However, the author's efforts are worthy of five stars. Five stars are given. Come on, author.

Come on, it looks good, but it would be even better if my sister could be resurrected later [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Why did you suddenly stab my sister? It was too sudden.

It's good-looking, but there's a bit of a knife in the middle, like the one that caused Bai Ye's sister to die a little suddenly. Overall, the writing is a bit immature, but the writing is pretty good. I'm following your next book. Come on.

First of all, this book is really interesting. Friends must read it. Secondly, I personally think this book is a fast-paced book. Readers who are impatient can take a look at this book. It is really exciting. Don't look at the low rating. His previous rating was over 8 points, but for some reason, it dropped.

How should I put it, emmmm, there are good and bad. Although the plot is very complete and exciting, I always feel that the later part is too fast, and I feel a bit unfinished. But that doesn't mean that the writing is not good, the author. Your writing style is very good, I think it can be better, hahahaha, come on, come on, look forward to your second book [Like] [Like] [Like] [Thinking]

Please update as soon as possible. I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day. I only watched it for a long time. It's very exciting. Please update it as soon as possible. Don't force me to send you souvenirs [laughing] [laughing]

My sister is resurrected and I will give you a star

It's beautiful, very beautiful [smile][smile][shy][shy] When I saw Jiang Ling (the protagonist's sister) die, I burst into tears [cry][cry][cry] But when I saw later, when Gu Qing (the heroine), Jiang Ling, and Bai Ye (the hero) were all gods, I was stunned and shocked [stunned][stunned][what][what] I think this book is good and worth reading.