[Harry Potter] Days Spent Raising Cats with Sirius

This is the second Sirius fanfic I've seen on 🍅 so far! The following is a long review of some of the advantages I think. I personally think that the biggest advantage is the grasp of the character's psychology. It does not focus on the love plot but a complete analysis of Sirius's psychology, including his "dark side" (to be honest, it is rare to see an author who can write a perfect imperfect protagonist) Including the heroine, she is like a counterpart to Sirius. She also resists pure blood but cannot give up everything. She is also brave, but no one stipulates that bravery means leaving everything behind. The heroine chooses to face it. This seemingly cowardly and opposite choice to Sirius actually leads to the same goal. If I had to describe it, it would probably be the selective expression of genes (laughs). This indeed caused a collision of views between the two, but the collision also promoted the growth of Sirius. When he was young, he was an extreme, crazy, and childish rebellious child. But because of the heroine, he obviously accelerated his growth in thinking. This is actually very rare because the core of the character of Sirius can be easily changed if not grasped properly. Most authors regard his resistance as a kind of "heroism" when writing. The heroine of Slytherin must give up everything in Slytherin to fall in love with him, or it may be a clichéd heartthrob script. This is essentially very unfair. But the heroine in this article chose symbiosis during the struggle, and the heroine's baby really worked hard (lovely) The conflict between the Marauders and Snape was also difficult to write. Too much criticism will feel condescending, and it will be impossible to proceed without telling a story, but this book is handled very appropriately. The heroine is not brave, so Sirius can refute when she is dissatisfied with Sirius, which weakens the sense of deja vu of moral superiority. The back-and-forth debate is about mutual cooperation rather than unilateral poverty alleviation. Sirius's reflection and the heroine's face to herself are both the product of their relationship. The overall tone of the book is a melancholy and delicate style that emphasizes psychological description. It is very worth reading. Please don't miss this book! Demining: Seeing that there are indeed some shortcomings (I can still accept it) 1. There is an unlovable little cousin (not a love rival) who is currently in the growth stage. It can be seen that it is like Snape's control group relationship, and the feature of this book is the imperfection of the character. This is clearly shown in the little cousin. 2. The psychological description is too complex and trivial, and the arrangement of events is too dense. Delicate psychological description is an advantage, but I personally think it is a bit too dense. It would be much better if the narrative rhythm could be polished. 3. The overall writing style is depressing. There are no completely perfect characters in this book, and it is not very friendly to the protagonist. The heroine often suffers from internal friction and self-criticism in the early stage, but it can be seen that she is growing. It's not the Shuangwen route❗️ I will make up for it later if I think of it. I personally prefer to recommend it

The writing is very good. The positions of everyone, the conflicts between the colleges, and the character creation are not OOC, but it feels a bit depressing. Although the environment of the parent generation is relatively heavy, before the war begins, I still hope to be more relaxed and describe the daily life of the college. I like the pull between the male and female protagonists and the conflict of concepts between the schools, and I hope it doesn't happen later. This is my second favorite CP between the Slytherin heroine and Sirius [Blow Kiss] Hey, Gouzi, you haven't confessed your love in sixth grade? Can you make progress faster? Jump directly to old wife and old husband mode [laughing and crying]

I think this can no longer be evaluated as the best HP novel I have ever read. I would call it the best of all the novels I have read. The first few chapters were as warm as a deer in the forest stepping towards my heart, which made me want to cry. But after entering Hogwarts, every emotional transition was vigorous, and one emotion was divided into several sentences, so it was very, very, very, very delicate. Emotions are not simply discovered and summed up in a few words: I feel... But after getting to know the character step by step, I discovered that I am such an emotion! And it can no longer be described by whether you have a mouth or not. It is human nature when you don't speak, and the time when you speak is just right. The author must be a warm and attentive person in reality, and he can understand the characters' moods very thoroughly. Moreover, the relationship between the Marauder and Snape is also emphasized, and the changes are reasonable. I have read many articles about my parents. Simply stop talking about this matter, or unconditionally favor either party. But the author did not do that at all. Instead, he evaluated and pointed out the shortcomings through this objective perspective of a third party. And what's great about the author is that he doesn't spend many sentences describing each character, but can clearly show the person's personality through a few details. It's not OOC at all, and the author's own understanding of the original work is very thorough, really. Everyone has their own shining points, and there is absolutely no malicious intention to smear someone. The male and female protagonists, oh, um, oh, needless to say, epic and sweet, I was rolling on the bed. And the author's plot arrangement is very reasonable. Many little things that were mentioned in the original work were unintentionally mentioned by the author through the heroine. With a slight push, he enriched the story line and added many details. It made me feel that the heroine was really integrated into this world, just like she was a member of the original work. This is the longest book review I have ever written. To sum it up, it is beautiful, delicate, not OOC at all, and sweet. Highly recommended, if you don't read it, you'll be at a loss! ! ! ! Besides. . . . The author will update soon! It's really hard to follow the series🥺😏😏😏

Please read it carefully and leave a comment. I really like this article and want to say a few words to the author. What particularly poked me was the part where Sylvie chose Slytherin, it was so immersive. She clearly knew in her heart that entering the Snake Yard meant that she and Sirius were separated by the prejudice of the academy and the pressure of the times. She was afraid that the two of them would slowly drift away, but she still did not deceive herself and made her choice according to her heart. This kind of conflict, timidity, reluctance and having to be loyal to oneself in the teenage years is delicately and realistically portrayed, and it immediately fills the audience with the heavy atmosphere of the impending storm in the family era. The relationship between Sirius and the heroine is particularly touching. There is no vigorous industrial sugar, it is all careful attention from a distance, sour and restrained pulling. It is slow and long, and every small interaction has a sense of atmosphere. And you are very careful in making group portraits, without flattening anyone. Each character has his own dilemma, struggle and life choice, which is particularly consistent with the background of the original work. Tarsus is also very gentle and has become a very healing little light in the depressing and gloomy era. I can clearly feel that you are writing the story with great concentration, respecting the characters and the background of the times, and slowly laying out the emotions and plot, rather than writing perfunctorily for the sake of falling in love. There are really too few fans who carefully polish their writing style and core. Don't worry about the current rating, just feel free to write at your own pace. Such a story with texture, warmth and depth will definitely be seen and cherished by more people. Thank you for your hard work. I always look forward to the follow-up updates!

This book is really good. Starting from the heroine, it tells the story of a girl struggling between conscience and family love in an era when blood conflicts were rampant. She is shrewd, smart, and understands the logic of survival in this pure-blood world, but she is still kind, has the courage to reflect on herself, and even bravely stands up. The Marauders are not a group of completely hot-blooded and reckless lunatics. They are also a group of people who are growing up. However, growth is often accompanied by labor pains. Ivan and Regulus' affection for their sister and brother is also touching. They will protect their families in their own way. However, they are destined to take that path, which always gives me a sense of sadness that sooner or later they will part ways. Snape, his personality background and growing environment are far from ideal, but not everyone has the obligation to tolerate his harm. He always points his sword at the person who loves him most, so his loneliness is inevitable. Lily, I really like Lily, her unstinting love and hate, her always clear bottom line and fearless persistence. She is stronger than many of the people mentioned above; she is smart, but never uses this ability to embarrass anyone; she is tolerant, regarding her friends' little temper, her sister's anger, and understanding her friends' helplessness. ; She is never humble or arrogant, never disdains to be a role that pleases anyone, always sticks to herself, and never bows to those so-called "pure bloods"; she loves and hates clearly, she has the courage to make a desperate move when she loves, and she has perseverance in spite of the weather; she has a cheerful personality, I think no one would dislike such a girl. As for the parents, I still can't stand them: Augustus' cold measured "love" and Walburga's love for the "Black family" reflect the manipulation and calculation of his own flesh and blood. He is indeed a scary, shrewd, heartless and mature person. But at least it was simple, so Sirius wouldn't have any unnecessary hopes or nostalgia when he left. . . [Crying] ㊗️Come on, author teacher, please update soon!

Such a great article, the emotions are very, very delicate, and everyone is vivid. Sylvie is really a child who matures too early, and her acting is her way of survival, but Sirius is the first time in her life that she does not want to act or act. Similarly, Sirius, who is always so rampant and reckless, gradually begins to think, think about himself, and think about everything under the influence of Sylvie. I think there is nothing that can better explain the relationship between them, so unique and irreplaceable. I really liked the way Sylvie faced the conflict between Sirius and Snape. She wrote her daily life with Snape to Sirius, so that Snape became a living person for Sirius instead of a symbol. Once Sirius realized that Snape was a person who was willing to use luck to make more potions and could make potions with his ears, even if he still hated him, it would be difficult for him to treat him like before. It feels like the emotions and thoughts of both parties are about to reach a breaking point. Sylvie has become accustomed to neutrality to protect herself through long-term performances and her father's teachings, but sooner or later she has to figure out that neutrality means not only not taking sides, but also giving up on both sides. Especially in the context of the parent generation, Sylvie is the only daughter of a pure-blood family. After all, she cannot be alone. Now that they are still young, they can not make decisions so quickly, but Sylvie still has to choose a side in the end. There is no perfect way. It is difficult for Sylvie to take into account pure blood, family, justice, and friends in this context. Of course Sylvie can still protect herself in her own way, but she must know which side she chooses when doing everything. The result that both sides want will only hurt everyone.

I really have to comment. I actually saw such a male and female protagonist with such upright views in HP fandom. They are constantly reflecting and growing. Each character is very well-shaped. The friendship between the girls is so good, and the friendship between girls and boys is also very good. When I saw the heroine said that she does not need knights, she needs people around her, I really can't help but comment. As for this female standard, girls have their own ontological values.

The author's writing is very good, it is really good and not just a pile of meaningless words to make it look good. The characters are well created and have many aspects. The heroine is so charming, and it's easy to sympathize with most of the characters in the article. The author also wrote the character Sirius, who is so difficult to create, very vividly and three-dimensionally, and all the emotions are gradual and unobtrusive. Overall, I think there are no surprises, and I highly recommend it. It was a bit unfriendly to me as the female protagonist. The heroine gave in too much, and the maturity gap between the two was so big that it made it a bit frustrating to read. It feels like two people are missing a big explosion instead of countless small conflicts piled together without resolution.

As an old hp person commenting here, it can be called a masterpiece of Sirius fanfic. The teacher's emotional line is particularly well grasped, the heroine's baby's meticulous observation, the girl's ups and downs of mood, and the advancement layer by layer. It is so exciting to watch. The friendship with Lily, because Sirius and the robber became friends who recognized and trusted each other from being unprepared, the heroine's baby's struggles and choices, and our sweet dog! ! ! ! I declare this to be my favorite watch of the year! ! ! ! ! Teacher, please update more, I really can't do it without your updates! ! !

Nice! It's not stupid, the teacher's writing is very good, and the sense of substitution is so strong that I feel depressed and entangled, and my chest is tight, but this is inevitable. Just like the sentence "Growing is as painful as cramps and peeling off bones", Sylvie and Sirius are both people with rebellious qualities, but they choose different ways. In the context of the serious opposition between the lion and the snake, conflicts are inevitable, but It is they who all work hard to maintain this relationship through the bridge of small wings. Sylvie is like a "perfect" tree that grows tightly in a mold. She needs but also hates this perfection. The need is because she has already formed a habit when she grew up like this. The disgust of this "perfection" makes her choose between interests, friends, and conscience, and even self-loathing. But she did not compromise blindly. From when she was a child, she secretly ate fruit tarts at banquets, to when she mustered up the courage to visit Black's old house alone to face the test of Walburga for Sirius and Little Wings, to when she was eleven years old, she responded to the blood discrimination students in the same school for the sake of her friends and her heart. Sylvie never stopped growing. Thank you to the teacher for creating such a flesh-and-blood Sylvie. I look forward to the plot in the future. Come on, teacher🤓