Tomb Raiding: Can We Turn Off the Motherly Aura?

The writing is very good, but I still don't like reading nanny stories. There are all kinds of temptations, the protagonist has no temper, and the system is like a human trafficker. It makes me feel so uncomfortable. The author's writing is really good👍

This book is quite good, and the author's writing is online. The protagonist is sane and sober. But sometimes I can't help but fall for others. There are many aspects of being a nanny, but after mentioning the tear mole too much, it made me think it was some kind of foreshadowing. I prefer nanny stories (?) The Male Mother is Guarding... As for the system, I don't think it's that bad, at least it's good for the protagonist. The protagonist is very good at taking care of people, the male mother is awesome, there are many descriptions that I think are ambiguous, and the author's writing style is really good.

The author doesn't need to repeat a plot, which is a bit boring. Then there is a section in the middle where Jie Yuchen and the protagonist go out to talk alone. It's a bit confusing, but the description is very touching and full of tension. The first tomb feels a little unclear, like a walk, there is nothing interesting, and it feels like a lot has been omitted.

What can I say? The first impression is definitely admiration. Let me briefly comment: The writing has a certain foundation, there are many emotional lines, and it looks pretty good. The quality is relatively high among tomb robbers. The first time I went to the tomb, I was so amazed. It is ambiguous and lingering, and there are many small ideas. The character design is very delicious. She is from a male mother. She has a cold and enchanting appearance. The emotional line is very clear. The description is also very convoluted. The golden sentences are remarkable and the logic is very good. Then there are some suggestions. I only saw the first time going to the tomb. The plot was a bit fleeting. The description was indeed very detailed and emotional, but the teacher may have wanted to write golden inscriptions or golden sentences (?). The structural description was the same template, which was a bit exhausted, and the repetition rate was a bit high. I really want the protagonist to know what they are thinking... To sum up, the writing is good, the emotional lines are rich, the main plot is relatively simple, the setting is attractive, and the words are sometimes repetitive. This author deserves a high score, just for the emotional description. I also like to dig into details. The detail control is really amazing. It can be condensed and used as copywriting. For example, isn't the blood on the fingertips also our red line? Finally, a disclaimer, no malice. I really praised the teacher. The only thing I regret is that I repeated this point in words. The feeling of AI is very strong. Some chapters were so strong that I almost got tired of it. When I first read it, dopamine hit my brain. Now that I have calmed down, I feel that I have a feeling of AI. It is difficult to comment on this.

The protagonist is a little cold, but feels very gentle and attentive, especially for the five protagonists. The emotional intelligence of the protagonist and the system feels a bit low. What his third uncle and his second uncle said makes people feel meaningful [laughing] The overall review is very good, but there are repetitions in the content [laughing], I hope the author will update it soon [laughing], but the author should also pay attention to rest and not be too tired [laughing]

Zhang Qiling and Fatty Wang both met when Wu Xie went to the tomb for the first time. Xie Yuchen met Wu Xie in Tamutuo. Hei Xiazi met Wu Xie in Tamutuo. How did Wu Xie get to know them before he went to the tomb for the first time?

By the way, this is my first review of a book. I think the author's characterization is actually very good, but I can slowly feel that the writing is improving. I am a person who is very impatient when reading books, and I may skim or skip reading. However, I found this setting very interesting at first. Although there was a little misunderstanding in the middle, I felt that the author described the characters a little too much at the beginning, such as the appearance of the protagonist. But after looking at it, I really think the author's description of the characters is really good. It just feels light. For example, when the protagonist is alone, the feeling of loneliness is very good to highlight the background of the protagonist. And I generally don't like to read tags. I just slowly understand what kind of person the protagonist is, and through some interactions with the protagonist, I understand an inner core of him, which is a very calm kind. Then because of Wu Xie and the other protagonists, they became cheerful. The author's description of the characters is really great, and the plot is also very good. I think this is a relatively light article, without strong emotions. However, the plot highlights this point, and is plain and a little sad. The protagonist also changes some of his own core through contact with some people. When Wu Xie sends a message to the protagonist, when the protagonist laughs, you can feel that he may gradually become cheerful and more integrated into the group. And when I read these articles, it really aroused my own emotions. Therefore, I think this book is actually quite good in terms of details. It is a little more surprising than most common heartthrobs on the market. It is a little different from other books on the market, but it also has the same feeling. I read this book in the early morning. It may be a little strange in terms of thinking. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.

This book is quite well written. The male mother is very fragrant. It is simply shocking and delicious. Ψ(￣∀￣)ΨThe writing is also online, but some words appear repeatedly and there are many adjectives, especially when going to the grave. I feel that it is not suitable for reading for a single-celled creature like me [crying]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! If you like to watch fishing, be sure to check it out, it's super super nice. I love you, the author. You wrote the characters so vividly. What's wrong? Do you want me to fall in love with the characters? I'm lying to you, actually I love you more🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

I also feel that the protagonist's tear mole appears too frequently in the article. I know that I want to describe the cold beauty of the protagonist, but there is no need to focus on describing the tear mole every time. When the protagonist is ambiguous with them, the protagonist's cold and charming character can be described. Daily interactions can reduce the description of the tear mole. ~~~ I especially like the black blind man. This ambiguity is strong and refreshing ~ Who doesn't love cool and seductive beauties~