Platinum and Emerald

The teacher's love for Harry was described very delicately and deeply. His love for him was indescribable. It's touching. There are other characters that are also well described. Harry grew up in a loving environment. He had many people who loved him, accompanied him, and protected him. It is no longer full of tragic colors. The savior, he no longer needs to be forced to grow up and be unable to take on responsibilities. At the same time, Harry's presence also cured Sri Lanka. It was his light that warmed him. The feelings between the two of them are mutual. (I think so [shy]) There are other characters that are very richly described. Judging from the first half (because I only watched a little bit), the pace of the entire plot is not too fast. It has the feeling of a steady stream. I really like [laughing] This book allows me to see another possible life of Harry. All in all, I loved this book! The above content is just some of my personal feelings. What's more, the author's writing is very good. The [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] I love so much should get better and better.

It's a very interesting article. Snape changes his identity and learns awkwardly. If he wants to raise a child, he is still Dehaven😎Platinum Bamboo Horse, hahaha. Oops, it looks good anyway. The author will give it a try and update it! ! ! ! ! !

I can see that the emotions are generally portrayed more delicately now. It's just that I really can't figure out whether Draco is one year old or three months old. Still one year and three months old. And, can I knock a dog bat here?

This book is like a beam of light that illuminates me from a poisonous woman back to when I was a child, revealing peace and warmth, a story of redemption and redemption through dual choices. I am very happy that our little savior has more from his family in this story - "love". Thank you, thank you for writing this story and sharing it in a book with everyone. I think even if I think about this story many years later, I will still be moved by it and shed tears. Thank you, and please don't forget your original intention and move forward.

Overall, the shortcomings are not hidden. The outstanding part is the emotional description. It reads like a master of depicting emotions, which is very touching. But the remaining details of the entire plot are very confusing and confusing. Comment section for specific questions. First, Draco's age repeatedly switched between one year old and three months in the early stage; Secondly, Sirius escaped from prison when Harry was more than one year old and found SS. SS had already discovered that Peter Pettigrew was in the hands of Percy Weasley at Hogwarts (this time was also wrong, Harry was one year old and Percy was not yet eleven), and Lupine planned to capture Pettigrew to clear Black's innocence. However, until Harry was eleven years old, it was suddenly announced that Lucius Malfoy had detected traces of Pettigrew, and he was in the hands of Ron Weasley. During this period, Black had been locked up in the old house for ten years and had been a fugitive. ? Excuse me? Third, Xiao Hao visited Hogwarts when he was six and a half years old, and found that behind the seven-locked door at the end of the corridor on the second floor was the Slytherin Chamber of Secrets (? I thought it was a private establishment). SS's psychological activities were puzzling. He said that when Xiao Ha was one year old, he exposed his Parseltongue in front of all the teachers and students of the Hogwarts Duel Club, and also said that Xiao Ha was only six years old now. ...?

It's really beautiful. Some words appear frequently, but it's not a big problem. The author will seriously consider writing a movie extra. Please [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] I believe it will be a high-quality work in the future [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

The author's writing is super good, especially the ending. The ending of each chapter is very sublime, which is also very helpful to my writing. Moreover, it is not very sweet, so people who don't like sweets can eat it without worry. Every chapter makes me cry for a while, especially for people like me who have a low tear point.

It's really beautiful. I cried when I read the first few chapters. TT It's really beautiful in the front, but when I saw the back, I really couldn't bear to tear up the couple.

The content is well written, but the timeline is not very good. Draco was only a month older than Harry, and Harry was only three months old when he was taken to Severus' house. Draco was only four months old at the time, but the teacher had written it. He is 8 months old, but he writes very well about relationships.

It's quite interesting, but the author is wondering if this is Deha or Hader. Can you mark it in the introduction? I really don't want to find out after watching Nijia for a long time that it's Nijia o(╥╥)o (My selfish intention is actually Deha)