Something's Wrong with My Huangting Scripture

The story is excellent and the pace is quite comfortable. The author really wants to write a good story, with vivid characters, Sister Shuanzi's stubbornness, the Su sisters' intelligence, Miss Gu's arrogance, Shan Nu's jade feet (ahem, cross out this sentence)... I hope these good girls will not let them down [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] The writing style is not much to say, but a few strokes can portray the artistic conception into my mind. In the past, I was used to reading many online articles quickly and opening and closing at large. This book is different. It allows you to slow down, read little by little, and understand the emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy of the characters, and the complexity and diversity of human nature... I hope all book friends will recommend the author. Now that the book has achieved results, we can continue to follow the story, a win-win situation (￣▽￣)[Laughing][Laughing]

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long, long time. The writing is good, I didn't get bored while reading it, the language is smooth and the expressions are concise and clear. The story is good and the characters are unique. Good article, but it suddenly disappeared, which is annoying!

It is natural and smooth, the writing is powerful, and the emotions are as gushing as the internal force. It is really a rare masterpiece this year, far comparable to the works of Jin Dynasty and ancient times, and close to "Kunlun" and "Canghai" [Like] [Like] [Like]

It can be seen that the author writes very carefully and makes people read slowly. The writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities and are full of flesh and blood. You can see that "the shadow is almost there", and there is a feeling that the story is beginning to unfold. If you can see this, you may feel the sentiment of "never give up, never give up"; or you may want to see the result of hard work from the bottom; or... There are many, but in short, you must have patience and be able to see through. The problem is coming, and the soul has passed through it, so the rhythm of the refreshing article is more suitable. What soul travel gives is the key and possibility of class crossing. Use past experience, experience, and insights to speed up the speed of unlocking the key, and increase the sense of satisfaction that you have never had before, cross class, enjoy grudges, and kill decisively. The little girl "Shuanzi" is written very personally, and her emotions change gradually. A bright spot for now. However, the character of the male protagonist is affectionate and thoughtful, but I don't know how to deal with it in a woman's eyes. The grinding and chirping has the meaning of losing one's soul, while the frivolous treatment loses the character of the male protagonist, and the procrastination makes it uncomfortable for readers to read. The attitude towards women is a very important part of this book. If it is not clear, reduce the number of words. If it is written clearly, it will stir your soul. All kinds of flowers pass by, but the fragrance of flowers may not be obvious. Careful. Not much to say, it is a good book with strong plasticity. I hope the author can keep writing it.

1. Zhenbeiguan is very interesting. I can give five stars to this volume alone. The plot is not procrastinating and the characters have distinct personalities. It looks more like a group portrait. It is excellent. 2. There are too many transitional chapters, and they are very bland. I can understand that it may be that completing a volume gives readers a cooling time, but there are not many Zhenbeiguan chapters. There is no need to complete so many transitional chapters. The main plot is pushed a bit slowly, and the writer has too many follow-up arrangements. But overall it looks great, and I like the style very much, but I don't like the transitional chapters. There are too many, and there's nothing wrong with the writing. I'm wondering if this might be the reason why the score isn't high even though it looks great? I looked through the comment section and didn't see a single negative review, so why is the rating not high? I think that's the reason. The writing is very good, but the plot rhythm may be a bit off. After Zhenbeiguan, three female protagonists were introduced directly, and the protagonist's strength did not make any progress. Now it seems that except for the transitional chapters, they are all excellent. Every character's behavior has a reason. There are no unnecessary actions or language. It can be five stars.

I have read the book for many years. 1St comment. The story is wonderful and the characters are very distinct. The pace is not so draggy. The writing style is a bit literate, but that doesn't stop it from being a good story. The character traits are also well described. Absolutely true review.

Very good, I can't describe it well. Many times when I read other novels describing the ancient imperial court, I feel it is quite childish. Although this book feels that the development is too slow, the description is really good, but when should I eat it?

The writing style is very simple and delicate, natural and smooth, the foreshadowing is like a gray line, not abrupt, not pretending to be mysterious, the plot is real and delicate, the characters are full of flesh and blood, the literary skills are comparable to those of the older generation of writers, and the book is strong. After reading Chapter 33, through the simple and unpretentious writing style and through the words and deeds of each vivid character in the article, I feel that I can resonate with the author's three views. Like [like] But why did you suddenly change your style later? Did you hire someone to ghostwrite it? From the 30th chapter onwards, the writing became too feminine. It changed from a deep, heavy, and sweeping historical and social novel to a romantic drama about me and me, immersed in love, love and little thoughts all day long.

The writing is good, the text is very interesting to read, and the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. Every character who appears is also very memorable and has a clear image. I recommend giving it a read. The author nb must finish it.

A unique style, a unique artistic conception, and the characters gradually become more fleshed out as the storyline develops. It is the first time I comment here because it is the first time I have seen a good book here.