I Deconstruct Magic at Hogwarts

There is no hairy brother in this book. I have no problem with reading the top three fics. They are definitely up to par. I feel that this book is a story about a computer prison guy who imagined that he had a perfect girlfriend in the HP world before he died, and also did his crazy research.

There is an original heroine, the relevant plot is very good, there are sugar and knives, which made me (airplane ears) (gasp) (jump on the computer desk) (knock over the water glass) (frightened and stressed by knocking over the water glass) (jumped up and knocked over the mirror and TV) (breathes at the fallen water glass and mirror) (Growling provocatively at the Haki) (Scratching the bleeding marks) (Slapping his paws to intimidate) (Arching) (Exploding hair) (Breathing and threatening) (Pulsing forward) (Falling) (Struggled hip-hop) (Breathing towards the ground) (Rolling) (Bite the data cable) (Growling viciously)

It seems not bad so far. If this continues, it will reach a 9-point level. I hope I don't become a nanny writer like most other fans. The appraisal is completed. There are a lot of unnecessary descriptions written by AI. The plot is extremely dragging, and the interesting parts have been squeezed out by a lot of water.

[Note] Currently the first hp fan worthy of my full score ①The original heroine has a complete emotional line, a full and vivid personality, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also written very realistically. ②The setting of the power system is very interesting. It is very important for readers to understand the source of the male protagonist's power. Most readers may only understand the power of the protagonist in the book by a name. What a wonderful point. ③The combat power is very balanced, and the protagonist is constantly growing. In this process, the protagonist's power is almost stuck on the line of overcoming the crisis. There is no situation of being crushed or abused. The feeling of being evenly matched is far more joyful than the traditional routine that comes every second. ④Original plot. The appearance of the protagonist and original heroine truly changes the plot. The plot really changes little by little because of the actions of the male and female protagonists. The key is that the process is natural, which is very good. It is far better than adding a bunch of other self-made world views to the HP world view or integrating world views from other works. The male and female protagonists are two real people in the HP world view.

The protagonist of this book has a very conspicuous characteristic - Zuo; his behavior perfectly fits an old saying - If you don't do Zuo, you will not die. Personally, I really, really, really hate this type of protagonist, one who thinks he is very rational and thinks everything is under his control, and then something goes wrong, and then he tries to figure it out. This would make him seem like an annoying tool to advance the plot rather than a flesh-and-blood human being. The first and last time I completely read a book with this type of protagonist was when I was in high school. The homophone of the protagonist's name is Waqi. I felt very sad when I saw it, but I couldn't describe the specific feeling. Until one day I saw a copywriting that went against the sky: I was like a stone that could see the roadside and rushed over to take a few bites, only to find out that it was chocolate. But this book also really has a plot that I am willing to continue reading, such as the emotional line with the heroine. It made me feel even worse, just like the book was indeed chocolate and I was indeed on the roadside. (Although I don't know why some book reviews are so disgusted with the emotional line) Considering that 4 stars on your Hongtongtong platform is considered a bad review, I will give it 5 stars here. By the way, I saw some people think it is AI because of the emphasis on markdown in the text. Let me make a statement: I don't think this novel is AI, at least most of it is not, or the author has revised it extremely carefully. Unless the author can snatch fable5 from a mysterious department of Lao Mi to play.

Among the AI ​​articles in Tomato that have a relatively high technique, it would be better if they listed a few points and reduced the narrative. Of course, the character of the protagonist is also well chosen, and it is more in line with the rigorous profile. In this way, the use of AI can be less prominent, and the specific plot is still relatively novel (Purely personal opinions, welcome to correct me, don't criticize if you don't like it)

A book with clear pros and cons. If you are interested in exploring the subject of magic, this is a good novel If you have higher requirements for the text content of the novel, you will be a little uncomfortable. The source of this discomfort is the AI ​​flavor. The way some characters speak makes people feel as if they are talking. Destruction brings sex. This is one of them Secondly, the contexts in some places seem to be connected, but in fact they are contradictory. For example, the attitude above and the attitude in the next one are completely different transitions, but if you think about it from a cause-and-effect perspective, the final result is reasonable. This is also one of the reasons why I think it is important to have an AI flavor. Overall it's a pretty good book. You can get a grain of food. Supplement: Regarding what some people have said about fan fiction, the score should not be too high. I think it requires logic. Because low scores and deliberately suppressing scores are completely different concepts. Some books have low scores, and some books have deliberately high scores. What I think is great about a lot of fanfics is that he does have some refreshing ideas. But in contrast, many writers of fan fiction are not professional writers, but passionate fans. I personally admire these cooks. Therefore, generally speaking, there will be no excessive demands on authors. After all, some of them look pretty good. But it is necessary to raise questions and shortcomings. After all, I still have a long way to go before King Akaishi, and my tolerance to toxicity is not particularly high. If a book is very creative, I sincerely hope that the author can write better and better.

OK, it's also super invincible and good-looking. The theory in it left me stunned one after another, but I really like this kind of research. It satisfied some of my doubts about the magical world when I was reading the book. The writing is also very good, and it's like looking at the magical world from the other side [Sending Hearts]

I only watched the movie and the novel when I was a kid, and I haven't read the novel at all. I have basically no impression of the relevant plot. It feels very good for non-fandom readers. There's no reason why the ratings are getting lower and lower It feels like you can have high-quality products at this level at the starting point The protagonist is a scientific researcher, and the research on Obscurus is equivalent to the feeling of excitement that the protagonist in an upgrade novel feels when he upgrades. The plot arrangement feels good. It may be that the setting of the original work itself is very good, so the protagonist is not completely in charge when arranging a series of things (I felt this way in the latest chapter) Come on, author

The article is overall very good, but the introduction of the heroine is a bit strange, but the rest of the story is pretty good.