
You Say I Tarnished Your First Love? Why Are You Crying Now That I've Quit?
说我玷污白月光?我离职你哭什么
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- 3mo ago
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172Chapters
1.4kReads
8.0Score
125Shelves
142Listens
70.5kReads · all time
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It's tied. I really like Wang Shu. His personality charm is really strong. Now I strongly support Xiao Zhou. I hope you two will fight hard. The one I dislike the most is Xiao Jiang. To be honest, I don't have a good impression of him at all. I can't even call his mouth poisonous, but he is specifically here to belittle Wang Shu. , If he doesn't grow up, I think he is completely unworthy of Wang Shu. The new Xiao Cen looks very mysterious. At present, I still support Xiao Zhou and Wang Shu being together the most, because only Xiao Zhou will care about Wang Shu and think about him. Otherwise, I feel that there is really no hope for the love that only one person gives. The author's writing is really great [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
Why don't you give up this ginger thing? It really annoys him. He talks endlessly about belittling Shen. This week is good, a cute big dog, or a young master. He's not the kind of ginger anyway.
It's very interesting, the teacher's writing is very good, and the characters created are also very distinct. Brother Shen should be a heartthrob. He is so charming that I fell in love with him. But, does Brother Shen really want to be with Xiao Jiang? I have been crying QAQ. Forget it, one star is given to Wangshu.
I really like Zhou Bei ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I don't want to be ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I really like Zhou Bei and Wangshu together. If Zhou Bei is forced to step down later I will really collapse. I don't dare to watch anymore. The plot and characters have collapsed. After the protagonist lost contact in the latest chapters, there is no role for Zhou at all when he comes back. The author only revealed the protagonist Shou in the latest chapters. So far, the protagonist Shou has been very annoying in all chapters. There is no crematorium strength. Zhou Bei's role has disappeared directly, and there is no racing game. After the follow-up, it was completely difficult to get back together. The progress between Zhou and the protagonist was obviously better than that of the protagonist, and the character design was also completely annoying. The protagonist was forced to offline by the author. I couldn't stand it for the past two days. The author suddenly stated that such an afterthought was completely unacceptable. They even kissed me. How could Zhou Bao, who is as big as me, be teased? ? ? Abandoning the book, abandoning the book, the only way to get back to this trap is to completely delete Zhou's role, and change the chapters before Jiang. So far, this book does not have a crematorium. Who has the patience to read the crematorium of a good person at the end, let alone Zhou, a person with such a good character and plot, to compare it with
Shu Shu is described very tenderly [sending my heart] [sending my heart], she is a super light person, knows a little bit about everything, is proficient in everything, she likes babies 🥰, baby, you are a piece of cake [top post] However, the description of Xiao Jiang really makes people gnash their teeth. I want to hit him 5 meters away and make him stay away from our Shu Shu [crazy]. As a young master, he doesn't even have any cultivation, so what's wrong with his bad mouth? [Angry] Delete some inner scenes for him, I beg you, big brother
Mainly based on emotion (personal opinion) Although Jiang is disgusting, the main reason is that he promotes the main plot and arouses emotions. Improving Jiang's story will only "whitewash" Wangshu. He is a kind person who is willing to fight and endure pure mental torture. There is no less salary or anything. Talking nonsense about others is very evil in order to highlight his possessiveness. Heart, it's hard to say. The protagonist is indifferent. What does the protagonist think? Don't tell me that you didn't see it and didn't know that Zhou Bei likes him. It's really heartbreaking that the important couple didn't deal with it. It's a classic regret literature. Come on ૧(●´৺`●)૭ Love is a great thing that explains everything.
Unlike most comments in the comment area, I don't support Zhou. There is no special reason. I just can't get the sense of cp between Zhou and the protagonist. Watching the various scenes between the two of them will not make my aunt laugh or feel happy and sweet. I am really not interested and can't move. But for others, there is actually no sense of cp... The protagonist is so good, I really feel like no one is worthy of him. I don't know if it's a character problem or a plot problem, but I just can't get the feeling of cp between him and the others [face covering] But the character of the protagonist is really good, and it's completely for the protagonist to watch [Thoughts]
The author feels that he wants to write that Jiang and Shen are official couples, but what we see now is Shen's efforts on the surface. Because Shen's status as a missionary is always decent, it is difficult to really let go of his heart. The closeness between him and Zhou has a sense of being alive, as if the cold world suddenly has a warm color, (leaving aside reality) ) But the novel actually wants to read more about Jiang's morbid love, the kind that makes you take one more look at it despite all the malice, and the kind that I can only choose one person to die for you in the whole world without hesitation. Two people who don't know how to love love each other wrongly, because of love's pain, because of love's growth, and finally because of love's happiness. Love is a moment outside the order. Whoever can make Shen truly lose control will be the official match. If the author takes Jiang's side, he still needs to write more about his perspective. Could it be that the six years of companionship were only Shen Zhen's extreme dedication? Wouldn't Jiang love clumsily without companionship? If not, then just pretend I didn't say it [making faces] (I've already seen the updated part of the article, I hope some friends will give it a kick when it's finished)
In terms of writing, I feel that the author is pretty good, and it feels like he is narrating the story eloquently. As for the plot, I hope the author can be kinder to Wang Shu. He has suffered so much, gone through so many worlds of infinite flow and doomsday bloodshed and sacrifice, and now he has finally reached a peaceful world. I hope he can reap his own happiness. Xiao Jiang has been devalued in the name of being in love without knowing it. , Mocking Wangshu, it's really sad to see, that is, Wangshu's core is strong, but damage is damage, and it cannot be taken for granted because of the strong endurance of the recipient. It would really feel chilling for a normal person to be treated like this. If you don't say you like it, let's just say that a normal friend has no regrets about him and he shouldn't be treated like this after six years of living together like this. At present, it seems that Zhou Bei is still very sincere. According to Wang Shu's character, he will not change his promise easily. I hope the two of them can do well and avoid plot killing.
I like it, Wang Shu's character is well developed, but I really don't like Jiang. Even if he comes clean later, I still prefer Xiao Zhou Na [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]