Trait: I Claim the Beloved White Moonlight Passed Down in the Family!

Haokan, the harmonious harem, and the wives don't have any naughty Shura fields. The shortcoming is that the language logic is confusing in some places, and the author should investigate it carefully. For example, in Chapter 46, I didn't realize whether Yan Xu was the elder brother or Yan Fuzi was the elder brother. Original summary: "I have a brother named Yan Xu." "He is very good to me. Although he is younger than me, he is always like an elder brother, taking care of me and protecting me." (It's not pigeons, what does that mean? You two brothers from the Yan family are just sitting here talking about their own affairs?)

It looks very comfortable, and every step is down to earth. Withdrawing the brothers, the collapse of combat power is so miserable. The bonuses are multiplied and multiplied at every turn. It looks lonely.

The plot is smooth and refreshing, and the golden finger entry system is step-by-step. The male protagonist is supposed to be a true man, he must avenge his revenge, he does not delay in accepting a daughter, and he is pushed back by his grandfather's childhood sweetheart. What kind of fairy tale is this? Love it, love it!

Irregular Book Review Issue 54: Good Grass Evaluation: Advantages: The early writing is very good, the overall content is also very good, there are some exciting points, and the plot is reasonable and not obtrusive. Overall, it is a harem invincible novel worth reading. Disadvantages: Personally speaking, there was a bit of a drama later on with Morgana, and the plot where the protagonist's master broke through felt a bit weird. However, there are no major poisonous points overall. It is absolutely reasonable to give a good grass. It is worth a look.

The novel is well written overall, and there are no major problems. The male protagonist tends to be calm and steady and speaks very little, but his character is still good. Then the male protagonist's system is getting stronger and stronger. The things given in the early stage are relatively weak and will become stronger in the later period. Then I will talk about some problems. The author must deal with the problems between the master and the male protagonist's grandfather later, otherwise the book will be ugly. Came out, and there is another personal reason why I deducted one star from this book. I personally don't like Duo Z Duo Fu very much. First of all, it steals the role of the male and female protagonists, and then it gives the man an extra weakness. It is not a dark kind of story where the male protagonist puts himself as the absolute center and is selfish. Of course, the author will write about it later. I haven't written it yet. What do you think about changing it to Duo Wives and Duo Fu? Why will the child's certain cultivation be passed on to the male protagonist? It's okay to change to a wife, and we can make progress together without being a hindrance. In the later stage, Shenyin will have less worries. What do you think, author? Of course, this is just my personal reason. Overall, this novel is still very well written. I just raise my own questions and some opinions and suggestions.

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The whole book is brilliantly written, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. The plot in the first hundred chapters is dull and lacks passionate fighting scenes. But after entering the two hundred chapters, the protagonist shows his sharpness and dominates the Eastern Region, and the atmosphere and structure are immediately full. Different from the cliche settings of some online novels where the protagonist reaches the top and talks empty talk without needing the awe of others and continues to get along as usual, in this book the bonds between the characters are gradual and natural, the friendship between family and friends is natural and three-dimensional, and the characters are all lifelike. There are very few deliberately pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes in the book, and the plot when it comes to settling disputes is neat and tidy, without being procrastinating and filling in water, or stretching out to make up for the word count. Two small suggestions: First, the average daily updates are too few. It only took me ten hours to catch up on the current series. I hope the author will update more. Second, the two female majors, Luo and Shao, are far behind in their cultivation. I look forward to improving their cultivation in the future and narrowing the gap in strength. An overall excellent work, I wish the author smooth creation and steady serialization!

Yes, it's a rare piece of food. Although it's just a secret, the protagonist takes action when it's time to take action. At the same time, there are many female protagonists to make up for the boring daily life.

Very good, except for the shortcomings of the protagonist The plot is a bit witty

It's pretty good. There's no nonsense. It's very cautious and sophisticated. The key is that when there are no conflicts, it can write about daily life quite well. There are many girls, and I have had relationships with girls several times by chance. It can be called a soft-hearted family [laughter]