Honkai: Star Rail: My Alternate-Timeline Self Is Exposed on the Sky Screen

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good. たった1きりのキミのExistent Just by your existence alone いつかのすべてえるだろう One day it will change the whole world ここにあるものはHope? Desperate? What remains here is hope or despair? Round Zero Hajime. Round Zero battle has begun Know the crime The guilt of ignorance, the trap of knowing everything Move the けなくなるfront Take action before you can't move anymore wind roll られたカード Cards flying in the wind Occupy うようにLaugh う A silent sneer like divination Mysterious It is impossible not to be confused, even so we have to look for tomorrow めくるめく Fortune unpredictable fate れそうなに In an era on the verge of collapse Cut りはキミの… The real trump card is in your heart... Research and study Turn into courage honed to the extreme BLADE BRAVE BLADE BRAVE Arashi has gone to the place where the coming has come Where the storm dissipates and the sun comes もわらないほど やかでも… Even though everything remains as before and calm as usual... もChronometerさえmeansをholdたない Maps and clocks are meaningless here Round Zero きした. Round Zero takes a step forward He がjinしたとして わらないもの No matter how the times advance, the things that will never change your mind Only shout out the words you cherish in your mind れそうなを るのはWho is なの? Who should protect the future that is on the verge of destruction? Ignore it Don't turn a blind eye, even if you feel confused, just find yourself in the end こののMystery The mysteries of this world When the solution is clear when the truth is revealed Who is it? Everyone will receive a message to find their most important answers Know the crime The guilt of ignorance, the trap of knowing everything Move the けなくなるfront Take action before you can't move anymore wind roll られたカード Cards flying in the wind Occupy うようにLaugh う A silent sneer like divination Mysterious It is impossible not to be confused, even so we have to look for tomorrow めくるめく Fortune unpredictable fate れそうなに In an era on the verge of collapse Cut りはキミの… The real trump card is in your heart... Research and study Turn into courage honed to the extreme BLADE BRAVE BLADE BRAVE BLADE BRAVE BLADE

It is considered higher than the average level of Tomato. There is no way. Tomato is the gold rush in environmental history. The writing style has surpassed that of most authors. It is just because it is the first time to write. There are some loopholes in the writing. It is harmless. It is judged to be edible. You can use a little bit of wisdom, but don't bring too much. In fact, I personally think that writing IF lines is not necessarily necessary. It must be written around the protagonist. A few other people's If lines in the middle are more convincing. Including the protagonist's figure in other people's if lines will have a better effect. The current situation is that the first if line is mainly to give the protagonist the authority and qualifications to communicate with those big people in the world, so that the protagonist has the right to speak. Looking at it later, this book can already be said to be a disaster relief document.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. , But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

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This is a very innovative book, different from imitations or cliche plots where the horse falls behind the scenes. So far, there aren't many bad points in my reading, except for the emotional drama, which is still too far-fetched. The if-line writing feels dispensable, but without the emotional drama, the reality would be a lot less fun. It's not reality anyway, so it's not just fiction. The focus should be on follow-up development. After all, the if line affects reality, the protagonist's combat power and other issues. I personally think that when the light curtain ends, don't let the protagonist pull it too fast. For example, you can use Dihua + Manifestation in front of others (trial). If the if line is more than 10%, I won't eat beef. And now that there are so many explosions, it feels weird to return to reality and become a meat and potatoes.

The plot is very novel, but the control of combat power is a big problem (I personally think there is still a big gap between the Order and the ordinary Fate Walker, just like the first volume in the Black Tower space, the strengthened Doomsday Beast may reach the so-called Pseudo Order, but the Dragon Pill will definitely not reach it). I recommend the author to search the Internet for character plot intensity charts, and the if line can not be connected to the main line, and use some planetary civilizations on the background board to extend it, and look more at the think tanks in the train. The text of the relic and various events in the simulated universe are all very good starting points. The protagonist can become a chaos doctor, a fictional historian, etc., And is not limited to the plot. After all, they are all if lines.

Not bad. One of the main problems is the emotional line. They have never experienced the if-line plot in the main line. They are moved at most, but it should not be to the point of inducing feelings. After that, it depends on how the author writes some questions. First of all, it is a way to improve the protagonist's combat power. If it is a sky screen, it feels not suitable to have the same ability as the if line. The elbow and elbow eyes will definitely not let the protagonist go. It is hard to say the fairy boat. The destruction will definitely require the protagonist to be eliminated unless the Star God intervenes. Furthermore, in terms of the main line, there is too little, and some interspersed content promotes the main line too slowly. Everyone knew that Laigushi was going to destroy Bodhisattva and even implicate the universe. They were all indifferent. They just talked about it, but there must be some practical performance. Finally, the canopy chapter does give too much, but the actual content of one chapter is not enough. If you can't control the number of chapters, can you try combining two chapters of Sky Curtain into one?

"Save up enough money for your mother's retirement and then stop." "The way to extend your life is to control the second ghost?" "I'm Ghost Eye Yang Jian, and I'm officially online now." "There are three ghosts in my body. If I want to, I can destroy a city in an instant." "Who am I? Me? I, I am Yang Jian!" "I said, all the supernatural things that are blocking me in front of me will disappear." "I am Yang Jian, the person in charge of Dachang City. I am catching ghosts. After tonight, there will be no more ghosts here." "I'm here to tell you that there is still hope in this world. Bet everything on me. I will shoulder everything and end the supernatural era with my own hands." "When the supernatural begins to revive, evil ghosts appear again, and all sentient beings suffer, you will appear in the world to drive out ghosts and eliminate evil, and save people and promote good deeds."

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